Fernando's 2nd Persuasive Speech!

[asukapg]

Your face showed your audience great confidence! I mean, without your steps. I think you made great eye contact, thats why you looked having good confidence. You just need to care about your stepping.

Your speech was logical and funny.

Besides, I liked your poses. You used your speaking time well, and your speaking speed and volume were also good enough to understand.

Great job!

[MAMI031027]

Ola, Fernando! In your presentation, you always moved and your hands were busy but you always smiled and looked confident. I think your smile was natural and cute.k You looked around everyone and your voice was loud enough to listen. Your presentation was well organized and you used a good level vocabulary. Your pronunciation was clear and easy to understand. I think you have no portuguese accent and intonation. You did well!!!

[rgedda11]

You had enough eye contact and some gestures impressed. You spoke loudly and not fast so it was good to listen and understand. You didn't check your cue cards a lot. I think it was only once. It was also awesome.

However, your hands were not stable. You put your hands out and grabbed them too much. You stepped around you unnaturally. I think it made you nervous. Practice more and feel free. Excellent job nando!

[10Tomomi]

You looked confident and spoke convincingly and naturally.

Sometimes I felt like you moved restlessly because of your foot step and hands grabbed.

However you talked to us really powerfully and expressed your emotion with your facial expression and intonation, so it was easy to understand and also was persuasive.

[nandocanada1]

I had a good knowledge about the topic so it seemed really confident..

I did a lot of grammar mistakes and some pronunciation mistakes.

In the begining I was a little bit nervous because I made a wrong hook.

so I needed to improvise how to go back to my intruduction.

But I had a good eye contact and made gestures with my hands to avoid playing with them.

Sometimes I spoke a little bit fast so it could prejudice the compreention of my speech.