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  • Not lupe but the games a fiasco/ sick and tired of hearing shit from all of these assholes/ speaking bout dro and all of the cash flo/ but everybody knows if you had that dough/ then you wouldn't brag or boast/ you'll be locked in a crib/ probably holding a toast/ paranoid of cat coming in to roast/ stop all the bullshit and all the drama/ this hip hop/ dishonor brings bad karma/ rapping bout Prada will get you eating by piranhas/ flows deadly/ rookies shouldn't try to navigate these waters.

  • "See, I couldn't walk the walk

     Couldn't really talk the talk Had to get my talk to properly explain my walk Cause this lack in talk had my walk lookin' off"

  • fuck those cunts man let em be theyre worthless// a bunch of centipedes who would never reach the surface// im sendin dead MCs n enemies in hurses in dead n beef in every week they'll never leave the churches

  • check out my remix to this song

  • THE DOWNLOAD LINK IS IN MY SOUNDCLOUD PAGE PLEASE CHECK OUT MY VERSION OF DIS TOO just type in soundcloud . com / therealjayj youtube doesn't let u post links on comments :(

  • yo you gotta reupload it my dude, the link ain't working and we feining for this

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  • I got da give ah gab/Grab a pen & pad/Its not copy written nigga  here u can have/Dis & then some/My lyrical tantrums/Can get any 1 a handsome ransom/Its been a long time since I wrote & formed rhymes/Da game now a days filled wit simple flowin' lines/And simple slow minds/I'm sick when flowin' mines/Nobody gives a fuck when dis shit is online/Its all a Fiasco niggaz actin' Lupe/A Failure writing rhymes cuz his shit sound stupid/You wanna click the "like" but to coward to do it..See, I knew it!

  • I wanted it to include the little add on like the sound of the soda opening and stuff... :/

  • i did a remake to this song playing off of an influence of "the cool" and im gunna be honest im a kid from a small town. i really dont care about "making it big" just want people to listen to my music for fun. and id appreciate comments and what not to see what i need to do to get better. type in soundcloud(dot)com/samstoy and let me know what you think. thanks in advance to anyone who decieds to give it a listen its appreciated

  • 10 people are FAILURES!

  • flow dope got to push it like 100 oh the highway blood shot the condition that the eyes stay low till my nigga give the heads up and he cue yall like we playing for the 8ball leave you wetted in the pool hall where my angle is to school all word board of education turn the tables just to switch my situation flipping keys have Alicia demonstrating

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  • Lupe massacred this song!! I had to use a lot of resources just to understand the first verse! My favorite EMCEE!

  • listen up cranberry juice in my cup no liquor im soo swavey the niggas fallin out my charisma got his head in the hills so i whisper in his ear i got some simplistic shit that will make u feel lke ur on a pill listen im a silent kill ya no pistol but my rhymes are solid thick bt steal sit still pracitcin the pages my feeling i spilled ink up the paper to it bled im thicknpaid remember my name fuck what ever you claim born in LA cali but thats not what i claim im bangin my own shit this is #TNP

  • 9th wonder made this.

  • J. Cole's Version is called J. Cole - Quote Me

  • @JvanThaBeast IT'S CALLED TOP OF THE WORLD

  • @JvanThaBeast *Correction It's called "On Top The World" he wrote his verse for Jay-Z, search J. Cole talks about On Top of The World. You can't miss it.

  • i had this beat 8 years ago. i believe nottz produced it. dont know how i got ahold of it but this was some time ago. 2003ish

  • drake version called im coming lupe failure and j cole got a version but his hard as fuck to find

  • @TheMavnificent Drake's version is "Comeback Season"

  • before u think drake killed this beat please listen to failure he said sum stuff youll actually have to look up to get his punchlines are so clever in this song like omg

    plus this is a juelz santanna beat not lupe or drake it is just better known by drkae but better made by lupe

  • Vote up if you been lookin for this beat for so long under drake!!!!

