most of the black girls seem to repeat the same messages, stress; not having respect, against sex, and just anger toward life i think if most black females focus on themselves then they will eliminate their worries
I have been watching poetry slamming videos for a class, and at first I was a little frustrated that all I saw was black people talking about the hood and such. But after a few videos, I realized that there is something to that. Not everyone, like you said, falls into the stereotypes that those people earn. Thank you for helping me realize that. This is a great poem and performance. I admire your wisdom, and your passion.
i havent been to BNV since I was in it in 2005on the Urban Word team.....ive been trying to go but each time I was working..but I really hope I can go in 2009!
HOT!!! damn those words were on fire!!
MrOceans343 1 month ago
lol!! yes honey smh..
allaboutme156 5 months ago
most of the black girls seem to repeat the same messages, stress; not having respect, against sex, and just anger toward life i think if most black females focus on themselves then they will eliminate their worries
lightbody25 6 months ago
ctfuuu at girl who goes"mmmm yes honey !"
Kute4u09 7 months ago
her outfit is so cute i wanna wearit 2morow....the poem is great too<333
KaylaDiane123 10 months ago 2
AAAAHHHH I LOVE THIS!!
Moon009 11 months ago
you go girl!! <3
alexandrine151 1 year ago
the poem was hot, again, who ever is holding the camera needs to shut the fuck up. all of your commentary is not necessary! again, great poem!
kennibone 1 year ago
nice i must say
QCTHAGREAT2 1 year ago
Yo she shut it down.Very nice.
60microphonemajesty 1 year ago
gave me the chills more than once!
MsDefy1 1 year ago
damn that was deep! lol that was amazing
TIARIZZLE 1 year ago
damn so deep
11naisechae 1 year ago
Oh honey speak girl speak your words of wisdom
cj06feb 1 year ago
Preach!!!!
majikstranger 1 year ago
amazing!!!
GotMyFreakumDressOn 1 year ago
nice.
allthingsmuzik247 1 year ago
i rate dis highly
kyroh 2 years ago
I have been watching poetry slamming videos for a class, and at first I was a little frustrated that all I saw was black people talking about the hood and such. But after a few videos, I realized that there is something to that. Not everyone, like you said, falls into the stereotypes that those people earn. Thank you for helping me realize that. This is a great poem and performance. I admire your wisdom, and your passion.
theatrerose 2 years ago
@theatrerose It's not only black people either
look up: Terrorist Threat - Steve Coleman (Def Jam Poetry)
That is just an example...
kristellcs 1 year ago
im whate, im from kansas, im a closet weird ass poet, and i absouly loved your poem. it was nothing iv ever heard before, rock on!
xZxmusicADDICTxZx 2 years ago
awesome ily
emmabananna77 2 years ago
g0 GURL
ihatefakkhoez 2 years ago
that was beyond awesome
htownlove85 2 years ago
alright now!
MoneyFace07 2 years ago
Yes Honey...YES HONEY!!! Great Poem!
sexiiraynbowfemme 2 years ago 5
excellent!
Wow- I'm a British Seychellois living in London and we need you!
Great!
aphrobren30 2 years ago
Thanks for that, i might just write one about Black woman....The poem was really good...
ILuvTheROC 2 years ago
wooT WooT!!!!!!
i lOVED IT!!!
=]
BUNS2pretty 2 years ago
that was really good.
i love'd that the poem was about a man..buh that'd your a girl (:
MokikaStyle 3 years ago
amazing :) u go girl! x
mangokiwiorange 3 years ago
wow.. you're amazing! i loved that
brittcrawfs 3 years ago
yes honey! lol. you get it girl
set4life33 3 years ago
i aint going down like dat...or should i say....
ohh man i dont even have to repeat that....you got talent...and dat is wat im talking about....I am NOT your average stereotype...keep it up
Pr3ssious 3 years ago 3
yes honey !!! hahah
crazydancinggyal3 3 years ago 45
YES HONEY!!!
Haiti4lyf 3 years ago 37
B R I L L I A N T
monage 3 years ago 3
damn.
are you going to bnv 2009?
i went this year.
i dont think i met you.
but im showin some love.
keep writing. :)
youre damn good.
lucieroberts 3 years ago 9
i havent been to BNV since I was in it in 2005on the Urban Word team.....ive been trying to go but each time I was working..but I really hope I can go in 2009!
AfroPoetic1 3 years ago 4
thanks for showing the love!!
AfroPoetic1 3 years ago
yes, yes, yes, yesss!
XxARTMASONxX 3 years ago
this is amazing. all of your poems give me chills. you're such a powerful poet. i'd love to see you live at some point. :)
musicluvr0795 3 years ago
you're great, really, a lot of talent <3
omgmeghan 3 years ago
Wonderful Jalene....and for all of you guys there, this girl has personality, attitude and real talent...Well done girl,go for it:-)
Your friend Mohamed :-)
rabatseagull 4 years ago
Wonderful Jaylene...and for all of you guys out there, this girl has real talent, attitude and personality ...Well done girl, go for it :-)
Your friend Mohamed :-)
rabatseagull 4 years ago
Beautiful. I agree, some parts were hard to hear.
DeezNertz 4 years ago
can we get this typed out, cause some parts its hard to hear, but what i heard was brillant
AlessandraV2006 4 years ago
wooooooooow 1st REAL comment
u good gurl keep it up
silentthunda35 4 years ago