Rack City-House Remix (First House Track Ive made)

[jayzg60]

2:41 killed it, and not in a good way

[Notveryseriousgamer]

You could seriously be big! I wanna hear you on the radio! hope you do well :)

[mortykaj]

This is the worst shit i've heard in my enitre life

[DjSaibeat]

I'm also 15 years old, and making house music, and still learning.

Check it out /watch?v=1-PLXU51A5s

[AJMILITIA]

The flow is terrible. Combining two completely different beat patterns is not good. 

[OnyxxHD]

How the hell you make the opening? It sounds such,,,,, professinoal:D

[PvMTybo]

this kid just keeps getting better!. keep up the good work. better make more!!

[TheOfficialReptyx]

at 2:41 it started to suck :/

[VCLACROSS15]

When u do a suspense builder like at 2:30 don't do a light beat after. 2:41 should have been a bass drop right there. That really would have kicked the mix up. And yea bit repetitive but 1st mix so its w.e

[xMineCraftAHolicx]

@VCLACROSS15 So true!

[b4ller97]

Its ok but too repetitive and got annoying after a while

[MultiRAMPAGE101]

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[MultiRAMPAGE101]

@1AirBatt

[Freddikanalen]

You are f**king cool but this is your first House mix so i understand why this is not as good like the anther songs!

[1AirBattle]

at 2:30 i got pumped and then at 2:41 the song went to shit

[iOozeEPIC]

@1AirBattle ahahaahahhahahhaahahahahahahah­aahahaahaha! OMG LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOL

[edwardlolinglawrence]

sort out your timing

[TheT4NN3R]

If your 15 and u can do this I can't wait to see what stuff ur gonna be layin down as progress

[b53coakley]

Best one so far

[Currymancer]

nice

[DjEddymix21]

The intro is dope the keyboard is over done...

[ascott5110]

Dude this is fricken amazing I love this sooooooooo much it's awesome music!!! U can really make it out there with music like this

[LeeTokyo4]

FUCK NO !

[1AirBattle]

sry dude your other stuff is cool but this just sucks dick 

[markidi89]

@1AirBattle I'd like to see you do better than this.

[1AirBattle]

@markidi89 O i have and if you tell me that my tunes are not as good as this you got problem

[markidi89]

@1AirBattle Buts its not my type. More interested in this.

[markidi89]

@1AirBattle I stand corrected.

[Trypsyn]

hey man, before i leave you some feedback on this guy, which DAW are you using to produce?

[SmdA27]

you're dope, keep it up (:

[iJtw]

Not bad, but it's missing something, can get a little boring. But considering your 15, it's good for your age. By the way I'm not trolling, just giving you constructive criticism

[xxxMURSUxxx]

Awesome just got a new subscriber!!

[lolsickpig]

well i love it, its amazing

and you just got a new subscriber!

keep it up man, you'll rock high school man!

[Evilplayer96]

very nice :)

[HunterSTRAIGHTupG]

This is good club music

[iphoneaddict2]

This man is amazing

[MegaItouchhelper]

FAIL

[ItzCrazzee]

@MegaItouchhelper ^^ this kid, lol

[XXXBleachfan989XXX]

@MegaItouchhelper its his first remix , so shut up.

[MrFennellable]

good song but needs way bigger base drop im my mind subed good luck

[x88NYR88x]

Great Job! Just downloaded it to itunes

[fivestarlesson]

not bad man

[FloweredDolphins]

I loved this so much. I showed it to my 'friends' they didnt like it. So they no longer have me as a friend :3 You will go far.

[sharpiesnifferr]

not bad

[DaleyStarr]

sick dude you got some definite potential :)

[DSharpVII]

little bit of feedback from a fellow musician, your tracks have potential to be sure, however, if you listen carefully to levels and party rock anthem and ghosts n stuff and pretty much all electronic songs that were really big hits you will find that instead of single notes the hook is a chord progression. So heres what i suggest, pick a major key, play around on the piano for a bit even if you have to find a list of chords and eventually youll come across something you like

[minihasahead]

jesus lad i wasn't expecting much when i clicked on your channel but yeah your good could really go somewhere and i hope you do to your good

[gavthe16]

to be fair, i have danced to a lot worst music than this at nightclubs and what not, its pretty good for a first song, just keep on working at it, you can only improve, Well done fella, keep it up

[NKofman]

ok this is way over-rated..

