This is pretentious, but hey, that is just my opinion... This sounds like someone who is way too much in love with his own voice (i guess it's sort of functional being a poet and all, but still), overscreaming, overacting, making it sound way more complex or clever then it really is.
@AgentLemmon Slam poetry is meant to be overdone. It's picking a subject and verbally slamming it. Most are often more laced with more metaphors. But this is what the subgenre of slam poetry is all about. I may be overstating myself, so to everyone else, please feel free to correctme.
years ago, two parents went out for dinner. A few hours later, the babysitter was calling to ask if she could cover up the clown statue in the kids' room, the father said,"Take the kids and get out of the house. We'll call the police, we don't have a clown statue." The "clown statue" is really a killer that escaped from jail. If you don't post this letter on to 10 videos tonight, the clown will be in your bed at 3:00 am with a chainsaw in his hand;sorry i didnt want that happening to me
"the breakup gave me acupunture wounds in all the wrong places, which felt less like a method of chinese relaxation and more like being jabbed with a bunch of fucking needles" loooovvveeee that part.
That was fantastic! I listened to it again and again, and its message really gets to me. There is beauty in this world even in the screwed up of instances.
wow mike very very impressive. i would really like to talk to you some time maybe through email or facebook. you are a very inspiring performer and a very skilled writer. id like to talk to you and bounce some ideas off you some time. maybe even get some feedback or insight?
last year our english teacher showed us brave new voices. i stayed up until 5 in the morning looking for this poem. its my favorite of all time. iloveit :)
i love this poem every time i hear it i remember when my friend came running to my house saying i had to see this. This is the poem that made me start listening to spoken word.
You move to touch my lips, we rotate the earth – another day! The morning sun rises tearful this time: his fading rays now dead of heartache your face now glowing in his stead the sun recedes ashamed – your laughter outshines this ugly sunset once more. There exists only you and I now: you, the magnificent amber sunshine - and I, the silly boy who loves you.
@inbetweenthemirror true, but they all we're sick dude. it wasn't really even a competition, they were all in it together, something our generation needs more of man, if you ask me
@TheKovach yea, dude! i agree, and i loved that attitude that everyone had while watching the sets on tv, its just that bennett and gerbino were the ones that did poems that i could relate to the most. like, i seriously dvr'd the series and still watch the episodes all the time. but yea, they all had amazing talent.
i want you to know mike that this is my favorite poem in the entire world i know it by heart and as a poet you give me hope that one day i could be half as good as you
@IHateCriticalTheory :O SWEET!! and yeah, my teacher showed us the first part on dvd and the entire class actually BEGGED her to get the other one XD You all were so amazing!
This was my favorite poem from BNV... aside from crutches... which i cant find anywhere.. -_-" ..... but i digress.... I recorded this on my phone from the tv wen it came on on HBO, i literally know this poem word for word i listened to it so much.... i luv it.... good job
A) did you know that if you if you type in mike ger... youtube fills in mike gerbion as the first option, it's true. B) I come back tonight C) what did madammarch say? D) I wrote this here when I could have so simply put it on facebook... what is wrong with me?
hahaha. you searched for me. I don't remember what madammarch said, and i dont know why you cant click it. But it was something about how bad I suck. Which I agree with.
Also, I am talking to you on facebook right now, why am I commenting on youtube?
Mike, like seriously..... I promise you'll love my poetry! We're so simular with what we write & how we deliver it! You have gots to stop by my channel! Please do, K! And anyone else in love with this dude & his work, please come by too! ;o]
do you say, masking as beuty after keep causing death ,,,,,distruction....... cus man i know this by heart, and your poem makes me reflect on what just happend to me , thank you for writing this, it probably saved my life......
I get goosebumps every time I hear this :')
ilovechickenbaby 1 week ago
I think I can say that this is my favorite spoken-word of all time.
goldenz0mbie 1 month ago 4
I love this one :)
EwinnieG 1 month ago
can anyone tell me how to find events like this in my town?
pimpinmuffins 2 months ago
@Payka92 And yet you take the time to comment, let us who love it enjoy it,
TheBestVloggerEver 2 months ago
This is pretentious, but hey, that is just my opinion... This sounds like someone who is way too much in love with his own voice (i guess it's sort of functional being a poet and all, but still), overscreaming, overacting, making it sound way more complex or clever then it really is.
