i reckon you should record this over a different temp beat, the lyrics can flow i just think the drums are too slow on this track to fit the rhythm of the lyrics, but if you did it over a slightly faster beat it could flow right
@DeleteTheEIite that's fine. this was actually my very first track i ever recorded so i have improved vastly since then. look up "The Agen-C Wargods" here on YT and click the first link and you will see the vast difference.
Yeah there are many monotonous but dope mc's, especially from the west (where im guessing ur from)
check out a track called "For her Souly, Slowly, Solely" by H.I.M.N.L. i think its up on youtube, but has been misnamed with the title of his crew Darleaf insted of H.I.M.N.L.
his abstract poetry is untouchable, shame he gets such little props :(
@DeleteTheEIite thanks for the suggestion, and haha, yeah, i'm from Los Angeles. like i said though, check out "Wargods". it is WAAAAAY different and my shit isn't monotonous anymore. if you like it, i suggest you stay ready for my upcoming LP "Modus Operandi". i am releasing it under the moniker of Agent X.
lol! you are the second person to ask that from the group! the name is Norwegian. my father is part Norwegian, however i have more Hungarian blood (my mother's side). thanks!
you remember Trigger The Soldier? one of the guys that produced for him, this guy New Millenium, produced it for me. i gave him some samples from John Coltrane's "A Love Supreme" and he did his thing.
Really need to read the prose version (not the singed one) where can I find it?(about the song: nice, but I like lyrics the most "Opinions are like voices, we all have a different kind") (sorry for my english)
the lyrics took me over a month to write. possibly even two months or more. i don't quite remeber exactly how long it was, but it was quite a while. i kept writing and revising it as that is truly what the writing process is about. it is meant to be a poem more so than song lyrics so i had to perfect it.
i see. im trying to write this song of my own and i want it to be perfect as well thats why i asked, coz im taking my time with it and i was just wondering how long it usually takes to write a song. im also trying to figure out the structure etc.
ah. in that case, you need to know that there is a difference betweeen writing good song lyrics and poetry. are you trying to write a poem or song lyrics? there are a lot more dimensions in poetry than there are in song lyrics. with lyrics it is all about sitting down and listening to the beat you are writing to and hearing what the beat wants to be written to it. this type of writing doesn't take a lot of time, but it takes a whole lot of feeling...
poetry requires you to detach yourself from the music. you need to step away and let the poetry make a rhythm of it's own. as TS Eliot said (and i quoted it in my sig on the site) "good poetry communicates before it is understood." you may not understand a poem off the bat, but it will still tell you a story just by the very rhythm it gives off. you can create that by focusing on meter (which i'd be glad to explain in a PM) and the nature of the very words you use. there are many aspects to it.
the reason i asked is that, while listening to the flow, it seemed that you might have had had another type (or piece) of music in mind (at first)... i don't know.
nope. i think it's just the fact that i wrote it as a standalone poem and not a track, even though it is in 16 bars. i didn't have a beat in my head when i wrote the lyrics. i was trying to avoid that so it would work as both.
i reckon you should record this over a different temp beat, the lyrics can flow i just think the drums are too slow on this track to fit the rhythm of the lyrics, but if you did it over a slightly faster beat it could flow right
siwooot 1 year ago
@siwooot lol idk man, i'd probably have to rewrite it and everything too haha. idk if i'm even really feeling the concept anymore lol
eboyd32 1 year ago
wordup yo
TheUnitedDivision 1 year ago
Im sorry but your flow is wack son. So is your voice its very monotonous and boring. Lyrics a bit better but still average
2 stars
DeleteTheEIite 1 year ago
@DeleteTheEIite that's fine. this was actually my very first track i ever recorded so i have improved vastly since then. look up "The Agen-C Wargods" here on YT and click the first link and you will see the vast difference.
