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  • I get goosebumps every time I hear this :')

  • I think I can say that this is my favorite spoken-word of all time.

  • I love this one :)

  • can anyone tell me how to find events like this in my town?

  • @Payka92 And yet you take the time to comment, let us who love it enjoy it,

  • This is pretentious, but hey, that is just my opinion... This sounds like someone who is way too much in love with his own voice (i guess it's sort of functional being a poet and all, but still), overscreaming, overacting, making it sound way more complex or clever then it really is.

  • @AgentLemmon Slam poetry is meant to be overdone. It's picking a subject and verbally slamming it. Most are often more laced with more metaphors. But this is what the subgenre of slam poetry is all about. I may be overstating myself, so to everyone else, please feel free to correctme.

  • This gives me chills. Every. time.

  • THIS WAS AMAZING !

  • Heard this last year, and I still love it <3

  • even ugly is beautiful... words to live by

  • I loved it♥♥

  • Ohhhhh yyyeeaaahhhh he gets it

  • oh my god.

  • YES <3

  • drama queeeeen

  • shit.... BUT.... i can't.... shitt

  • @2lonelyone

    Dude, you can't shit? :/

  • @GivePeaceAChance4994 no wait lmao hahah

  • Love it ! <3 damn

  • ATTENTION!! I HAVE JUST STARTED THIS POETRY CHANNEL! PLEASE POETS LETS SUPPORT ONE ANOTHER!! SUBCRIBE AND LISTEN FOR A NEW POEM WEEKLY!

  • years ago, two parents went out for dinner. A few hours later, the babysitter was calling to ask if she could cover up the clown statue in the kids' room, the father said,"Take the kids and get out of the house. We'll call the police, we don't have a clown statue." The "clown statue" is really a killer that escaped from jail. If you don't post this letter on to 10 videos tonight, the clown will be in your bed at 3:00 am with a chainsaw in his hand;sorry i didnt want that happening to me

  • Is there anyway to get this on itunes?!

    x)

  • this is beautiful

  • Shaggy!!! He should totally play Shaggy in scooby Doo.

  • sir talk about a foul mouth..... but nice poem

  • Chills, every fucking time.

  • We watched this in english class this year

  • i love how the cussing didnt ruin it

  • this video deserves more views.

  • loving the acupuncture line. Made me wake up to the reality of lost love.

  • Just bawled my eyes out.

  • I really want to know hw in the world you can pull this off... ive worked for 2 years now, your my goal dude.

  • this video is pretty much me in word form right now same situation and all man...i love your shit man

  • I love the body languge! :D

  • This made me cry. Is that bad? I teared up so hard...

  • Awesome poem.

  • There's 2 motherfuckers out there whove clearly never seen this ugly sunset.

  • Love this <3

  • You're so adorable.

  • This is fucking amazing, and so true. I love it.

  • OMG i fuckin love this poem so much itz defently not ur average breakup poem that sunset is one ugly mother fucker :]]]

  • this is fucking great

  • love love love! this was funny and deep at the same time. Slam at its best <3

  • i cant stop listening to this... soooo true.

    "the breakup gave me acupunture wounds in all the wrong places, which felt less like a method of chinese relaxation and more like being jabbed with a bunch of fucking needles" loooovvveeee that part.

  • This is fucking amazing. I feel everything.

  • I absolutely love this. Great job(:

  • you're fucking amazing. respect.

  • your flo was mad decent

  • i watched this in my writing class... awesome

  • That was fantastic! I listened to it again and again, and its message really gets to me. There is beauty in this world even in the screwed up of instances.

  • I fucking love this poem <3 Like just wow. 

  • that guys cuuuuuute. :D and he's GOOD. Perrrfect for my research project....

  • wow mike very very impressive. i would really like to talk to you some time maybe through email or facebook. you are a very inspiring performer and a very skilled writer. id like to talk to you and bounce some ideas off you some time. maybe even get some feedback or insight?

  • This is the best poem ever! I love it. Kudos to you for getting up there and pouring out your heart xD

  • And now shes nailiing some other Guy.!

    And i'm trapped between the Fore ground and the Background as the only guy she knew who could make her Tingle.!

