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  • HOT!!! damn those words were on fire!!

  • lol!! yes honey smh..

  • most of the black girls seem to repeat the same messages, stress; not having respect, against sex, and just anger toward life i think if most black females focus on themselves then they will eliminate their worries

  • ctfuuu at girl who goes"mmmm yes honey !"

  • her outfit is so cute i wanna wearit 2morow....the poem is great too<333

  • AAAAHHHH I LOVE THIS!!

  • you go girl!! <3

  • the poem was hot, again, who ever is holding the camera needs to shut the fuck up. all of your commentary is not necessary! again, great poem!

  • nice i must say

  • Yo she shut it down.Very nice.

  • gave me the chills more than once!

  • damn that was deep! lol that was amazing

  • damn so deep

  • Oh honey speak girl speak your words of wisdom

  • Preach!!!!

  • amazing!!!

  • nice.

  • i rate dis highly

  • I have been watching poetry slamming videos for a class, and at first I was a little frustrated that all I saw was black people talking about the hood and such. But after a few videos, I realized that there is something to that. Not everyone, like you said, falls into the stereotypes that those people earn. Thank you for helping me realize that. This is a great poem and performance. I admire your wisdom, and your passion.

  • @theatrerose It's not only black people either

    look up: Terrorist Threat - Steve Coleman (Def Jam Poetry)

    That is just an example...

  • im whate, im from kansas, im a closet weird ass poet, and i absouly loved your poem. it was nothing iv ever heard before, rock on!

  • awesome ily

  • g0 GURL

  • that was beyond awesome

  • alright now!

  • Yes Honey...YES HONEY!!! Great Poem!

  • excellent!

    Wow- I'm a British Seychellois living in London and we need you!

    Great!

  • Thanks for that, i might just write one about Black woman....The poem was really good...

  • wooT WooT!!!!!!

    i lOVED IT!!!

    =]

  • that was really good.

    i love'd that the poem was about a man..buh that'd your a girl (:

  • amazing :) u go girl! x

  • wow.. you're amazing! i loved that

  • yes honey! lol. you get it girl

  • i aint going down like dat...or should i say....

    ohh man i dont even have to repeat that....you got talent...and dat is wat im talking about....I am NOT your average stereotype...keep it up

  • yes honey !!! hahah

  • YES HONEY!!!

  • B R I L L I A N T

  • damn.

    are you going to bnv 2009?

    i went this year.

    i dont think i met you.

    but im showin some love.

    keep writing. :)

    youre damn good.

  • i havent been to BNV since I was in it in 2005on the Urban Word team.....ive been trying to go but each time I was working..but I really hope I can go in 2009!

  • thanks for showing the love!!

  • yes, yes, yes, yesss!

  • this is amazing. all of your poems give me chills. you're such a powerful poet. i'd love to see you live at some point. :)

  • you're great, really, a lot of talent <3

  • Wonderful Jalene....and for all of you guys there, this girl has personality, attitude and real talent...Well done girl,go for it:-)

    Your friend  Mohamed :-)

  • Wonderful Jaylene...and for all of you guys out there, this girl has real talent, attitude and personality ...Well done girl, go for it :-)

    Your friend Mohamed :-)

  • Beautiful. I agree, some parts were hard to hear.

  • can we get this typed out, cause some parts its hard to hear, but what i heard was brillant

  • wooooooooow 1st REAL comment

    u good gurl keep it up

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