real good lyrics but yeah like will said delivry could use some work . try not to have ur voice so monotone in places . not hatin at all though good work keep it up . i spit 2 verses on this cyper myself .
The lyrics seem to flow nicely; I think if you'd gotten more familiar with them your vocal flow could have been better (you said you didn't bother to memorize it). As it stands, I think it was still pretty good, especially for you only having been rapping for a month. Keep it up; you'll get more accustomed. :)
dont say that mate....its not about who's is better....i personally think u killed this so much...very entertainin with good overall lyrics...keep it up for the love of rap/hip-hop
LOL
IEatHarlots 7 months ago
it was written like nas said
MrGOLDENSTATE510 1 year ago
MOLE!!!!
soldier7280 1 year ago
real good lyrics but yeah like will said delivry could use some work . try not to have ur voice so monotone in places . not hatin at all though good work keep it up . i spit 2 verses on this cyper myself .
187RUKKUS 1 year ago
good lyrics, the delivery could use some work.
over all i give you props.
williamwcook 2 years ago
thanks man.
firefromhell27 2 years ago
nice, im postin my spider cyber like right now lol
amityshrill 2 years ago
Pretty good man.
LilHomie52 2 years ago
damn thats realy good for only spittin for not spitting for too long. i have only been spittin for like three. check my spider cyhper
illfromthe215 2 years ago
chop it up and make guacamole!!!
wesmantooth45 2 years ago
What's an exilarch ?
historicrecord 2 years ago
a line of heritage...descendents become jewish leaders or something, wikipedia it.
firefromhell27 2 years ago
Your flow is aight, you need more practice in putting more emotion into your lyrics, be more confident and express your feelings more.
stiffler2100 2 years ago
The lyrics seem to flow nicely; I think if you'd gotten more familiar with them your vocal flow could have been better (you said you didn't bother to memorize it). As it stands, I think it was still pretty good, especially for you only having been rapping for a month. Keep it up; you'll get more accustomed. :)
Leusifer 2 years ago
thanks bro.
firefromhell27 2 years ago
it was good check mines out
daroundhero 2 years ago
awesome
loosen up a lil
5*
Jmils1 2 years ago
dont say that mate....its not about who's is better....i personally think u killed this so much...very entertainin with good overall lyrics...keep it up for the love of rap/hip-hop
peace
Fido2011 2 years ago
fucking right this. lyrics are tight
754Sean 2 years ago
thanks man.
firefromhell27 2 years ago
dont have to say thx mate. im just enjoyin real music
754Sean 2 years ago
nice man, keep it up an check mine out aswell an tell me what u think....5/5*
Fido2011 2 years ago
ahh urs is fuckin ill aswell, a lot better than mine haha.
Peace. Respect
firefromhell27 2 years ago
crazy man sick
mctoope2 2 years ago
thanks man, respect
firefromhell27 2 years ago
Good job dude, I'll hit you with feed on bboy.
RingerINC 2 years ago
Nice shit mang!! keep rhyming!!!
HappyBunny001 2 years ago
thanks for the support man respect.
firefromhell27 2 years ago