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  • Fail,funny when ya high

    In most cases,not

    Even a dime couldnt make change out of mine..excuse me,

    See i ain't a coke,I'm a D-O-P,

    for ever a non-go getter,

    That's word to the E,

    ...F...then on up to the D,

    Did home work but never really could C

  • THUMBS UP if Ya think i Killed this shit!!!

    _Eskimo

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  • Rare aha wht is this beat a fukn pokemon or smtin

  • I never been a...F

    I guess i cant Pro-Nounce the word

    therefore i denounce the word

    i stay away from... all the scoundrels..birds

    they play the block...& be surprised when they get kicked to the curb

    told me to move that rock... i said ill stick to my words

    now instead of a cell block...a niggas toothpickin hors d'oeuvres

    so many beautiful celebs...now i get to dick they daugh-ters

    & best believe they all freaks like Montana fishburne

  • j cole said he made this beat.... ? is that true and could someone explain.

    thank you

  • @jrocEnglishClass Drake goes over this beat too. Cole makes pretty much all of his own beats, so I wouldn't doubt it.

  • @jrocEnglishClass both beats use the same sample. and since the sample makes up like 90 % of both beats they sound the same. lupe added the guitar and a new kick snare pattern. Jcole didnt really add anything just chopped the sample up. the sample in the beggining of Idris Muhammad - Could Heaven Ever Be Like This. if you listen to it you will see what im talking about. they just flipped the same sample slightly different.

  • @jrocEnglishClass he did make a beat similar....it just used the same sample.

  • @jrocEnglishClass i think lupe made the beat, then j.c and drake just rapped on it, oh and j.c.'s version is different with the drums, so im guessing he chopped and screwed it from lupe's failure. Hope this helped

  • juelz santana this is me, from '05 had a dope version too

  • @im2chicago yea thats where I first heard this sample, I wish i could find that instrumental over this one

  • @ThisisCarbon16 thats a j. cole beat. im not sure what its called i think its top of the world

  • @ThisisCarbon16 thats a j. cole beat. im not sure what its called i think its top of the world

  • @NadoDaGreat2008 I know wat ur talkin but Juelz had it way b4 Cole did and it's not even the same its jus the same sample but the beat itself is different. Listen to "This is me" by Juelz Santana the beat is different.

  • Im never guna fail/ im never lettin up/ Bring haterz down to scale an ante up/ this cant be luck/ I stand 4 wut ? i stand 4 real hiphop-thez criticz iz twisted/ im on another level koz thez lyricz r gifted/ itz critical how u can u listen an stil get lifted/ an i advise.. that start listnin/ open ya eyes an gaze upon a true vision/ im talkn literal im bringn that heat / press play an dont hesitate to speak !

  • this is j.cole top of the world

  • @pillowbagprince J Cole used Lupes beat =)

  • i found it :)

  • i think this was produced by nottz?

  • At first when reading the title I was he called Lupe a failure, I was going to come on here to talk enough shit.

  • what up? im a 15 yr. old rtist from NC, check my channel for dope music from a young artist! you wont be disappointed, i pwomise :P #RealHipHop

  • What matters is notches in my timeline/ If I'm doing something different every 5yrs....then growth wise, I'm doing fine

    The seperation between LUV & HATE is a thin line/ & lately I feel hated...but I turn it into motivation.......to soon say " Momma I made it" save your work checks you living on my dime!

    I go H.A.M with AH cheeez/ even tho the BREAD seldomly leaves/ crust in the stiching in my dungerees/ for that little girl, I'm an ALTRUIST......even if I have to AIM to PLEASE!

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  • Me im on it like glaze my lines have you dazed likea jab from muhamed ali back in the days where it wasnt all about gettting money and getting payed back in a era where real music was getting played even tho it wasnt Christ based im here to cleanse the industry like olay wipe the dirty pores off its face raise up a new breed , new caliber new steed where what follow is the Bible in a time where its so hostile but some will persecute just like they did to apostles. heres a call to think a littl

  • I honestly feel like this is an instrumental that should be off limits.

