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  • i reckon you should record this over a different temp beat, the lyrics can flow i just think the drums are too slow on this track to fit the rhythm of the lyrics, but if you did it over a slightly faster beat it could flow right

  • @siwooot lol idk man, i'd probably have to rewrite it and everything too haha. idk if i'm even really feeling the concept anymore lol

  • wordup yo

  • Im sorry but your flow is wack son. So is your voice its very monotonous and boring. Lyrics a bit better but still average

    2 stars

  • @DeleteTheEIite that's fine. this was actually my very first track i ever recorded so i have improved vastly since then. look up "The Agen-C Wargods" here on YT and click the first link and you will see the vast difference.

  • @DeleteTheEIite btw, Guru = dope + monotonous :D

  • Yeah there are many monotonous but dope mc's, especially from the west (where im guessing ur from)

    check out a track called "For her Souly, Slowly, Solely" by H.I.M.N.L. i think its up on youtube, but has been misnamed with the title of his crew Darleaf insted of H.I.M.N.L.

    his abstract poetry is untouchable, shame he gets such little props :(

  • @DeleteTheEIite thanks for the suggestion, and haha, yeah, i'm from Los Angeles. like i said though, check out "Wargods". it is WAAAAAY different and my shit isn't monotonous anymore. if you like it, i suggest you stay ready for my upcoming LP "Modus Operandi". i am releasing it under the moniker of Agent X.

  • @DeleteTheElite

    PLEASE do so. Wargods is pure... Crazyness. It's a vast improvement, as Boyd said.

  • pretty sick mate

  • Dope as fuck bro. Stay up.

  • thanks man. glad you liked it. i have more music on my channel too. you may like "They Called Him 'Seek'" as well.

  • i'll check it out man. BTW i'm on your realhiphopforever forum, tnizzle told me bout it.

  • cool. glad to know, are you SPIK3?

  • Yeah.

  • this deserves a better rating

  • Sick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • for some reason this joint reminds me of nujabes...and shing2 if yall herd of it...

    the rhyme style reminds me of battle cry haha

    good stuff tho

  • nice lyrics dere homie its nice

  • Quality! You done good dis time Erik. More than good. Uhm are u european? Wit a name like dat, u can't be all American..

  • lol! you are the second person to ask that from the group! the name is Norwegian. my father is part Norwegian, however i have more Hungarian blood (my mother's side). thanks!

  • Real good i LOVE IT!!

    keep up the good work

  • nice tune, whered you get the background music from?

  • you remember Trigger The Soldier? one of the guys that produced for him, this guy New Millenium, produced it for me. i gave him some samples from John Coltrane's "A Love Supreme" and he did his thing.

  • daaamn, john coltrane? man thats one SICK producer!! i gotta check out some of his other stuff..

  • lol! Coltrane is a jazz GOD, not a producer! he was a sax player/composer. he died in the 60's.

  • lol John Coltrane a producer?

  • .........i know who john coltrane is......i just worded that badly

  • mann yo songs kick ass

  • Excellent artistic lyrically inclined presentation. Stay Up!!

  • lovely tune and amazing slide show thanks for posting this

  • thank you very much.

  • Really need to read the prose version (not the singed one) where can I find it?(about the song: nice, but I like lyrics the most "Opinions are like voices, we all have a different kind") (sorry for my english)

  • email me a copy erik

  • nice stuff Erik nice :) so glad you remastered it also, the track has a great message

  • thanks! glad you liked it!

  • I liked it! You had some nice pictures in there. Thankyou:)

  • Im abit late on comenting but this is dope as shit! , Common would realy do this indeed

  • i don't think this style of poetry is his style. he's more slam poetry type. this is like written, abstract poetry, but rapped. lol!

  • Damn E this sh*t is dope Im kind of late on it but nice work man 5*****

  • thanks. send it to people. i want more views!

  • man this is very hot , man sounds like sumthin my nigga common sense would do

  • thanks!

  • hey Eboyd why dont u put this avaidable 4 download on your myspace...i really would like 2 have this track

  • done.

  • thnx

  • VERY GOOD HIP HOP.5*****

  • thanks. too bad you are one of the few. even "real" dudes nowadays are too wrapped up in swagger to realize good laid back music with deep lyrics.

  • werd!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • the one with trigg on the hook was dope but ure hook is better...good job

  • thanks man.

  • how long did take to write?

  • the lyrics took me over a month to write. possibly even two months or more. i don't quite remeber exactly how long it was, but it was quite a while. i kept writing and revising it as that is truly what the writing process is about. it is meant to be a poem more so than song lyrics so i had to perfect it.

  • i see. im trying to write this song of my own and i want it to be perfect as well thats why i asked, coz im taking my time with it and i was just wondering how long it usually takes to write a song. im also trying to figure out the structure etc.

  • ah. in that case, you need to know that there is a difference betweeen writing good song lyrics and poetry. are you trying to write a poem or song lyrics? there are a lot more dimensions in poetry than there are in song lyrics. with lyrics it is all about sitting down and listening to the beat you are writing to and hearing what the beat wants to be written to it. this type of writing doesn't take a lot of time, but it takes a whole lot of feeling...

  • poetry requires you to detach yourself from the music. you need to step away and let the poetry make a rhythm of it's own. as TS Eliot said (and i quoted it in my sig on the site) "good poetry communicates before it is understood." you may not understand a poem off the bat, but it will still tell you a story just by the very rhythm it gives off. you can create that by focusing on meter (which i'd be glad to explain in a PM) and the nature of the very words you use. there are many aspects to it.

  • Yo Erick this is dope man

    Good lookin on this one

  • the reason i asked is that, while listening to the flow, it seemed that you might have had had another type (or piece) of music in mind (at first)... i don't know.

    either way it's a seasoned piece of work, doc.

  • nope. i think it's just the fact that i wrote it as a standalone poem and not a track, even though it is in 16 bars. i didn't have a beat in my head when i wrote the lyrics. i was trying to avoid that so it would work as both.

  • cool! really cool! where did you get the music to this?

  • awesome man. great beat too.

  • Congrats mate that's realy somethin, i was a bit blown away by the quality to be honest so maximum respect to ya

  • thanks bro!

  • Real nice fam!!..

  • not bad...only 4 stars because I'm missing some scratch :P

  • lol! yeah, i feel you on that! i felt it could use some cuts too!!! i'm just getting used to making music though.

  • Ill shit~

  • NICE

  • This is really sick. Great job E

  • Nice...

  • damn eboyd this track is tight...congratz 4 this man

  • realest real...end of story

  • what a difference!

    dope!!

  • thanks. i told you guys i'd get it redone. i sound like a different person, don't i? lol! i think i sounded like a little kid in the other one.

  • DOPE!!!

  • thanks. it means a lot to me.

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