wow!!!! you are truly a master at what you do..so sincere with it and it can definitely be felt! you now have a true fan of your work..as im writing this i am anticipating hearing more!! amazing..
i love this i cried because i can relate to where she is coming from, when she said she prayed i cried even harder because she seemed like she read me. this is beautiful!!!!
I love did ish I watch it everyday c I'm only 14 nd I lyk girls nd boys but I'm scared tu tell my moma cuz she used tell us if we Eva turn we will b kicked out dah houz nd I cnt face dah fact dat my mom is gonna hate me!! I think she kinda kno cuz one she asked me nd I didn't say nun I acted lyk I didn't hear her!!
My ma was the same way... but I realized aint no one wants their duahgter to be gay.... but life goes on cuz no matter what ya ma'z going to always love you..
swear down Woman you are deep, i feel ur pain ...hear it in your voice an see it in your eyes.
i love what you talk about....real talk...i love how you say what you talk...with passion, emotion an realness. your words are meaningful truthful and beautiful x
thank you for brinqin my first love back to me . the way you portray your poetry brinqs me to tears . your sincerity . your passion . your presence . thank you .
you are beautiful . in and out .
nothin but talent ;; nothin but truth . damn nothin but thank yous . keep it up mamaSz . He's got big plans for you ,
yo...jus wanted to hit u up even tho u dun got alot of comments tellin u how great u are. i can really relate to this stuff and i see you speak and i almost wanna cry. i write too. i grew up in a christian family. my mom has alot of questions. i don't have the answers. when i played soccer with the boys it was amusing...it's no longer fun and games.
words are my escape. i wish u the best...with everything. hope you're not as confused as i am. i'm about to get ready for church...funny right?
wow... I have to say that the ending of this poem hit home for me. Its like you know all the words that brain thinks and my heart feels but my mouth wont say. " IT IS WRITTEN" tear fall. I dont know But God Gave you a talent and you are hitting it full force and on the nail. Two snaps and five Stars.
you are a truly talented individual and i want you to keep up what you are doing, because i don't chase my dreams because of my shattered hopes. and i even have you posted on myspace so people can see your work.
I have found that you have so much poems. Can you speak some poem how the beauty of man and woman loving? Would be very nice a poem about this loving from you. WHAT ABOUT THE CHALLENGE??
not a challenge. i dont always write the things i see in my own reflection. Most of things have absolutely nothing to do about myself. Im sure i can find one i already have. GIve me a minute to record it.
i dnt leev comments,but u touched my soul and i loved ALL u said.i'm older than u n i'm still dealin with my own"coming out" u really have power in ur tongue.stay strong and blessed.
Omg this is so deep like i really dont know what to say right now.. its all in my head but just cant find the words... I guess im speechless. In other words this was great
i can relate 2 all u said, i love da way u feel ur style and ur flow, im diggin dis, i listen to da poem everytime i get 2 chance 2 and i thought i could write a comment cuz ur flow is amazing
omg omg omg..ok not sure if my other comment went thru but this is soooo amazing. damn yo..im on the edge of my bed not tryna move til its over..this is so real. its so beautiful to see how someone could transform words/experiences and put it into an art form to express one's self. damn, jus amazing..a true gift. this was something i could relate to. im glad you became the person you are because of wat you went thru and that you made it thru..god willing, you will continue thru..
man, u got me thinkin and shit, dude u betta b bussin A's in English lol but i empathize if that happened 2 u, i take out a piece of my heart and giv it 2 u, on the real
I feel this poem every time I hear it, it's like a fingerprint I know those words....I know who they belong to..your right I think I like this one better.
wow!!!! you are truly a master at what you do..so sincere with it and it can definitely be felt! you now have a true fan of your work..as im writing this i am anticipating hearing more!! amazing..