  • moneyy nd lovee straiqht in thee middlee likee a centerr foldd/

    typee of lifeestylee neverr qetss oldd/

    bp is thee namee soo juss lett myy words flow;

    i let know...up to brinq em down/

    stop just to look aroundd/

    stacks makee a haterr frownn/

    look awayy on these type of dayss/

    fuxkk whatt a haterr sayy/

    do these typee of thinqs to crushh a hater dream..

  • fingerlicking get these chickens frikased yes/niggas dont tempt me dont test/ everybit of word play fresh/guess its cuz im brushing with crest

  • harlem brooklyn manhattan staten the bronx/im on the bars like shots/SHOTS!! inject them 2 the dome like thoughts/on the floor like mops/and im a mop top with the locks/but the hands never stop/ like the hands of a clock/i done seen alot of souls like a sock/ grab ahold of the glock/sending souls into shock/if you can throw a brick slang a rock/and my district 23 so i guess its just jayz on the block/unafraid you aint go to be brave to get shot

  • failure was never the option i guess im here for a reason everything is better when its breathing i was born in the 4th season watch it start, im talkin corperate meetings important house calls where ya spouse on the side saying honey are you right and you say go back to bed kuz a million's in sight im startin to never sleep its impossible to dream when you doing what you thinking and reality's at ease AL
  • "brace yourself like overbite"

  • It's MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE... soldiers! Now let me put the streets down like steamrollers...

  • @staleyman13 with cats that push....40oz's thru the hood, like king cobras!!!!

  • where can i dl it ??

  • I let em know/ I'm never given up/ A nigga come too mean/ To really give a fuck/ I make you niggas mad/ I see you feelin tough/ But I'll let it go/ Cuz you aint really much/ You just a little somethin somethin/ That I call a minor/ And I'm a major motha fucka/ Just for the reminder/ I'm chill in this game/ I think I need a recliner/ And I'm about to blow up/ I think you hear timer/ My lyrics get colder/ My bitches get finer/ And I'm a crazy motha fucka/ Lookin for a signer? Anyone? AH Killed it!

  • da pastor stands back from the podium..the holy ghost holdin him..so much...so such sodium..layed flat lenolium..put anotha hole en em..im rollin em..the blunts..i been rollin for months..yaw know im on the hunt..u know i wont bunt..cause i hit em out the park..when i let em out to bark stalk on them hearts..yaw cant stop me im hot..ugh..hotter then the last thing you said u hotter then..higher then your god..i gotta win..i can take out alot of men wit the blot of pens..kill em an its not a sin

  • seeps like blood dem big slugs, put holes in ya mugs, 40oz just pouring em up, for my niggas of the same trade, on the wrong side of the tracks, see they serve life sentences, while im writing mine threw a pen, same pin that he in, see these bars run deep like sewer lines, you can tell im the shit, farmers kicking pails of my spit, they maneuver my manure,like i told you u from the sew-her, the law suits serve and assist the rich, thats why im a failure out this bitch

  • kick push like Lupe FIASCO

    blow ya ear drums every time i FLOW

    i aint super man but i am a HERO call me Mr. messenger cuz i let these niggas no 1go!!!

    i am a MC

    above the world like ''nigga can u see ME''

    not gangsta but i am a real G 14 of age but don't show me sympathy

  • Tell me if i can rap or not!?!?? Hear me UK HIPHOP ARTIST(JUST GOT IN STUDIO)

    Reny Kick.

  • Hey, Boy Wonda Here To Do It/I Make Niggas Truently Influenced when i Do This/ Write It Down, While She Wipe Me Down/Fuck You She's my Wifey Now, Now The Bitch All Hyphy Now/wanna Cypher? Where I'm From We Call It Cyphii, Cuz Everyone Else Around me they just Say They Really like Me/Damn, Iller Than a 5 year cancer patient/Disrespect me is Like a 1 hour Dance Wit Satin/Yeah I Said It, The Book Of Rhymes i Overread It/Now Im Get No Credit While Soulja Boy Get Expenses./Thats Some BS.. and we NEXT

  • @B0YW0NdA951 how many times are you gunna say me 

  • is this the original? who made the beat?