eboyd32 1 year ago
@DeleteTheEIite btw, Guru = dope + monotonous :D
eboyd32 1 year ago
Yeah there are many monotonous but dope mc's, especially from the west (where im guessing ur from)
check out a track called "For her Souly, Slowly, Solely" by H.I.M.N.L. i think its up on youtube, but has been misnamed with the title of his crew Darleaf insted of H.I.M.N.L.
his abstract poetry is untouchable, shame he gets such little props :(
DeleteTheEIite 1 year ago
@DeleteTheEIite thanks for the suggestion, and haha, yeah, i'm from Los Angeles. like i said though, check out "Wargods". it is WAAAAAY different and my shit isn't monotonous anymore. if you like it, i suggest you stay ready for my upcoming LP "Modus Operandi". i am releasing it under the moniker of Agent X.
eboyd32 1 year ago
@DeleteTheElite
PLEASE do so. Wargods is pure... Crazyness. It's a vast improvement, as Boyd said.
tnizzle53 1 year ago
pretty sick mate
chris45322345 2 years ago
Dope as fuck bro. Stay up.
SpikeDawgProductions 2 years ago
thanks man. glad you liked it. i have more music on my channel too. you may like "They Called Him 'Seek'" as well.
eboyd32 2 years ago
i'll check it out man. BTW i'm on your realhiphopforever forum, tnizzle told me bout it.
SpikeDawgProductions 2 years ago
cool. glad to know, are you SPIK3?
eboyd32 2 years ago
Yeah.
SpikeDawgProductions 2 years ago
this deserves a better rating
LlLWayneSucks 2 years ago
Sick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MegaG15 2 years ago
for some reason this joint reminds me of nujabes...and shing2 if yall herd of it...
the rhyme style reminds me of battle cry haha
good stuff tho
bboystealth88 2 years ago
nice lyrics dere homie its nice
officialgsolja 3 years ago
Quality! You done good dis time Erik. More than good. Uhm are u european? Wit a name like dat, u can't be all American..
HipHop4alivin 3 years ago
lol! you are the second person to ask that from the group! the name is Norwegian. my father is part Norwegian, however i have more Hungarian blood (my mother's side). thanks!
eboyd32 3 years ago
Real good i LOVE IT!!
keep up the good work
SkateBritain 3 years ago
nice tune, whered you get the background music from?
sodr2 3 years ago
you remember Trigger The Soldier? one of the guys that produced for him, this guy New Millenium, produced it for me. i gave him some samples from John Coltrane's "A Love Supreme" and he did his thing.
eboyd32 3 years ago
daaamn, john coltrane? man thats one SICK producer!! i gotta check out some of his other stuff..
sodr2 3 years ago
lol! Coltrane is a jazz GOD, not a producer! he was a sax player/composer. he died in the 60's.
eboyd32 3 years ago
lol John Coltrane a producer?
joshgibson 3 years ago
.........i know who john coltrane is......i just worded that badly
sodr2 3 years ago
mann yo songs kick ass
dellbly 3 years ago
Excellent artistic lyrically inclined presentation. Stay Up!!
ezquniverse 3 years ago
lovely tune and amazing slide show thanks for posting this
persecutednana 3 years ago
thank you very much.
eboyd32 3 years ago
Really need to read the prose version (not the singed one) where can I find it?(about the song: nice, but I like lyrics the most "Opinions are like voices, we all have a different kind") (sorry for my english)
cinajunior 3 years ago
email me a copy erik
blaquenoise 3 years ago
nice stuff Erik nice :) so glad you remastered it also, the track has a great message
Troj27 3 years ago
thanks! glad you liked it!
eboyd32 3 years ago
I liked it! You had some nice pictures in there. Thankyou:)
RabbitWonderful 3 years ago
Im abit late on comenting but this is dope as shit! , Common would realy do this indeed
AceKat00o 3 years ago
i don't think this style of poetry is his style. he's more slam poetry type. this is like written, abstract poetry, but rapped. lol!
eboyd32 3 years ago
Damn E this sh*t is dope Im kind of late on it but nice work man 5*****
elidagod 3 years ago
thanks. send it to people. i want more views!