DivineEssence84 2 months ago
dAM this sHIT rELAT tO ME sH MUCH !!
jojoxd20 3 months ago
gurl u touching me with this one im bout to cry omg ma wow
kimlea305 4 months ago
Where ur video of you singing to your girl? I love that one!
teenamarie89 5 months ago
Omg I love ur poems. Deep. I feel the same.
JaiBeePandie 7 months ago
specchless very interesting ma
19lilmissgiggles 7 months ago
OMG
iciewolf 7 months ago
I HEAR THAT !!! THATSZX RIGHT SPEAK THE TRUTH !
yonabadass60 7 months ago
Brought tears to my eyes.! Written so eloquently...You are AMAZING!
MzRainbowLadyJae 8 months ago
WWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW! MY REALITY WRITTEN
jasminedvns 9 months ago
............That was so deep i had 2watch it twice.....tears fallin u left me speechless...
SimpliiLo 10 months ago
Damn lil mama doin ah thinq..dis ish hits close 2 home doe
renababii2010 10 months ago
OMG you had tears falling and some much pain resurfaced, but I couldn't help but to keep watching! I really LOVE your channel<3
thickbeauty1982 11 months ago
i love this i cried because i can relate to where she is coming from, when she said she prayed i cried even harder because she seemed like she read me. this is beautiful!!!!
qtnaynay3 1 year ago
damn dat shyt was deep hun && u fine as shyt
fendilovee 1 year ago
i literary had tears in my eyes that was good!
mariedor88 1 year ago
D-E-E-P !
dbrzi21 1 year ago
thats some powerful stuff.....half of it at the end i can relate to......!!!!
jaylove195 1 year ago
Your Awesome!!!
Nazzyo4 1 year ago
I love did ish I watch it everyday c I'm only 14 nd I lyk girls nd boys but I'm scared tu tell my moma cuz she used tell us if we Eva turn we will b kicked out dah houz nd I cnt face dah fact dat my mom is gonna hate me!! I think she kinda kno cuz one she asked me nd I didn't say nun I acted lyk I didn't hear her!!
KE57379 1 year ago
wow .. !! thats all i can say is wow ! .. That is some deeeeeeeppp shxt ! WOW ..youre an amazing poet i mean like OUTRAGEOUSLY AMAZING ! keep it up .
JessGezieVids 1 year ago
CRAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZY GOOD now thtz waz up
STARISTARZ 1 year ago
like i absolutely feel this for real
crookay123 1 year ago
u is so talented i love dis poem it mean so much.....
mzpurplekisses5 1 year ago
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS...your extremely cute an talented.keep it up love.
Nibeysbabii 1 year ago
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL LOVEE IT
mstinkboo1 2 years ago
I THOUGHT I WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD
Brwnneyez87 2 years ago
LOVE It!
CapricornQt08 2 years ago
Damn.
That was sooo deep.
I feel you fo real.
My ma was the same way... but I realized aint no one wants their duahgter to be gay.... but life goes on cuz no matter what ya ma'z going to always love you..
TheFREAKALEAK91 2 years ago
one of the best poems i have heard in a long time .. very talented sweetie :)
gemzxdollx 2 years ago
All I can say is...Damn you did that
LittlePepper01 2 years ago
i love this
mandycndi 2 years ago
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icanshowyou1 2 years ago
my advocate so i know im late but damn ill find u to talk to you later you know who this is if not ull find out love you jas...
alluregivesmebreath 2 years ago
dis is sum gooood stuff produced in a very impressive manner dat makes ppl wanna hear more of u ...keep doin watcha doin..cz am feelin it
TheMobdiva 2 years ago
man...that touched me for realz....man...i dont kno what ta say...i kno how u feelin at the end...my mom was the same
whitney277 2 years ago
YO U MAKE ME WANNA WRITE AGAIN
MrsSmith5909 2 years ago
i love this...i gotta start writing again..
