Accompaniment started off a little awkwardly. Sounded like two different songs. You moved into it after a verse but I think it would be better if you altered the melody to suit the accompaniment since you don't want to do the traditional sound. Sounded better toward the centre of the piece. Haven't heard the last half yet but sounds like you're moving toward the traditional sound. I like it though.
Accompaniment started off a little awkwardly. Sounded like two different songs. You moved into it after a verse but I think it would be better if you altered the melody to suit the accompaniment since you don't want to do the traditional sound. Sounded better toward the centre of the piece. Haven't heard the last half yet but sounds like you're moving toward the traditional sound. I like it though.
lovinSpoonful 2 years ago