[TheRec662]

@NKofman sir are you on crack

[NKofman]

@TheRec662 no I am not. check out my tracks and compare them with, this. i'm not saying it is really horrible, but it is way over-rated. anyone with a cracked FL version could just add drums and a synth and loop it.

[Amits4321]

nice you have talent.. :D subscribed..

[MsIsrael323]

Pretty good

[L3G1T0Sh1T]

u guys should check out xenon's work its wayyyy better then this

[TheRec662]

@L3G1T0Sh1T you should stfu and die in a hole

[BlackMagicLionKing]

i really hope that you're not serious with this shit... this is so fucking boring because you used only like one fucking instrument and that avicii levels part... you are a fucking gay beast shitlord dark knight

[OfficialHelix]

what do you use to make this?

[FryImaging]

Pretty good!

[9ninjacool9]

I'd say for a first it's great just keep improving

[theninjaclan100]

Me Gusta.

[InfectedMIKE100]

Woo, punchis punchis pila pila si si

[FlyingMonkeysRMean]

Your really good for just starting but theres to much open space and the something something something city bitch is too long so next time you make a song make that part more shorter or faster and louder & you need way heavier bass drops & the Piano part sounds like a big time epic fail(to me) soo try and improve those things and I promise you would have way more fans, I still hit the like button and have full support on you so Good luck on your newer songs(if your making another one -Poison

[FlyingMonkeysRMean]

@FlyingMonkeysRMean Like this because I really want him to see this comment everybody -Poison

[metalicadude69]

Nice, add a little heavier bass drops though

[byronpop2]

not bad.. need more bass and a little more action

[Str8killer100]

Awesome keep it up nd keep improving 2 Thumps Way Up man

[Str8killer100]

Awesome keep it up nd keep improving josh 2 Thumps Way Up man

[PINKY17901]

pretty good, id say dont stop beliving no madder how many haters u get, just go for the goal.

[TheBlackmonda]

Go josh!!!!

[funky2886]

Damn dude you got some real talent keep it up.



[headshothamster1]

could be better , definatley but....theres somthing

[XenixaOfficial]

i am 12 and make i guess a sort of dubstep but this is nothing compared to my work

[TheJesusm2013]

nice

[its2in0the1numbers1]

same problem as with all amateurs. not enough instruments, so the song has no substance and gets boring.

[Muffinmixable]

It was great until 2:40. The notes are off. D:

[a7x107bFmV]

Yeah this isn't too good, but hey, if everyone told you it was perfect you wouldn't find it necessary improve so, construction criticism

[MPax4059]

I agree with everyone! But I would just say you need a little more bass throughout. I know your still working on it, and improving, but just a little friendly advice! Keep up the good work bro!

[robotfiredude1]

yo you got skill bro and ill definatly gona tell all my friends about you YOUR SICK!

p.s. keep it up!

[FreddanQ]

2:40 sounds like Avicii - Levels xD Is it that? But I don't like the keyboard as much..

[ItzCrazzee]

@FreddanQ yeahh it is similar:P soo i cant take credit on it, haha but yes, yes it is.

[BVBFUREVAA]

so sick keep it up

[ROCKLOCK997]

This is a really nice tune you are making here, I would love to see more from you! =)

[ShelliWelli]

Are you sure this is your FIRST house song, because your pretty good. I'm tellin all my friends about this. A little more bass, maybe, but other than that, I REALLY liked it. Keep up the good work ^-^

[mycathatesme22]

Guys, this is a HOUSE song, not a Dubstep. I agree that it could use some more bass, but its still amazing for this guys 1st song. He'll improve. And look at how Crazzee responded to snotoaster. He said "hes WORKING on it." So give him some time, and this guy is gonna get big. He works hard and deserves more credit. Keep up the good work bro. :) -Cat

[L3G1T0Sh1T]

lmao this shit is pretty bad keep workin on it

[penney2006]

sounding good dude!

[TOMSER1998]

TYGA :D

[XJackSkatesX]

what DAW are you using? My guess is Ableton or Live

[FrijoleroSamurai]

ha i know what to tutorial you used....