    My fav Part...!

  • Aaand more like being jabbed which a bunch of fucking needles.

    I love that XD

  • last year our english teacher showed us brave new voices. i stayed up until 5 in the morning looking for this poem. its my favorite of all time. iloveit :)

  • Holy....wow. Hello Epic. That was amazing.

  • good delivery

    

  • lol my english teacher showed new voices in class and she said to listen to this one the closest. pretty sick, not gonna lie!

  • This is amazing

  • oh my jesusss, this is too much for me....sooooo raw wow, that was amazing.

  • 1 dislike? Well fuck you then

  • This has got to be one of my favorite poems.

  • i saw this in religion class today.

    fucking amazing <3

  • Bro this is deep

  • we watching this today in my English class! We all love it =]

  • I think the break up was worth this poem.

  • LOL

  • that IS one ugly sunset...

  • ... Whoever that one person who doesn't like this video is.

    The hordes of youtube will hunt you down, find you...

    And kill you o_o

  • i watch this about twice a day . so beautiful

  • I can't explain how this makes me feel.

    But, I feel great things.

  • you are inspiring man, i really like this and i always come back to this poem for help

  • ugh you gotta be kidding me. this is too good. made me tear. so beautiful.

  • This is so raw and beautiful. I love it.

  • WOW.... speechless..... O.O .. in a good way 

  • Awww 1:50 made me cry I thought this was going to be a funny poem but he hits us with that and yes I have no creative words to describe it just that

  • You are amazing....wow. Huge fan, i promise.

  • hey this poem is the shit i heard this in world history class

  • Hey! This piece has inspired me so much and i just wanted to tell you that i took this piece as an inspiration to write a monologue if that's okay.

    Ps: I kinda took a line that really stood out to me if that's okay :P

  • To the writer of this and speaker (if he reads this)

    Do you know what it means to breath more than air?

    -Jess

  • I watched this the day after being dumped, and let me tell you, it makes me feel 10X better.

  • fuckin love it

  • I watch this about fifteen times a day. Entirely awe-inspiring.

  • you killed this poem...I love it

  • Erm. Will you marry me? But honestly, absolutely, undeniably phenomenal.

  • what do you mean when you say at the end sunset, what are you so afraid of ?

  • Well that blew my fucking mind.

  • 1 person thinks it's a beautiful sunset.

  • I shall be a part of this...Just watch

  • This is awesome! The author looks like noah from the notebook, too ; )

  • So blunt and raw and beautiful, there is nothing I have ever heard in my life to even compare with the way I felt listening to you recite this.

  • So beautiful.

  • How the fuck can someone not like this? The emotion, I felt. Man, my chest was twisted and my throat was closed. Man.. amazing.

  • God love you you're my favorite

  • Such amazing writing <3

  • This was my favorite poem out of all the ones I heard in brave new voices, It really stuck out to me.

  • I love this

  • AMAZING POET... and kinda cute too , I like it :D

  • Dude....I...can't even...dude...

  • DANG! HES AMAZING! HOW DOES HE COME UP WITH IT! THIS POEM IS BETTER THAN MINE!

  • I like how no one has disliked this video a testment to how much it hits home

  • I give u mad respect for this poem man it was fuckin moving

  • reminds me of slug from atmosphere..this guys is amazing

  • @enterTHE8gates woah!! read my mind =)

  • i love this poem every time i hear it i remember when my friend came running to my house saying i had to see this. This is the poem that made me start listening to spoken word.

  • Poetry is a great thing.....i love his passion....i wish I could meet more people with so much passion. One love x

  • gives me goosebumps every time 

  • IT GAVE ME GOOZEBUMPZ LULZ

  • mike gerbino, you are SO COOL.

  • damn man, this is crazy amazing.

    talent

  • You move to touch my lips, we rotate the earth – another day! The morning sun rises tearful this time: his fading rays now dead of heartache your face now glowing in his stead the sun recedes ashamed – your laughter outshines this ugly sunset once more. There exists only you and I now: you, the magnificent amber sunshine - and I, the silly boy who loves you.
  • this dude and josh bennett. killed it!