AgentLemmon 2 months ago
@AgentLemmon Slam poetry is meant to be overdone. It's picking a subject and verbally slamming it. Most are often more laced with more metaphors. But this is what the subgenre of slam poetry is all about. I may be overstating myself, so to everyone else, please feel free to correctme.
lostcause525 1 month ago
This gives me chills. Every. time.
InfamousFreedom 2 months ago
THIS WAS AMAZING !
shaybayy20119 3 months ago
Heard this last year, and I still love it <3
JessieAnn09 3 months ago
even ugly is beautiful... words to live by
elissbern 3 months ago
I loved it♥♥
KyraHoward0513 3 months ago
Ohhhhh yyyeeaaahhhh he gets it
socomcali 4 months ago
oh my god.
cockchipper 5 months ago
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ONLY ONE WAy
One way to heaven, one truth forever, only one possibility for eternal life
(john 14:6)
There is only one Saviour for humankind, only one Lord for all. "Neither is there
salvation in any other, for there is no other name under heaven given among men.
JUST SAY LORD JESUS I BELIEVE IN YOU FORGIVE MY SINS COME TO MY HEART AND SAVE ME AMEN
ZAJAIRA1000 5 months ago
YES <3
jellonator 5 months ago
drama queeeeen
8nolie 5 months ago 2
shit.... BUT.... i can't.... shitt
2lonelyone 5 months ago
@2lonelyone
Dude, you can't shit? :/
GivePeaceAChance4994 5 months ago 3
@GivePeaceAChance4994 no wait lmao hahah
2lonelyone 5 months ago
Love it ! <3 damn
bradybray 6 months ago
ATTENTION!! I HAVE JUST STARTED THIS POETRY CHANNEL! PLEASE POETS LETS SUPPORT ONE ANOTHER!! SUBCRIBE AND LISTEN FOR A NEW POEM WEEKLY!
tiecethepoet 6 months ago
years ago, two parents went out for dinner. A few hours later, the babysitter was calling to ask if she could cover up the clown statue in the kids' room, the father said,"Take the kids and get out of the house. We'll call the police, we don't have a clown statue." The "clown statue" is really a killer that escaped from jail. If you don't post this letter on to 10 videos tonight, the clown will be in your bed at 3:00 am with a chainsaw in his hand;sorry i didnt want that happening to me
susNetwork7 6 months ago
Is there anyway to get this on itunes?!
x)
PhantomJean05 6 months ago
this is beautiful
DanitaRoberts 6 months ago
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What are YOU so afraid of....?
haloer7 6 months ago
Shaggy!!! He should totally play Shaggy in scooby Doo.
RagingBear101 7 months ago 27
sir talk about a foul mouth..... but nice poem
Cutii22able 7 months ago
Chills, every fucking time.
grindsmygearsVL0G 7 months ago
We watched this in english class this year
synthrock1 8 months ago
i love how the cussing didnt ruin it
TwoForFlinchin1 8 months ago 4
this video deserves more views.
rayrayforever123 8 months ago 5
loving the acupuncture line. Made me wake up to the reality of lost love.
dmacdoogler 8 months ago 36
Just bawled my eyes out.
crackalackle 8 months ago
I really want to know hw in the world you can pull this off... ive worked for 2 years now, your my goal dude.
Shadow1fanforever77 9 months ago
this video is pretty much me in word form right now same situation and all man...i love your shit man
cstaff22712 9 months ago
I love the body languge! :D
meepfeet 9 months ago
This made me cry. Is that bad? I teared up so hard...
somedelicioussky 9 months ago
Awesome poem.
ninjapirate0507 9 months ago
There's 2 motherfuckers out there whove clearly never seen this ugly sunset.
lilycruikshank 9 months ago 3
Love this <3
TheDeathbyCookie 9 months ago
You're so adorable.
thegiantsquidofanger 9 months ago
This is fucking amazing, and so true. I love it.
WeekendProdigy 9 months ago
OMG i fuckin love this poem so much itz defently not ur average breakup poem that sunset is one ugly mother fucker :]]]
wickedbitch78 10 months ago
this is fucking great
maggiebambery15 10 months ago
love love love! this was funny and deep at the same time. Slam at its best <3
passwordwillremember 10 months ago
i cant stop listening to this... soooo true.