eboyd32 3 years ago
man this is very hot , man sounds like sumthin my nigga common sense would do
Mikedaboss123 3 years ago
thanks!
eboyd32 3 years ago
hey Eboyd why dont u put this avaidable 4 download on your myspace...i really would like 2 have this track
Makadocious88 3 years ago
done.
eboyd32 3 years ago
thnx
Makadocious88 3 years ago
VERY GOOD HIP HOP.5*****
lolomaris 3 years ago
thanks. too bad you are one of the few. even "real" dudes nowadays are too wrapped up in swagger to realize good laid back music with deep lyrics.
eboyd32 3 years ago
werd!!!!!!!!!!!!
Makadocious88 3 years ago
the one with trigg on the hook was dope but ure hook is better...good job
Makadocious88 3 years ago
thanks man.
eboyd32 3 years ago
how long did take to write?
siwooot 3 years ago
the lyrics took me over a month to write. possibly even two months or more. i don't quite remeber exactly how long it was, but it was quite a while. i kept writing and revising it as that is truly what the writing process is about. it is meant to be a poem more so than song lyrics so i had to perfect it.
eboyd32 3 years ago
i see. im trying to write this song of my own and i want it to be perfect as well thats why i asked, coz im taking my time with it and i was just wondering how long it usually takes to write a song. im also trying to figure out the structure etc.
siwooot 3 years ago
ah. in that case, you need to know that there is a difference betweeen writing good song lyrics and poetry. are you trying to write a poem or song lyrics? there are a lot more dimensions in poetry than there are in song lyrics. with lyrics it is all about sitting down and listening to the beat you are writing to and hearing what the beat wants to be written to it. this type of writing doesn't take a lot of time, but it takes a whole lot of feeling...
eboyd32 3 years ago
poetry requires you to detach yourself from the music. you need to step away and let the poetry make a rhythm of it's own. as TS Eliot said (and i quoted it in my sig on the site) "good poetry communicates before it is understood." you may not understand a poem off the bat, but it will still tell you a story just by the very rhythm it gives off. you can create that by focusing on meter (which i'd be glad to explain in a PM) and the nature of the very words you use. there are many aspects to it.
eboyd32 3 years ago
Yo Erick this is dope man
Good lookin on this one
elbunker222 3 years ago
the reason i asked is that, while listening to the flow, it seemed that you might have had had another type (or piece) of music in mind (at first)... i don't know.
either way it's a seasoned piece of work, doc.
n2cora 3 years ago
nope. i think it's just the fact that i wrote it as a standalone poem and not a track, even though it is in 16 bars. i didn't have a beat in my head when i wrote the lyrics. i was trying to avoid that so it would work as both.
eboyd32 3 years ago
cool! really cool! where did you get the music to this?
n2cora 3 years ago
awesome man. great beat too.
siwooot 3 years ago
Congrats mate that's realy somethin, i was a bit blown away by the quality to be honest so maximum respect to ya
AllanPUK9 3 years ago
thanks bro!
eboyd32 3 years ago
Real nice fam!!..
AbbottSupreme 3 years ago
not bad...only 4 stars because I'm missing some scratch :P
bazzefaszom 3 years ago
lol! yeah, i feel you on that! i felt it could use some cuts too!!! i'm just getting used to making music though.
eboyd32 3 years ago
Ill shit~
Lostaries 3 years ago
NICE
Nawledge1 3 years ago
This is really sick. Great job E
SuperGavin3000 3 years ago
Nice...
Melhex 3 years ago
damn eboyd this track is tight...congratz 4 this man
Makadocious88 3 years ago
realest real...end of story
LoukAdz 3 years ago
what a difference!
dope!!
Mevr328 3 years ago
thanks. i told you guys i'd get it redone. i sound like a different person, don't i? lol! i think i sounded like a little kid in the other one.
eboyd32 3 years ago
DOPE!!!
StrykahTheSoldier 3 years ago
thanks. it means a lot to me.
eboyd32 3 years ago