  • @inbetweenthemirror true, but they all we're sick dude. it wasn't really even a competition, they were all in it together, something our generation needs more of man, if you ask me

  • @TheKovach yea, dude! i agree, and i loved that attitude that everyone had while watching the sets on tv, its just that bennett and gerbino were the ones that did poems that i could relate to the most. like, i seriously dvr'd the series and still watch the episodes all the time. but yea, they all had amazing talent.

  • This makes so much freaking sense.

    I love you. Marry me?

  • i am preeeeetty sure i'm in love with your mind haha

  • i want you to know mike that this is my favorite poem in the entire world i know it by heart and as a poet you give me hope that one day i could be half as good as you

  • waaaait.. is the guy who posted this the guy in there? I saw this today in my art class but I didn't catch the name.

  • @tnglo

    Yep thats me. Mike Gerbino. You saw it in art class? ha, dope!

  • @IHateCriticalTheory :O SWEET!! and yeah, my teacher showed us the first part on dvd and the entire class actually BEGGED her to get the other one XD You all were so amazing!

  • @IHateCriticalTheory Lol I saw it in english class. My teacher blushed every time he swore. =P

  • How do you favorite stuff on the new layout? ._. Can someone please tell me? lol

  • one of the best poems on the show

  • This was my favorite poem from BNV... aside from crutches... which i cant find anywhere.. -_-" ..... but i digress.... I recorded this on my phone from the tv wen it came on on HBO, i literally know this poem word for word i listened to it so much.... i luv it.... good job

  • Still beautiful, I see.

  • I love you Gerbino.

  • this dude is awesome

  • Chills, amazing

  • Fuck the sunset!

  • A) did you know that if you if you type in mike ger... youtube fills in mike gerbion as the first option, it's true. B) I come back tonight C) what did madammarch say? D) I wrote this here when I could have so simply put it on facebook... what is wrong with me?

  • @kaitasmaxfischer

    hahaha. you searched for me. I don't remember what madammarch said, and i dont know why you cant click it. But it was something about how bad I suck. Which I agree with.

    Also, I am talking to you on facebook right now, why am I commenting on youtube?

  • @IHateCriticalTheory

    she just wrote "lame..."

    I like this man, I'm only an amateur poet, but man i wish i could write like you, there's so much power in it

  • grew up with this kids sister . hes amazing

  • This was definitely the most powerful poem I have seen yet.

  • You were my favorite while watching BVN. You're so real... you just write to write, and you're as vulgar as you wanna be. amazing...

  • That last line gave me chills.

  • hahahahha i watched this in class w my principle in the room

  • tingles.

  • I can' t watch this in front of my grandma! lol

  • lol he is so funny bit so true we watxhed this in my class and im in the 8th grade

  • agreed.

  • He was going so hard! i love him

  • i hella love this

  • im loving this.... i saw him a while back in the Apollo he was my favorite <3.

  • REENAH!!!! 0:55

  • This is amazing. Its so beautiful. : )

  • Mike, like seriously..... I promise you'll love my poetry! We're so simular with what we write & how we deliver it! You have gots to stop by my channel! Please do, K! And anyone else in love with this dude & his work, please come by too! ;o]

  • Go head! Wow! Snaps!

  • I had coffee with this kid today.

  • love this soooo much!!

  • BEAUITFUL!!

  • wow!! this got to me....dam..this poem was crazy..what ever you do ..dnt EVER stop writing

  • man, i saw this on HBO and i tried to find a youtube vid of it ever sense. thnx for uploading and keep up the Good work!!

  • do you say, masking as beuty after keep causing death ,,,,,distruction....... cus man i know this by heart, and your poem makes me reflect on what just happend to me , thank you for writing this, it probably saved my life......

  • OFF THE CHAIN IT ROCKS

  • i know it by heart he kicks ass so badd

    did he write it?

  • yes, I wrote it.

    you can check out more of my videos at my channel, or hear my music at

    myspace(dot)com/criticaltheory­rr

  • It's so beautiful.

  • I have officially watched this 15 times.

  • @AlexxxInsomnia I'm on like 25 lol

  • God, I love that.

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  • AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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