"the breakup gave me acupunture wounds in all the wrong places, which felt less like a method of chinese relaxation and more like being jabbed with a bunch of fucking needles" loooovvveeee that part.
5tefbuck 10 months ago 3
This is fucking amazing. I feel everything.
elleinad75 10 months ago
I absolutely love this. Great job(:
TaraIsLegitt 10 months ago
you're fucking amazing. respect.
HelloTaraMyLove 10 months ago
your flo was mad decent
LETitBURNout 10 months ago
i watched this in my writing class... awesome
myfamilyiscrazy 10 months ago
That was fantastic! I listened to it again and again, and its message really gets to me. There is beauty in this world even in the screwed up of instances.
MadameTamma 11 months ago
I fucking love this poem <3 Like just wow.
WildChildKCW 11 months ago
that guys cuuuuuute. :D and he's GOOD. Perrrfect for my research project....
letslaugh2gether4 11 months ago
wow mike very very impressive. i would really like to talk to you some time maybe through email or facebook. you are a very inspiring performer and a very skilled writer. id like to talk to you and bounce some ideas off you some time. maybe even get some feedback or insight?
bahaiofthenorth 11 months ago
This is the best poem ever! I love it. Kudos to you for getting up there and pouring out your heart xD
MrsNickJonas476693 11 months ago
And now shes nailiing some other Guy.!
And i'm trapped between the Fore ground and the Background as the only guy she knew who could make her Tingle.!
My fav Part...!
1reazen 11 months ago
Aaand more like being jabbed which a bunch of fucking needles.
I love that XD
evry1scritic 11 months ago
last year our english teacher showed us brave new voices. i stayed up until 5 in the morning looking for this poem. its my favorite of all time. iloveit :)
vh1vh1vh2 11 months ago
Holy....wow. Hello Epic. That was amazing.
SkySmoke87 1 year ago
good delivery
theyouneek1 1 year ago
lol my english teacher showed new voices in class and she said to listen to this one the closest. pretty sick, not gonna lie!
tyroneshoelacesson 1 year ago
This is amazing
Epodmusic17 1 year ago
oh my jesusss, this is too much for me....sooooo raw wow, that was amazing.
inspirationfolder 1 year ago
1 dislike? Well fuck you then
Spazoid001 1 year ago 3
This has got to be one of my favorite poems.
wariomario123 1 year ago
i saw this in religion class today.
fucking amazing <3
gagaohhlala13 1 year ago
Bro this is deep
bkillinsoftly 1 year ago
we watching this today in my English class! We all love it =]
caitlin15virgo 1 year ago
I think the break up was worth this poem.
singingpanda123 1 year ago
LOL
canoncalculator 1 year ago
that IS one ugly sunset...
shortah15 1 year ago
... Whoever that one person who doesn't like this video is.
The hordes of youtube will hunt you down, find you...
And kill you o_o
Signemity 1 year ago
i watch this about twice a day . so beautiful
dancerx0x0x 1 year ago
I can't explain how this makes me feel.
But, I feel great things.
clavissaaa 1 year ago
you are inspiring man, i really like this and i always come back to this poem for help
mpanthers57 1 year ago
ugh you gotta be kidding me. this is too good. made me tear. so beautiful.
martypantts 1 year ago
This is so raw and beautiful. I love it.
thestupidbrilliance 1 year ago
WOW.... speechless..... O.O .. in a good way
OneNOnlyPhonnytaa 1 year ago
Awww 1:50 made me cry I thought this was going to be a funny poem but he hits us with that and yes I have no creative words to describe it just that
smile678 1 year ago
You are amazing....wow. Huge fan, i promise.
Tickle9313 1 year ago
hey this poem is the shit i heard this in world history class
paint8275 1 year ago
Hey! This piece has inspired me so much and i just wanted to tell you that i took this piece as an inspiration to write a monologue if that's okay.
Ps: I kinda took a line that really stood out to me if that's okay :P
xXbeIieverXx 1 year ago
To the writer of this and speaker (if he reads this)
Do you know what it means to breath more than air?
-Jess
jmd3179 1 year ago
I watched this the day after being dumped, and let me tell you, it makes me feel 10X better.
