Try to whisper the words, rather than belting them out. Reznor is barely above a whisper in the original, and belting the words out kinda removes the emotion a bit. You're also flatting now and then, as well as losing the tone.
Guitar sounds decent, might want to mess with your treble and such to cut some of the twang.
All in all, keep practicing, stay at it. You've got a good start. All criticism is meant to be constructive here.
Didn't do to bad, being as you've performed other ways in front of an audience, stage fright shouldn't be an issue for you, hope to see you in concert :P
kkingsternsloami sorry man but it was written by Trent Reznor of NIN and covered by Johnny Cash. If you don't believe me read the liner notes on his last album.
hhh you have a sweet voice :P
its been years so i bet you have changed the chords and are using the "right" ones ? :P
best wishes
Pierceher 1 week ago
Not bad for a first effort.
Try to whisper the words, rather than belting them out. Reznor is barely above a whisper in the original, and belting the words out kinda removes the emotion a bit. You're also flatting now and then, as well as losing the tone.
Guitar sounds decent, might want to mess with your treble and such to cut some of the twang.
All in all, keep practicing, stay at it. You've got a good start. All criticism is meant to be constructive here.
sypher68 2 years ago
Didn't do to bad, being as you've performed other ways in front of an audience, stage fright shouldn't be an issue for you, hope to see you in concert :P
devilreaper1 2 years ago
kkingsternsloami sorry man but it was written by Trent Reznor of NIN and covered by Johnny Cash. If you don't believe me read the liner notes on his last album.
donstepp 3 years ago
YOU FUCKIN RULE ALL THE REST JUST DROOL
BOOMBOXSHADOW 3 years ago
thats by jhonny cash originaly =)
kkingsternsloami 3 years ago
nope.
JordanAnarchy 2 years ago
y nope?
it is by johnny cash
XxMyLifelinexX 2 years ago
Its originally a NIN song
JordanAnarchy 2 years ago
Nice!
scottswan 3 years ago
Cool!
sigridsimmen 3 years ago
5stars
archangelofskullz 3 years ago
Loverly.
wheelsy 3 years ago