GuMMib3ArZ 2 years ago
i luv dis...i really felt it...uu inspired me 2 write one...and hopefully i'll put it up...iam kind just startin so...be lukkin 4 me
tinytify 2 years ago
wow...tht was some deep iish ..i feel u on tht ish tho ...but u got heart and tru talent
674tn 2 years ago
swear down Woman you are deep, i feel ur pain ...hear it in your voice an see it in your eyes.
i love what you talk about....real talk...i love how you say what you talk...with passion, emotion an realness. your words are meaningful truthful and beautiful x
utubeNatalie 2 years ago
3:36-3:43 Damn fam thats the fukin word.
moseybonkaz 2 years ago
all i can say is wow
took the words out of my mouth
MissChelie 2 years ago
thank you for brinqin my first love back to me . the way you portray your poetry brinqs me to tears . your sincerity . your passion . your presence . thank you .
you are beautiful . in and out .
nothin but talent ;; nothin but truth . damn nothin but thank yous . keep it up mamaSz . He's got big plans for you ,
DATFYR3F3MM3 2 years ago
That's some real deep stuff right there.....You've gt talent babe , use it to your advantage and make a career out of it......
rengirl1 2 years ago
so deep i love u i love listenin to u real talk
LILLESBIONIC 2 years ago
i thought it was pretty obvious it was not. i.e. the description says poem. thanks for watchin
zulumaster 2 years ago
was that supposed to be a rap? ;
itsthemurkallman 2 years ago
omg. i feel your pain...... beautiful poem =]
SexyKiwi56 2 years ago
DAMN.......TRUTH
I CAN FEEL YO PAIN
skatergulr2 2 years ago
MAN DAT STUFF WAS DEEP, BUT ITS SO TRUE SO MANY GO THROUGH DAT SAME SHIT EVERY DAY N NOBODY EVEN PAYS ANY MIND JUST BC OF DER HOMOPHOBE BULLSHIT.
real talk right now dat was HOT!!!
jjcolio1 2 years ago
urrr big b!!!
"sex hu u want, they'd already labledd u"
RuthlessBaller 2 years ago
WOW U ARE VERY TALENTED
sexytunes 2 years ago
yo...jus wanted to hit u up even tho u dun got alot of comments tellin u how great u are. i can really relate to this stuff and i see you speak and i almost wanna cry. i write too. i grew up in a christian family. my mom has alot of questions. i don't have the answers. when i played soccer with the boys it was amusing...it's no longer fun and games.
words are my escape. i wish u the best...with everything. hope you're not as confused as i am. i'm about to get ready for church...funny right?
camucha23 2 years ago
wow babes....
you have a wonderful talent...
you poetry gets to me everytime i hear one..
i feel as if you saying things people won't admitt!
or even tell to there parents...
just like iam2intelligent say you have tears rolling down my eyes.. so i am going to say its UNWRITTEN!!!
StyleSoDope 2 years ago
no words could explain how talented u are
demassy08 3 years ago
wow... I have to say that the ending of this poem hit home for me. Its like you know all the words that brain thinks and my heart feels but my mouth wont say. " IT IS WRITTEN" tear fall. I dont know But God Gave you a talent and you are hitting it full force and on the nail. Two snaps and five Stars.
iam2intelligent 3 years ago
tHiS iS HEllA H0T
i HAVE A CRUSH 0N UR TAlENTS
=)
LelePooh10 3 years ago
o wow! u's a beast fareal!! that shit it hott!!
datkoogurl 3 years ago
you are a truly talented individual and i want you to keep up what you are doing, because i don't chase my dreams because of my shattered hopes. and i even have you posted on myspace so people can see your work.
gottaluvme68 3 years ago
I have found that you have so much poems. Can you speak some poem how the beauty of man and woman loving? Would be very nice a poem about this loving from you. WHAT ABOUT THE CHALLENGE??
22jan51 3 years ago
not a challenge. i dont always write the things i see in my own reflection. Most of things have absolutely nothing to do about myself. Im sure i can find one i already have. GIve me a minute to record it.
zulumaster 3 years ago
wow. this was amazing...ur amazing..keep up the amazing work lol...*claps frantically*
viadaboss 3 years ago
That sent chills down my body.
