ID advice a stronger narrative focus in the trailer, introduce the characters quickly and stick to one aspect or theme. U want to show more, make another trailer.
i dont think it would be so much of a bad movie as a bad plot. i watch this trailer, and i cant help thinking, what next? the whole movie is about one step in the characters arch. the ark starts, something happens, it goes up, then a climax, then the arch goes down. this film just seems to me that its supposed to have an arch, but in reality, that arch is only one step on a larger arch, that has yet to reach its climax.i see where ur going, but i just think the film needsa little more
@williamrafe1 i havnt seen the whole film, so i cant really say much for sure. but from what i gain from the trailer, i dont think its really clear why these characters are leaving,or if its really that necissary to leave town.it would seem to me that if they leave town,they need something else to happen for their story to keep going. i just dont think that the story is very crucial, that the events that transpire in it are really important enough to gain what i think ur looking for
@williamrafe1 OR... to say more in the trailer would give away the plot.. which is revealed in the film and has enough twists and turns you can't guess where the story takes you. Or what you said. Who knows? :) a 2 minute trailer can't possibly sum up the entire film.. nor should it... I hate American trailers of late that tell you the entire freaking plot sometimes. LOVE the INCEPTION trailer for example... great sense of the world, the characters. but no real plot line. GREAT HYPE.
@GavinMichaelBooth i dont think the audience wants u to sum up the plot into the trailer, i just think that u werent really clear on what drives the characters is all. im not saying the movie is bad, because i havnt seen it, but maybe the trailer wasnt all that good. idk
Where did you find these actors? Holy shit... generally shit actors are at least good looking (their only save point). But these clowns? C'mon... Even this trailer wasted my time.
I think after watching this and the "Still Here" trailer I'm impressed with the fact that it looks like these are two movies by the same director in fairly different genres that look appealing to me.
"Still Here" in that Garden State kind of way (that I will probably never be able to explain if you don't know what I mean) and this one is a different but still great way. I'd love to see the finished films when they're done!
lol radigan
VincentMichaelLongo 5 months ago
Put this on netflix and ill watch it
Hellogoodbye90gm 10 months ago
ID advice a stronger narrative focus in the trailer, introduce the characters quickly and stick to one aspect or theme. U want to show more, make another trailer.
Ex0dus111 1 year ago
i dont think it would be so much of a bad movie as a bad plot. i watch this trailer, and i cant help thinking, what next? the whole movie is about one step in the characters arch. the ark starts, something happens, it goes up, then a climax, then the arch goes down. this film just seems to me that its supposed to have an arch, but in reality, that arch is only one step on a larger arch, that has yet to reach its climax.i see where ur going, but i just think the film needsa little more
williamrafe1 1 year ago
@williamrafe1 i havnt seen the whole film, so i cant really say much for sure. but from what i gain from the trailer, i dont think its really clear why these characters are leaving,or if its really that necissary to leave town.it would seem to me that if they leave town,they need something else to happen for their story to keep going. i just dont think that the story is very crucial, that the events that transpire in it are really important enough to gain what i think ur looking for
williamrafe1 1 year ago
@williamrafe1 OR... to say more in the trailer would give away the plot.. which is revealed in the film and has enough twists and turns you can't guess where the story takes you. Or what you said. Who knows? :) a 2 minute trailer can't possibly sum up the entire film.. nor should it... I hate American trailers of late that tell you the entire freaking plot sometimes. LOVE the INCEPTION trailer for example... great sense of the world, the characters. but no real plot line. GREAT HYPE.
GavinMichaelBooth 1 year ago 2
@GavinMichaelBooth i dont think the audience wants u to sum up the plot into the trailer, i just think that u werent really clear on what drives the characters is all. im not saying the movie is bad, because i havnt seen it, but maybe the trailer wasnt all that good. idk
williamrafe1 1 year ago
Where did you find these actors? Holy shit... generally shit actors are at least good looking (their only save point). But these clowns? C'mon... Even this trailer wasted my time.
dantenorth 1 year ago
bad ass
thebose254696 1 year ago
I think after watching this and the "Still Here" trailer I'm impressed with the fact that it looks like these are two movies by the same director in fairly different genres that look appealing to me.
"Still Here" in that Garden State kind of way (that I will probably never be able to explain if you don't know what I mean) and this one is a different but still great way. I'd love to see the finished films when they're done!
DixieWolf8 2 years ago
OMG RADIGAN'S GOT A GUNNN!!!!
lmazz95 2 years ago 3
lol Mr. Radigan!!!
RaquelNakhle 2 years ago
the acting doesn't look so good but the direction and shots look pretty kick ass.
happening1982 2 years ago
Actions aren't usually my thing, but this actually looks awesome. Can't wait to see it.
WackdProductions 2 years ago
RADIGAAAANNN!! pumped to see this !
jkurcz3 2 years ago
id like 2 see this
have u ever considered entering this into any festivals?
DynomiteMan534 2 years ago
dude is this done or what? I want a copy already!!!
tbrazda 2 years ago
good job to everyone involved in making this film!!! especially my boy GMB and Kristi's brother..beauty job guys!!!
AffectedCampaign 3 years ago
Damn man, It looks really good. Excellent job with the trailer and hope it turns out to be a success.
smokingmonkeyvideos 3 years ago
lol mr radigan
Robisnotafag 3 years ago
RADIGAAAANNN!!
nickiradcliffe 3 years ago
Looks great, mate! Can't wait to see these films!
RossiFilm 3 years ago
Looks great. Did you submit to film festivals yet?
1hitwonderthemusical 3 years ago
Good looking!
beakbros 3 years ago
looking good, gav
tonjesml 3 years ago
looks good!
pamheil 3 years ago