RockerGhetto 1 year ago
fuckin love it
drunkpandas101 1 year ago
I watch this about fifteen times a day. Entirely awe-inspiring.
raehowl 1 year ago
you killed this poem...I love it
DominiqueBalladist91 1 year ago
Erm. Will you marry me? But honestly, absolutely, undeniably phenomenal.
TheLittlestFarrier 1 year ago
what do you mean when you say at the end sunset, what are you so afraid of ?
vale650123 1 year ago
Well that blew my fucking mind.
sskl123 1 year ago
1 person thinks it's a beautiful sunset.
rickileanne 1 year ago
I shall be a part of this...Just watch
jasatthedisco 1 year ago
This is awesome! The author looks like noah from the notebook, too ; )
weirdgirl420 1 year ago
So blunt and raw and beautiful, there is nothing I have ever heard in my life to even compare with the way I felt listening to you recite this.
eatsashimi44 1 year ago
So beautiful.
xBrenBreadShred 1 year ago
How the fuck can someone not like this? The emotion, I felt. Man, my chest was twisted and my throat was closed. Man.. amazing.
anthonyyCQ 1 year ago
God love you you're my favorite
notoriously0 1 year ago
Such amazing writing <3
FairyTaleSlayer 1 year ago
This was my favorite poem out of all the ones I heard in brave new voices, It really stuck out to me.
cubanlinx95 1 year ago
I love this
ACarrington08 1 year ago
AMAZING POET... and kinda cute too , I like it :D
heismykryptonite 1 year ago
Dude....I...can't even...dude...
xspex1321 1 year ago 69
DANG! HES AMAZING! HOW DOES HE COME UP WITH IT! THIS POEM IS BETTER THAN MINE!
sweet2u09 1 year ago
I like how no one has disliked this video a testment to how much it hits home
BigIceWolf90 1 year ago
I give u mad respect for this poem man it was fuckin moving
BigIceWolf90 1 year ago
reminds me of slug from atmosphere..this guys is amazing
enterTHE8gates 1 year ago
@enterTHE8gates woah!! read my mind =)
OMGxxBBQ 1 year ago
i love this poem every time i hear it i remember when my friend came running to my house saying i had to see this. This is the poem that made me start listening to spoken word.
jpmoney8794 1 year ago
Poetry is a great thing.....i love his passion....i wish I could meet more people with so much passion. One love x
kokumusicismylove 1 year ago
gives me goosebumps every time
mrskatrina 1 year ago
IT GAVE ME GOOZEBUMPZ LULZ
apimpnamedslickbackx 1 year ago
mike gerbino, you are SO COOL.
bridgetfaaacee 1 year ago
damn man, this is crazy amazing.
talent
CatastropheKendra 1 year ago
Mulletsoldier 1 year ago
this dude and josh bennett. killed it!
inbetweenthemirror 1 year ago
@inbetweenthemirror true, but they all we're sick dude. it wasn't really even a competition, they were all in it together, something our generation needs more of man, if you ask me
TheKovach 1 year ago
@TheKovach yea, dude! i agree, and i loved that attitude that everyone had while watching the sets on tv, its just that bennett and gerbino were the ones that did poems that i could relate to the most. like, i seriously dvr'd the series and still watch the episodes all the time. but yea, they all had amazing talent.
inbetweenthemirror 1 year ago
This makes so much freaking sense.
I love you. Marry me?
simsfreak2008 1 year ago
i am preeeeetty sure i'm in love with your mind haha
socksnflipflops 1 year ago
i want you to know mike that this is my favorite poem in the entire world i know it by heart and as a poet you give me hope that one day i could be half as good as you
lkquincy08 1 year ago
waaaait.. is the guy who posted this the guy in there? I saw this today in my art class but I didn't catch the name.
tnglo 1 year ago 4
@tnglo
Yep thats me. Mike Gerbino. You saw it in art class? ha, dope!