[M0D3Mofficial]

Haha, you made a good comment on that skrillex video. :p I was like tht 2. House music saved me. I love the music. from an electro-house point of view, though, I would say add some of those fading effects you would hear in a porter robinson or glitch mob song. but thats just me. Another suggestion is to not sample or remix at all until you can pay royalties to the original artists. :) I subbed so I can hear what your style becomes.

God Bless,

M0D3M

[Trikunjs]

MORE BASS!:D



[markos21332]

almost perfect



[iwishyouwereherenot]

you shouldn't say every song is the first you have made

[TheMightyClaybear]

Your first time? You fucking beast

[stardust1219]

I think its really good, of course, as others have already said, it could use a little more depth and a little less simplicity. But from all the people that say they're good, and that tell people to listen to their music, I'd have to say you're the best. Also, I realize the time it takes to make synthesized music so I appreciate all dubstep. LoViN iT[:

[Juggownz]

Keep up the good work brother

[1AirBattle]

only thing that I would tell you to do. Make the vocal samples match the beat. Also make it a little more complex. Otherwise its pretty good. Please check out our channel!

[pantera2002000]

this iz pretty good

[Snipxrs]

Just 60 mor views people :D(666)

[bloodCONTRA]

i like

[DivineRang3r]

Great for your first track! Keep it up friend C:

[AutmnWolf]

Hi, I saw your comment on a dubstep video, and I'm glad I did! You have some real talent sprouting here! It's very rare for when I find songs this good! Keep up the excellent work. :)

[roselinerave]

your art of music is Awesome. KEEP IT UP!!! The more you practice, the better you'll be!

[TheyCallMeLud]

dude, i saw one of your comments and I really wanna support you, ive been wanting to make some dubstep and house, because its is the first music that has spoken to me in awhile, I just don't know here to start with equipment. can you tell me what you use, man?

[n8ter539]

Lol nice fretrk1

[firetrk1]

I'm a freshman and my English teacher said I have no life caz I play COD all day but I don't give a shit wat he sayz anybody wanna play COD?

[MrRandomness89]

so you were spamming deadmau5 and saying that you were bullied and have no friends well your not good at dubstep either.

[Byronltuko]

Nice dude, its pretty cool keep up...

[0123Ilovekicks]

You should have done it in dubstep and gone harder

[master14626]

i think ur music is awesome kid, i hope you get a good career and those losers who dont like you can fuck off!!

[1055boy]

I know randomness is a good thing in House and Dubstep, but this is just too much ;p

You're pretty good :)

[TranceForLife5]

This is house?

[MrFlopper321]

You are epic bro'!

But if i have to say something, i would appreciate that you didn't stop the music for some seconds, each time you where changing "style" of the beat c:

Btw, having two or three beats on top of eachother, would make the song even more epic, but that is just my taste. Sorry for mistakes English is not my first language ;)

[BrianHotChiliPepper]

Love ur style! Maybe add some bass drops. Otherwise, youre the new skrillex!!

[TheCody903]

its good for your first but the chorus doesn't flow very well where u have it

[Gingerspwnnoobs]

Majestic! A bit rough in spots, but other wise fantastic!

[MADGAMINGSAUCE]

OMG this is sooo beast!!! SUB AND LIKE THIS GUY!!

[coltonftw11]

at 48 seconds make it drop like a mother fucker that would then ern my my gratitude



[thebeastypencil]

i like ur style man :)

i reckon all it needs is a bit more depth -

keep it up

[BenjiRuls]

<3 your style bro

[Ox805JoelT]

awsome shit bro keep it up with your amazing style :) like every part bro

[snotoaster]

for my taste a little too "simple" if you would, i feel giving more sound harmonizing with a sharp pitch to it would be beneficial.

[ItzCrazzee]

@snotoaster i agree all the way, but im working on it ya know, ill be improving

[simmerdafukdown]

@ItzCrazzee Its alright needs a bigger baseline maybe try Electro House like Dada Life

[BiggyInHD]

@ItzCrazzee why didn't you put WIP in the title then ?

[Pandalvr4899]

Cool :)

[mayhailey]

Great job kid

[FadeFlareonUmbreon]

I like it, except on the keybard/piano or whatever that was, the two notes were conflicting too much. One was too sharp for the other to go good with it. Other than that, Good Job!!!!