Kanye west- Homecoming (TazzyManiak)

[Rasta123Mahn]

Everybody starts somewhere

[JayJay609680]

its a great start just keep practicing and i hope u make it big!

[TazzyManiak]

@JayJay609680 thanx 4 the support

[NickyNickG28]

ugotta long way. ITS THE HONEST TRUTH. USE THIS AS MOTIVATION KID. PEACE

[TazzyManiak]

@NickyNickG28 i will thanx

[xojonathan99]

Love it!

[TazzyManiak]

@xojonathan99 thanx :)

[xnipplecrusher123x]

did you make it?

if you did then its great

[TazzyManiak]

@xnipplecrusher123x yes i did. thank you 4 listening

[younvon08]

diss iss gudd . . .keepp practicinn . . . .practicee makee perfectt

[TazzyManiak]

@younvon08 thanx and i will

[Laogangstaa]

usually don't reply or do anything to the messages I get but, I like the lyrics and the message youre trying to get across, like mrbluntwrap said; tone the voice and youre good :D

[TazzyManiak]

@Laogangstaa wow thank you im tryna work on my voice. but i appreciat ur feedback so much. thanks again :)

[gudangsuratimotman]

Well, not my style.. but I like the piano loops..

[TazzyManiak]

@gudangsuratimotman well thanx 4 listening

[R2thug4life]

It sounds alright needs work do..??

[TheMrbluntwrap]

i think its allright but u need to tone the voice a little more. :)

[TazzyManiak]

@TheMrbluntwrap thank you. and i agree completely

[meeso23]

This Is great :D

ME IS LIKE ;)

[TazzyManiak]

@meeso23 thanks so much it means a lot to me

[IIxSTR3TCHxII]

well done g keep it up

[TazzyManiak]

@IIxSTR3TCHxII i will thanx

[hotstrike551]

keep it up :)

[bmelin]

I like it

[TazzyManiak]

@bmelin thanx man

[bmelin]

@TazzyManiak and thank you for sharing talents that are good

[bmelin]

@TazzyManiak and thank you for sharing talents that are good

[bmelin]

@TazzyManiak and thank you for sharing talents that are good

[killbobob]

its great i love ur pink butthole

[TazzyManiak]

@killbobob oh ok lol

[newyoungmusic]

i liked the lyrics, once you really get into the flow, you'll be even greater

[TazzyManiak]

@newyoungmusic yea im practicing thanks

[Scottbro1000]

fantasitc

[djoptahmus]

its nice

[left4F3AR]

@TazzyManiak i feel your comitment but you need to be singing with more passion, not to say that you was flat cause it was pretty good

[TazzyManiak]

@left4F3AR ok i hear you. Thanks for listening

[chestboard]

man that was amazing man for real

[TazzyManiak]

@chestboard thanx man

[jjdn8]

its ok

[GoodEnoughKid]

Its Good

[amycheyanne]

i like the beat but i can't hear you, u need 2 be a little bit louder :)

[TheMkRap]

goodd ....:)

[TazzyManiak]

@TheMkRap thanx

[punnkypo]

voice is flat man, i dig the beat and tune but change up your voice and it'll be legit

[TazzyManiak]

@punnkypo yea i know. but thanks

[mrfatpandaful]

go to the 90's era you'll find somthing to insprie you and get better

[TazzyManiak]

@mrfatpandaful ok thank you

[vipgirls2009]

i think it was cute but how old are you??? are you suppose to be cursing like that????lol.......but i see where you are coming from

[TazzyManiak]

@vipgirls2009 ill be 18 soon lol

[emilysvideos26100]

good

[prettykristy13]

its good, just put a little more emotion into it and it would be absolutly perfect, but other then that, keep up the nice work man :)

[WR4157]

Pretty flat vocals. Put a little more emotion in it and it will be better.

[leroy592]

Pretty good.

[freerun4uk]

good



[BigOldMrKnish]

cool, and thanks for sharing.

[mmmyyy26]

nice man ;)

[sleepingsheikh]

not bad (:

[procaScape]

Its good Men ;)

[jasamfan441]

that was pretty good man just got to speak up a lil bit more

[flamespitter917]

your*



[flamespitter917]

you need a more aggressive attitude with our music...get louder.

[Owdodo]

good one post more ^_^

[MrSupersoaker2011]

Good lyrics......

[smiley1995ish]

this was gud

[clardia99]

Don't be afraid of your voice. You have one, USE IT! You're good. Keep goin'!

[Sparow97]

is not the song of the year, but you're good.. keep workin and dont be afraid bout' the mic' sing louder

[jaydenluvsboy]

nice keep practising so yu progress

[jakejawsmusic]

This was actually decent :)

<3

[helloisaias94]

@TazzyManiak keep doing what u doing it good

[spoiledbarbie1200]

wtf is going on diz

[spoiledbarbie1200]

it nice

[brwneyedlove]

should told whoever it was to cut ur mic up. i was actually listening to ur lyrics spittin some real pain right there. but u ok. def need to keep on flowing and just let it flow. not so much of the tryin to make everything rhyme. but i'll be checking out anymore u put out.

