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  • i'd love to in her shoes wen THE nick jonas asks her to come....lol i dunno y, it'd just be cool

  • =) love it

  • post post post post please please i love this story at first i was kinda iffy about it but now i love it so please post im still debating on who i want her to be with

  • "Were you talkin to me"

    "No"

    "Well can you start please"

    amazing chapters!

    post soon!

  • Cheesy pick-up lines-

    Guy-Did it hurt?

    Girl-What?

    Guy-When you fell?

    Girl-When I fell?

    Guy- You are an angel, right?

    Wow, that was cheesy.

    another...

    D'you come here often?

    anyways...AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!

  • a cheesy pickup line..."You must be Jamaican, because Jamaican me crazy." or "if i could rearrange the alphabet, id put u and i together" or MAYBEEEEE..."your legs must be sore cause you been running through my mind all day!" those are my three. (:

    and AWESOME chapter! cant wait for the next one!!!! (:

  • I want see you on the finish line! Girl that's my story right there! Anyways, Nick is so smart...I LOVE HIM, I mean of course I love Joe and Kevin but I love different stuff about them like I love how Kevin is so enthusiastic and- ok "this has gotten inrevelant" lol get it?

    ANYWAYS, the pick-up lines that I hear are really peverted so I'm not gonna say it because you may have young viewers or readers

  • of course she's gonna go! it's THE nick jonas asking her to come =P lol

    looooooooved it xxx

  • Comment number 11

  • Awesome

  • OMJ i want her to be wit joe lol idk y but i do lol and her friend can be wit nick or kevin or something

  • "Well, I guess if both of us said it, it must be true."

    "More than 2 people said the world was flat, but that didn't make it true."

    "No, but people believed them."

    "And millions of people died ignorant."

    haha i loved this part

  • amazing chapters

  • oh my gosh i seriously hope she picks nick.

    lol. just because i love him hehe.

    I WANTTTT See You on the finish line! I absolutely LOOOVE it!

    okay okay are you ready?

    so its like weird to explain but its basically you saying "if you were a pirate would you want your parrot on this shoulder or THIS shoulder" lol then you end up w/ ur are around them. Or the same arm thing but saying "oh LOOK! a shooting star, make a wish, I got mine." lol terrible but amazing lol

  • great chapter! nicks so touching =') lol i thin shell go =)

  • she's gonna go :D she has too!

    post more!!

  • awesome chapter!

  • first to comment! yay! anyway... awesome chapter!!!! btw i love the song got dynamite! i have her cd!

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