Fallen Angel (original song)

[Bogdanbmm]

I like it ...

[keepaopenmind]

Very good! The guitar sounds great. Your voice is a little soft. Good lyrics.

[michiyo1986]

nice lyrics :)



[toni12318]

great job :)

love it !!! <3

[MrDubliner81]

AnonOf31, what on earth are you even talking about? DO you have difficulty in expressing yourself??

[AnonOf31]

Just horrible... I feel sorry for the new guitarist of the world... they learn how to play fapping or pushing some chords a friend have told them.... GIRL YOU PLAY JUST LIKE A MAN FAP!.... that's why I gave up guitar, ppl just like this crap songs.... (not talking anything about the singing part)

[sharmaineandluvena]

you really make no sense

[MyAngelFallDown]

I've lost my worlds. me too, i can say i can relate to the lyrics.

good job ^^

[alyssataubin]

Great job! I can really relate to the lyrics.

[nikki2988]

this is sooooo cool love ur voice!!! and love the music uv made wid da guitar....chords are too gud!!

[xforgottenkatie]

all you need to do is sing a little bit louder you have an amazing voice though :]

[Hollyzondo]

i like your song a lot but u arent the greatest singer (sorry) but i really did like your song and i think you should write more :)

[ToeJamm94]

Mmm, that was really good. :)

you should put that on myspace, so i can make its my profile song. :)

[ColeLene47]

awesome!!! nice playing!!!! XOXO, ColeLene47 great!!!

[agreatactress]

I love the lyrics, but I think you could made it more upbeat. I can't believe you wrote this in 10th grade.

[dancinlikeafreak29]

omg i love this songg !!!

i write songs too but im afraid to sing em(:

but omg i love this songg !!!!

[alyssataubin]

sing them! or have someone else sing them. :) I write songs and they're on youtube. It's a lot of fun! Post them and let me know so I can watch. you never know what'll happen.

[cultclassices]

You and your sister are great! Are you guys working on more songs? YOU ROCK!!!

[sharmaineandluvena]

thanks!

yes, we are working on new songs right :)

[TinyPeopleRule]

u r really good buh ur voice is quiet try using a mic <<< i dunt mean to be mean or anyting it jst sowndz like if the guitar is takin over

buh thats great your owsome and the lyrics are greatt

[Yeeehawwwww]

real pretty song and lyrics etc but tbh u aint a great singer (u r ok but not great) but really lovely song and dont mean to be 'orrible :( sorry xxxxx (love ure cover of love story btw!!)

[AGoodServingOfJB]

LOVE IT <3

[bonnie0123456]

You are AMAZING

[whoevergolf1]

You wrote this song??? ok, you are not signing other managers. Your uncle, i.e. me - the money man - is going to be your manager. :PPP

[sharmaineandluvena]

ja, i wrote it :)

first one!

haha ok, you can be my manager if you want.

make me famousfamousfamous!!

[lucyfenworthy]

cool, i write songs too...good job!

[BackyardAcoustic]

Nice work...well done!!

[xxxTwistedDreamsxxx]

beautiful lyrics I really liked it. I really liked the guitar playing too, its awesome =DD

[sharmaineandluvena]

thank you =]

[morgann916]

you guys are amazing!!!

i found you through tswifts facebook page

keep putting ur stuff out there

you will deff get noticed! :]

[sharmaineandluvena]

thanks!

[Hamix3]

This is really awesome! Such a great song!

[sharmaineandluvena]

Thank you!

[FutureMizJonas]

awesome! i like it

[xNotUrAverageGirlx]

AMAZING!!!! You wrote a BEAUTIFUL song!!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!! =D

[Jenarielxox]

LOVE IT SHARMAINE!!!

[twilightergurl423]

this is really good!!!

[sharmaineandluvena]

thanks!