  • @irRASSINal1 Nottz made the beat.

  • diggy did his think to this beat

  • @YouGetTheCannon diggys whack

  • @3dakainsane i understand that he was always pampered and rich but the kids got talent and theres no denying that.

  • FINALLY FOUND THIS BEAT!!!!! I COULDNT FIND CUZ I KEPT SEARCHING "DRAKE- COMEBACK SEASON INSTRUMENTAL" LOL

  • @DDLQ17 You already know - Lupe is the creator and destroyer of this beat. No one should even come near it since he went in on it.

  • @DDLQ17 Welcome to the club bro aha

  • @DDLQ17 me too lmao

  • People could at least get facts right in some of these verses or don't post them at all just make a video with your song and stop wishing to be put on cause yall getting laid off plp will steal bite nibble or whatever

  • get ya money/dont study me/ day n night,like da KID CUTIE be/shit...bitches all into me/ she belong in my privacy/bougt a prada piece/wit da collar creased/ and my dollars speak for my honesty/ u niggas softer den a cotten seed/i been seein money since a tadpole/and i smoke weed by da dam bowl lol/ gettin high till my eyes close/ where did time go/ it flew by like my whore drob/ im da shit hole cow load/ yall burn dutches cause it burn slow/ i smoke swissers cause dey hit moe/

  • Haters fake cant get passed stage fright, tell em this T.I. we the killas who have the street side, Companion we the niggaz that grew up around this street life, we been through the lows we know how it is in the ghetto. Terrible. But to use it was normal life to us. Having sex with hood rats from the ghetto clubs. Follow us we the niggaz that them hataz be afraid of. No love in our souls we to pressed. Having my best friend get shot near the East side projects.

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  • nice,

    but did you ad a flanger or sumthn?

  • a lot of ppl just hate hate hate.

  • this is lupe fiasco???? this sounds like j. cole: on top of the world

  • @TheSoloKid95 Boiiii, this is before J.Cole was even thought of.

  • @NicolasPerkins i knw, thts my point. J. Cole must've sampled this

  • @TheSoloKid95 yeah, you're probably right. UNLESS. Lupe sampled it, and then J.Cole sampled it a different way. I'm not quite sure. I just know Lupe did it before J.Cole came out.

  • @NicolasPerkins tht cudve happened, bt Fiasco doesnt make beats does he?

  • @TheSoloKid95 not that I know of but he couldve asked his engineer to do it. 

  • @TheSoloKid95 j cole sampled it

  • Hella nice beat. Just need to add a little more rock drums an it'd be perfect

  • niggas be underestimating my intelligence my skillz, my aggression obliterate souls with deception bring it, no hold backs, no exceptions bones collecting and bashing ...da cypher was lost severely through fatal attraction game over to ya rapping grave yard niggas playin in their ashes grave narc niggas layin in caskets no victims shall walk, as long im active niggas still bumpin heads, he needs proactive freedom has been taken, he held in captive
  • guys like us cant be seen, invincible

    martians, red skin and tentacles

    where ya utensils, me dissing ya poems is intentional

    no accidental, i destroy you poets whose too three dimensional

    thru blood and sweat, this game is like chess its all mental

    subliminal pinnacles i decimate til its simple, from da dome to the pencil

    on the sheet thru the mic, i shatter ya vessels and ventricles

    damage is highly severe and critical

    niggas keep talkin reckless cause they on their menstrual

  • game tyme scratch that its change tyme tired of these lame lines niggaz spit the same rhymes lyrically indentical every syllable if u aint spittin bout sex money guns niggaz aint feelin u lol
  • good lookin.. i shall be recordin this..