It was amazing.
tiffanyswishisyou 3 years ago
i dnt leev comments,but u touched my soul and i loved ALL u said.i'm older than u n i'm still dealin with my own"coming out" u really have power in ur tongue.stay strong and blessed.
reddylocks 3 years ago 3
thanks alot
zulumaster 3 years ago
OMG That was some real shit,you're right our stories are already written we just have to pray for the ones who can't deal with it.
RoscoVedro 3 years ago
thats so right man,..
Darklove1 3 years ago
i love this poem ...wish they had more poets like you at the cafe out here
beautifulSupreme 3 years ago
thts a damn good poem. i knw i can relate.
keep it up!
mimilevel 3 years ago
i absolutely loved it!
fyahchicko6 3 years ago
Sweetie, my prayers are with you... keep praying cause only one can judge you, FUCK THE REST.....be blessed in his love
latrese73 3 years ago
Dat wuz deep
kiagurlo8 3 years ago
Omg this is so deep like i really dont know what to say right now.. its all in my head but just cant find the words... I guess im speechless. In other words this was great
NeneMzGaPeach 3 years ago
omg..im so feeln u on dis..dis poem is da truth & its deep...u inspire me not 2 feel bad 4 maself but jus 2 b me cus dats all i kno 2 do..peace
tamekadashit 3 years ago
dis shit was tha truth
its sum real shit rite dere
37tiger49 3 years ago
profound B...
SOLITARY1984 3 years ago
I feel you and that is so deep....I am lost for words and I am never lost for words but "It's Written"
afwhite0123 3 years ago
i can relate 2 all u said, i love da way u feel ur style and ur flow, im diggin dis, i listen to da poem everytime i get 2 chance 2 and i thought i could write a comment cuz ur flow is amazing
queensfear 3 years ago
its written
teraboo89 3 years ago
damn yo i digg dis shii
madd skillz
kisses4rmAstud 3 years ago
damn girl... im lost for words... damn is all i can say XD... god damn
shorty1469 3 years ago
omg omg omg..ok not sure if my other comment went thru but this is soooo amazing. damn yo..im on the edge of my bed not tryna move til its over..this is so real. its so beautiful to see how someone could transform words/experiences and put it into an art form to express one's self. damn, jus amazing..a true gift. this was something i could relate to. im glad you became the person you are because of wat you went thru and that you made it thru..god willing, you will continue thru..
downelink2005 3 years ago
dat junk made me wanna cry. I could relate 2 almost every word u said. And at the end talkin bout ya moms...i really feel ya there.
NiiQuEnJayJayy 3 years ago
now this was brilliant!!!
brilliantchic 3 years ago
You made me cry towards the end....i felt what you were saying i go through it with my g-ma. Its like they will never understand.
mzgunn1 3 years ago
WOW...U MAD3 M3 CRY!
ncprincess2007 3 years ago
damn mama i feel u this shit is deep
DCFemme0711 3 years ago
you sexy
youngclem06 3 years ago
i love dis poem u got madd skills big ups ma
pinkpassion105 4 years ago
man, u got me thinkin and shit, dude u betta b bussin A's in English lol but i empathize if that happened 2 u, i take out a piece of my heart and giv it 2 u, on the real
sincerlyurs123 4 years ago
o yea this right here realist words i ever heard come out of any ones mouth..
jadadarealist07 4 years ago
omg u fuckin rock u da shyt yo! added to my favs
kjordan89 4 years ago
this is deep
shynene168 4 years ago
Very Deep.... real talk
sarahmaria06 4 years ago
BEAUTIFUL!
HEADY1313 4 years ago
I feel this poem every time I hear it, it's like a fingerprint I know those words....I know who they belong to..your right I think I like this one better.
studkings 4 years ago