IELTS How to begin your IELTS Task 2 essay

[deepsinghdomeli]

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[bilawalqadri]

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[amanyahoo1]

hello guys kindly do the evaluation of background statement and detailed background statement for me

question- The government should be permitted to censor the internet to help protect young people from offensive content. Do you agree or disagree ? form an opinion and support it.

my answer- Internet is a source of all types of contents, both good and bad. Among all age groups, the number of young children are significant as internet users.

[candystore82]

I have another approach for this sentence: Today, computer technology is employed widely and has affected people's lifestyles from all over the world dramatically.

[EnglishRyan]

@candystore82 I would remove the 'from'. Thank you for sharing. :)

[candystore82]

You usually say that we shouldn't use any personal pronouns, but what about when they ask us to give our opinion, or what do I think toward this argument? How do I answer to this? Thank you so much for all your efforts.

[EnglishRyan]

@candystore82 In an effort to make your tone sound more academic, try to avoid personal pronouns as much as you can. However, in the instance your IELTS question specifically asks for personal experiences (or something similar), you can/must bend the rule to respond to your question correctly.

[kashanaiqbal]

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[EnglishRyan]

@kashanaiqbal Thank you for the comment.

[pyreneeamour]

My suggestion:

Today, computer technology is employed widely and this - for better or worse - has greatly impacted the lifestyles of people all over the world.

[EnglishRyan]

@pyreneeamour I'd change your dashes to commas, but otherwise it looks great. Thanks for sharing.

[ajliverpool99]

thanks

[EnglishRyan]

@ajliverpool99 You are very welcome.