  • so sick. who produced this?

  • @mrs9thwonder Nottz did.

  • Fucking hit and miss fuck this shit and lupe and all those on his dick

  • @NERV1233 lol @ calling lupe a hit and miss

  • a tool for the mold

    either build your success or get consumed by a hole

    a view and a poll

    they told me my opinion dont matter while they zoom on patrol

    the true get exposed

    thirsty for knowledge while the brew getting sold

    a flu and a cold

    ill will get a still chill in their tomb getting froze

  • the groove in the soul

    every step precise like the shoes with the the sole

    im choosing my role

    either attack or defend yo i move with a goal

    a few with the whole

    teammates try to slide home but they abusin the pole

    a crew with a stroll

    individuals dont measure up like a pool filled with trolls

  • trippin off the narcotics heart beatin fast like i jus did a hundred yard dash racin from my pass cant keep up nomore dnt kno how i last shutdown, overload there's an errorcode brain computin to much info everytime i smoke the in doe soul feels like it opens up the windows and let everybody in to my temple excuse me.... but can i see ya tickets this show is close door no cameras, recorders or camcorders exit all reporters this my land when u cross tht boarder
  • wats lupes next album.......

  • re-up the link, its down! can you put it on zippyshare or usershare

  • stop tryna act like you like me and my team

    Not us so you knock us

    That's precisely what I mean

    And dog

    It's forever clear

    My money evergreen

    My presence required in places you have never been

  • I realize if I want to find the light I have to heed my sight that means close my eyes outstretch my arms and read with my left and rights / must be my own fuel like the candle consume myself like Hannibal/ animal... its lunch time, here have some food for thought.. its raw like butchers move the blade across cut like drug pusher/ like a celibate I don't fucks with you keep my hands clean like a sweater of a Huxtable/ flow drains from my veins like vessels shuffle my matter like pressure

  • The way I make verses fit its in the genes like a seamstress Even with a Blac Label you can hear the Ecko of my genius Never snitch on your family, we never con Vicks Without the pursuit of money its nonsense, Its obivious punchin the clock is acostin time but Ill never hustle quarters just to drop a dime Every line is a bullet after 7 penetrated ya mind Addin tumor equals cancer that benign See that be 9 And this line is the Nine with barrel steamin Even U no that now you beaten One
  • Jus pointin out yo.. if peeps feel its horrible or just aint good then let the Cat who put the vid up comment on that he doesn't wont folks freestylin on it. People feel the flow and have a need to flow. It is wat it is.. nough said.. take it eazy.

  • @benzerds

    Shinin' Like A Diamond Ring, Better Enjoy It! Let Me Repeat Ya' Better Enjoy It!

    I'm A Hot Boy Burn Firewood, Lookin' For Ugly Bitches World Champion Tiger Wood.

    Spillin' My Cologne Eau De Toilet, Lindsay Lohan's New Bff The Public Club Toilet.

    First Bumpin' Ya' Girlfriend, Sex Was Too Ill And Then I Went To ya' Sister.

    Chief's Fuckin' Stingy, But I'm Still A Ass Licker.

  • GReat man!! I was looking for these to put in my alarm to wake up. I wanna wake up with this rhythm (lol)

  • i bleed seeds, so when im done bleedin fields is all i see's, please beleive, im forever dodgin the police, forever swattin these fleas, jeeze, smoke weed so sometimes my lungs wheeze, i grab the streets and squeeze, for days and weeks, weeks and months, always throw a decent punch, im a hungry guy that will steal your lunch, since i became a man i only shed a tear once, i got backs and fronts, stacks and lumps!

  • Drake did this song, Its called Comeback Season, its dope, i dont think he sampled it he used the actual beat.

  • man whea you found dis instrumental at bruh dis shit hard to find??!

  • the 10 ppl who disliked this are idiots. point blank period.

  • Drake killed this beat on his song comeback season, search it up if you have'nt heard it..