IHateCriticalTheory 1 year ago 26
@IHateCriticalTheory :O SWEET!! and yeah, my teacher showed us the first part on dvd and the entire class actually BEGGED her to get the other one XD You all were so amazing!
tnglo 1 year ago
@IHateCriticalTheory Lol I saw it in english class. My teacher blushed every time he swore. =P
MsUsername001 1 year ago
How do you favorite stuff on the new layout? ._. Can someone please tell me? lol
ChibiPoweredDeath 1 year ago
one of the best poems on the show
queensupreme2 1 year ago
This was my favorite poem from BNV... aside from crutches... which i cant find anywhere.. -_-" ..... but i digress.... I recorded this on my phone from the tv wen it came on on HBO, i literally know this poem word for word i listened to it so much.... i luv it.... good job
RazeGeneration 2 years ago
Still beautiful, I see.
Sophtine 2 years ago
I love you Gerbino.
maria29821 2 years ago
this dude is awesome
queensupreme2 2 years ago
Chills, amazing
classy02xo 2 years ago
Fuck the sunset!
DinahoftheRailroad 2 years ago
A) did you know that if you if you type in mike ger... youtube fills in mike gerbion as the first option, it's true. B) I come back tonight C) what did madammarch say? D) I wrote this here when I could have so simply put it on facebook... what is wrong with me?
kaitasmaxfischer 2 years ago
@kaitasmaxfischer
hahaha. you searched for me. I don't remember what madammarch said, and i dont know why you cant click it. But it was something about how bad I suck. Which I agree with.
Also, I am talking to you on facebook right now, why am I commenting on youtube?
IHateCriticalTheory 2 years ago
@IHateCriticalTheory
she just wrote "lame..."
I like this man, I'm only an amateur poet, but man i wish i could write like you, there's so much power in it
jakevalentine1992 1 year ago
grew up with this kids sister . hes amazing
TheUndergrnd 2 years ago
This was definitely the most powerful poem I have seen yet.
TheYTPooper 2 years ago
You were my favorite while watching BVN. You're so real... you just write to write, and you're as vulgar as you wanna be. amazing...
InducedJoy 2 years ago
That last line gave me chills.
skaterchick44595 2 years ago
hahahahha i watched this in class w my principle in the room
musicalstars1 2 years ago
tingles.
Stasiomg 2 years ago
I can' t watch this in front of my grandma! lol
naturallydommi010 2 years ago
lol he is so funny bit so true we watxhed this in my class and im in the 8th grade
brina741 2 years ago
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Lame...
MadamMarch 2 years ago
agreed.
IHateCriticalTheory 2 years ago
He was going so hard! i love him
naturallydommi010 2 years ago
i hella love this
richardrockssss 2 years ago 17
im loving this.... i saw him a while back in the Apollo he was my favorite <3.
irockyoursokxx 2 years ago
REENAH!!!! 0:55
L3t1t8e 2 years ago
This is amazing. Its so beautiful. : )
givingupismyoption 2 years ago
Mike, like seriously..... I promise you'll love my poetry! We're so simular with what we write & how we deliver it! You have gots to stop by my channel! Please do, K! And anyone else in love with this dude & his work, please come by too! ;o]
p8anut 2 years ago
Go head! Wow! Snaps!
p8anut 2 years ago
I had coffee with this kid today.
kaitasmaxfischer 2 years ago
love this soooo much!!
music1love315 2 years ago
BEAUITFUL!!
stuckup87 2 years ago 2
wow!! this got to me....dam..this poem was crazy..what ever you do ..dnt EVER stop writing
EyNeGr0o 2 years ago
man, i saw this on HBO and i tried to find a youtube vid of it ever sense. thnx for uploading and keep up the Good work!!
bluesnakeyes 2 years ago
do you say, masking as beuty after keep causing death ,,,,,distruction....... cus man i know this by heart, and your poem makes me reflect on what just happend to me , thank you for writing this, it probably saved my life......
marduk345 2 years ago
OFF THE CHAIN IT ROCKS
cutefacetaion 2 years ago
i know it by heart he kicks ass so badd
did he write it?
marduk345 2 years ago
yes, I wrote it.
you can check out more of my videos at my channel, or hear my music at
myspace(dot)com/criticaltheoryrr
IHateCriticalTheory 2 years ago
It's so beautiful.
dudeimgena 2 years ago
I have officially watched this 15 times.
AlexxxInsomnia 2 years ago 33
@AlexxxInsomnia I'm on like 25 lol
Monkeysonfireonpluto 1 year ago
God, I love that.
fwahpanic 2 years ago
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AlexxxInsomnia 2 years ago
AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
808gina 2 years ago