It wasn't horrible, but timing is a big issue in the backing music... Lyrically it's quite good and accurate :) but it seemed like you build tension reapeatedly, only to drop back to something of a 'weaker', 'not-punchy' verse with litte/no beat, beyond a clap. It overall ain't bad, sorry to be an analyctic about it, it just seems like you have some potential and it's gotta be stretched. :D
It wasn't horrible, but timing is a big issue in the backing music... Lyrically it's quite good and accurate :) but it seemed like you build tension reapeatedly, only to drop back to something of a 'weaker', 'not-punchy' verse with litte/no beat, beyond a clap. It overall ain't bad, sorry to be an analyctic about it, it just seems like you have some potential and it's gotta be stretched. :D
davdud101 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
best song ever
thejabbawakees 8 months ago