  • @djmanion23 still me and lupe killed this beat better nahh

  • @MCnejjj23

    Comparing Yourself to Lupe, Your Loopay!!!

    aka straight fake, your not rare,

    so your in the wrong place,

    i'm suprised u even showed ur face, U should dissappear like, mace

    i was born to replace, displace, dismantle Mc's, who think can really handle, the fact l expose them like sandals.

    Candle?, explains why i'm fire,

    that statment? shows your liar,

    Immitatiing majors when ur a minor.

  • @MCnejjj23 lol true :P

  • the link please

  • I like this song although I never fail

    Just a temporary setback. I'll still prevail

    You got to keep yo head up, even if the air is stale

    Fake rappers stabbing at the game. It's losing blood and looking pale

    I'm the doctor that will perform the surgery

    I'm a smooth criminal. I get away with burglary

    You need to listen up if you say you ain't heard of me

    I'm moving so fast all the haters are just a blur to me

  • ayo can you reup this? download link dont work

  • i get my energy, from my inner g beamin in outerspace, in a state of peace opposite of last, im always in the lead got these rappers hypnotized, Notorious B.I.G labels notice me, so i dont need I.D i was born to rap, so i spit bitterly i spit lyrically, i spit litterally spittin more verses than the carter 3 natural talent, more use of words than Akeela the bee packin so much juice, call me double D hip hop is dyin, might need to double me triple, quadrupal, fuck it i should start a breed
  • @AfghanStarProduction your first four bars are from actual songs..

  • any1 ever notice how this beat sounds ALOT like the beat J Cole did for the American Gangster album that Jay shot down

  • @85Warrior2010 They sampled the same song but flipped it differently, both are really good beats

  • last time I checked Lupe Fiasco didn't get signed due to his verses he posted on Youtube videos, just saying I'll dumb it down for ya, dont show us ur god awful lyrics

  • How creative is rhyming jerk with itself five times good job money4madness

  • Push push back and forth, till your arms hurt

    im gonna let my arms squirt, bullets let this Arm jerk

    you use your arm just to get jerked,

    i got a girl and she likes it when her ass hurts

    I can be a jerk and really whipe that smirk

    off your fuckin face, N i dont lurk I merk

    U can be the snitch n tell em how im a jerk

    N i'll see u in prision using your arm to jerk, yur boyfriend

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  • got an interior engine, now theyre hearin those pistons/ bigger figures for their scriptures, on a spiritual mission/ their killin with penicillin but i got embryo symptoms/ not a killer might, have a pillow fight, leave your pillow in crimson/ its so sick, this whole script, will take the flow out the ocean/ then throw in the same magnitude of heat that you get from a summer solstice/ duel to the death, no swords, but with a pencil/ then bury your body after i destroy this instrumental

  • anbody who is a keystyle and wants to step up to this bullshit people talk about us, then vote up on some rhymes, im sick of every fucking highest rated comment on these instrumentals being stupid motherfuckers who dont understand this might be the only way that people can get out there dream....they are the haters they are they enemy keep doing what you do and lets put some hot shit on these instrumentals and shut them up

  • this is aimed at maca the epitome of a cracker between U and eric foreskin i cant tell whos whacker

    between the two of U theres 20 thumbs up that means theres 22 people as dumb as U and thats dumb as fuck

    why U keep hating son is it cause you aint getting none youll just keep hating on untill U finally get some

    then people will hate on U and youll get your own dose then youll really know why this hating really needs to stop folks

  • Everythings gettin insane in here...but people say im the one thats crazy/

    Scuse me mis-ter-lec-ter-esque-bet-cha havent seen a mirror lately/

    See im isolated with the lyrics daily, and yall dont have to save me/

    cuz i guarantee if that girl couldnt, then im damn sure that this game wont break me/

    its mine for the tak-in, with all this money meant for mak-in/

    and with how i made-it cant none of yall knock on my cre-a-tion.

