You really need to work on your audio transitions. Like the sad music just stopped then cut to bond-esque music, you need to fade them in. If you have final cut use the audio transitions. try to get final cut, I'm sure someone on bfff and give it to you.
Use a boom mic, but I think you did, don't rely on the built in mic.
You crossed the line (180° rule) when the guy said "...chance to get your revenge"
yes looking great so far! loved when christie was shot (of course, not BECAUSE she was shot) just that it was very well filmed, emotionally. look forward to the rest!
who's the girl at the start?
btw im gonna watch all of these :)
laughatyou1 1 year ago
@laughatyou1 Kayleigh-Jake's girlfriend.
trettfilms 1 year ago
Nice work by all involved!
ufuckfacesonofabitch 1 year ago
Quite Good man!
I have notes:
When he embraces his GF the camera is too shakey.
You really need to work on your audio transitions. Like the sad music just stopped then cut to bond-esque music, you need to fade them in. If you have final cut use the audio transitions. try to get final cut, I'm sure someone on bfff and give it to you.
Use a boom mic, but I think you did, don't rely on the built in mic.
You crossed the line (180° rule) when the guy said "...chance to get your revenge"
Andrewz05 2 years ago
This film is soo good, it makes me want to slaugher orphans =D
CountxPeter 2 years ago
Nice work Josh. DOPE opening credits too.
ajxm 2 years ago
when it all got stretched i was thrown but it fixes itself soon enough.
SnoocheeBoochees 2 years ago
yes looking great so far! loved when christie was shot (of course, not BECAUSE she was shot) just that it was very well filmed, emotionally. look forward to the rest!
AmbroseProductions 2 years ago
...Epic.
:D
RobtimusPrime09 2 years ago
"Come with me Max" Guy (Tomas) has very distracting eyes... But still good acting :D
CultistOfTheBeyond 2 years ago
very compelling. I love the various color pallets you've presented. Your camera work is also really interesting. Nice job guys.
RDJim 2 years ago