[TazzyManiak]

@MsFriendsComedy thanks lol

[gaygirlputa]

ay nott bad its good yu just need some beats and be more clear with yur voice but good job you learn from mistakes!

[jayteekay100]

@TazzyManiak u got it - also, if u need some beatz, holla at a nigga. in a minute.

[jayteekay100]

u got flow...just emphasize ya wordz a lil mo and speak up! keep grindin! peace!

[helloisaias94]

pratice makes better

[mrfatpandaful]

the lyrics are there (BUT) "you gotta have the voice like" guru said.

[RossCawtonTV]

Nice Vid Man!

[Cmoneymil]

nice man its hot

[twowish4]

@TazzyManiak a pre-remake is like a mixtape but different

[twowish4]

you were on beat that's plus points for me and yeah if u put more emotion in it you will own this song but it's good though,(this is your 1st pre-remake)

[DenMorradiXD]

u got talent! x factor for the win!



[ogoscar14]

Yeauhp I agree with that one dude, MORE EMOTION and you got it!

[roanred555]

A little louder and with more conviction if you really mean what you're saying. Not bad. Keep practicing. You have a lot of potential.

[TazzyManiak]

@roanred555 Thank you man

[REV7verse9]

You have a nice flow and great raspy voice, but your lyrics are too strong. Would you play this track to Jesus? Im not judging you because you are making music, I see you have good potential, use your gift(s) wisely. Peace. 

[BledsoeKevin1]

good

[NeNe4981]

I liked it, just be louder next time. Keep giving it your all, and i promise you will go some where.

[OhanGeorge]

I would like it more if it had a positive message. Nice effort and don't give up.

[InspectriceGadget]

@TazzyManiak HAHA hun, i didn't mean ya'd to be sorry!!! x))

[imgreat234]

speak louder so i can hear what your sayin then i will give you my honest opinion but it was good!!

[TazzyManiak]

@imgreat234 thank you

[aidan21]

good but make vocals louder

[aidan21]

@aidan21 your good, put your voice into it and be confident dont hold it back, itl flow and sound better.

I like it.

[TazzyManiak]

@aidan21 thanks bro

[VuileTeef]

Make your voice louder the beat is too loud, also try to express yourself more, and try to make your voice more clear.

Just some constructive criticism

Let me know when you make a new video! :D

[MESmusicproduction]

very cool!

[adelwwe74]

good choice of instrumental

[InspectriceGadget]

Very good job (your voice etc..), and i like a lot this song! Nice choice of music also, then! Thanks for sharing! :o)

[TazzyManiak]

@InspectriceGadget Thank you man

[InspectriceGadget]

@TazzyManiak haha np from a lady! (but i know your "man" expression loool don't worry)...one of KW songs i like seriously!

[jonathan5759]

you got it keep grinden it out

[Minniemousecupcakes1]

@TazzyManiak yeah when ever u have a new video let me no. I really like how when someone gives u their ideas about ur videos u actually read them and consider it and say thanks for watching ur video. If u become famous dont forget me

[Minniemousecupcakes1]

I couldn't really hear u. But i liked it. I hate kanye west cuz what he did to taylor but that has nothing to do with ur awesome voice

[TazzyManiak]

@Minniemousecupcakes1 Thank you. and i will try to improve the sound on future vids. i appreciate u watching

[ThoseTwoBros]

Diggin it, just lower down the music volume next time so we can hear you clearly

[TazzyManiak]

@ThoseTwoBros thanks bro

[CHERUBIEL7]

The music was over powering your voice,I couldn't here all the words,but next time put a little more energy into it so people can feel the song with your voice and deliver the message.But it was good not great but good,however you do sound pretty good,rap it like you mean it lol. keep it up.giving you a thumbs up for doing your best, I would like to hear more...subscribing:)

[TazzyManiak]

@CHERUBIEL7 wow. Thank you so much. I really appreciate when people give me good feedback like this. Thanks so much for listening. And i will deff be taking your advice

[tclivingston]

I'm not saying it's bad at all but next time really think it through and make sure it tells a story like a book before you record

[TazzyManiak]

@tclivingston oh ok. thanks man

[TheBluefairy93]

@tclivingston Same here.

[tclivingston]

Um this is the reason it's money over bitches. Keep working hard perfecting your skill. Never get ahead of yourself. Know your limits and work within them. And if you gone redo a kanye classic make sure u do it rite.

[TazzyManiak]

@tclivingston thanks i appreciate it. and may i ask what i can do to do it right next time?

[TazzyManiak]

@Ev0lAnnA thanks

[Whippinazz]

This sounds awesome. and the sounds better than the last one.. thumbs up

[TazzyManiak]

@Whippinazz thanks

[A0M0A0N0I]

I Love It I subscribed.