    -Proph- ....6 bars

  • i thooght this was j cole beeat? ...guess not

  • @ADAtl11 nope j.cole and drake have re used it.

  • @ADAtl11 j. cole used the same sample to make another beat.

  • Why the recycled lyrics gottem laughing.

    Sorry but that was said way back when,we'll call it last gen.

    Looking Atari,hissing kissing snarling.

    But we just kick back,write facts an dream hard,

    ,

  • Like im lost an wheres the beat sir?,

    About half way up,mid range in the bleachers.

    Wishes washed away through the rain,add sand an it'll leave dirt.

    Saying Why what i seek hurt as the slowest man said me first.

    Stranded ina desert like me thrist.Believe im cursed.

  • sampled from Idris Muhammad's 'Could Heaven Ever Be Like This'

    the drums are forever dope

  • fagget ass drake

  • We use to sip sodas , now we drink king kobras with a blunt in the lip liek fuck being sober, im high all 24 like rang rovers, games over, take pain an wayne, out the game an call it shame over, cus yall to blame for hip hops disection, faggot ass rappers gettin erection, off my reflection, when i shoot bars like a weapon, get steppin, this is salem im reppin, yall jus failing in deception, for u its not about rhyme skills more like nine mills, its crappy i got crime deals an rhyme real im happy

  • hate it or love it IDGAF

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  • my musics rare like senators who care/ Lay flows down like the law everwhere/

    heavy here you need a spot for me hear/

    if he ain't big as life you shoud disappear/

    if you job is to beat me pick another career/

    I'm to good to be beat I'm fly as angels dear/

    yall buscits made fresh from chick fillet

    I go hard has a buscuit sitting out all day

    try all you want but ain't nothing gonna change/

    my hear want move pain wrapped it up in chains/

  • , smashed in from the front, to back, in the back rollin up a fat blunt rap, listeining to one rap, one track , from the kid chris mess no gun rap, jus fun rap, early shine track like the sun settin in the sky lines fat, i love salem its a mans place, facing same charges as my gramps case on some dawn shit, charges with some mobb shit, with money stack as tall as a hobbit , in the rap hall of fame in In the S-A - L-E-M, chris for the kids tell a friend

  • A lot of these Youtube verses are just fucking horrible

  • can you do better?

  • @HolikidTV the people that can do better don't post verses on YouTube videos. Haha

  • @ForemanErik aint that the truth

  • @ForemanErik Please check out my video...Yves Bruno "mr popular" and feel free to leave some feedback, i would gladly appreciate it ..thanks

  • @ForemanErik Well said

  • @ForemanErik FINALY someone says it!!!

  • @ForemanErik

    loll truee man, I don't want someone jackin my shit...I jus write to the beat and record it myself

  • yours is the best though. I'm a huge fan

  • you're probably right though I'm sure some of these people take these seriously.

    I shouldn't shit on their parade

  • it's all good. I say fuck this and the verses people type out. If you got skill, man up and record them. Takes balls, but it's a lot of fun. I have my own recordings I'm working on getting up

  • why are you writting this, just go do your thing. obviously your as lame as us people who write on youtube except worse cuz your reading what we write then taking the time to critcize. But if you like being that lame keep doing your thang

  • I didn't criticize anyone. I just said if you think you got the sick flow, record your shit.

  • my fault i'm just used to hearing verses from people like Lupe.

  • @maca2290 not all of em check my rap to this plane instrumental by wiz i just commented on it

  • @maca2290

    fuck yeh man.

  • @maca2290 Dosent mean you have to hate on the ones who feel the music.

  • @maca2290 and the good ones are from idiot rappers. Why idiot rappers? cuz they post it on a public site where someone can easily steal there verses! lol.. what a shame.

  • @maca2290 yo just give them a chance to get better yo

  • @maca2290 lols well not everybody is going to be good and if there not good now theyll get better thats hip-hop everybody doesent start off beast

  • @shadowstep583, Big L did.