....good stuff, I want to make vids to go with mine....have you seen "The Shore" by Hexachordal (aka Tom Milsom?) do a search and look for this Poem really well done and great vid.....really artistic....
This is amazing, I listen to it so much. It makes me feel not so alone. The words just seem to say exactly the right thing, it's almost like it's about me. Thank you for sharing this! x
you are amazing, i love poetry and im gonna put some up its dark but if you or anyone would like to look at it plz look me up. and i love you and what u stand for keep strong <3
Have you ever Herd/read Kisses and Kerosene by Otep (a band, but the song is basically a poem) its an incredible piece that you might like, but on the other hand it might disturb, but just putting it out there. by the way, your poems are incredible,
Your poetry is very well-written & evokes strong emotion...I like it. I'm a writer, as well, and always appreciate others who open themselves up thru poetry, too :]
your poem truely spoke to me and your art in words, videos, and skit have always made a difference. i hope you are doing well, I can hear the sadness in your voice and see it on your face. Hugs my friend.
I love your poems! I wish mine were that good! Umm... I know it's none of my business at all and I know that you don't know me but are you doing okay?? You just kind of seemed sad or upset in the video! I don't know maybe i"m wrong but remember things always turn out okay! Look to the future instead of the past and remember to stay strong! :D We all love you and your an inspiration to us all!!
and wow, I had to watch the video now to see what you meant, but yeah, I did look upset. I have been kinda messed up. I think I'm going to make a vid about it in the next few days. I'll see.
Umm I don't know if anyone will answer me but my dad just sign my family up for my gym and he wants me to go in the pool! I have scares and a few cuts he will flip out if he finds out any ideas they would really help thanks!
@TheKatSpaz your youtube profile says your 20, If your in university tell him you have too many assignments due very soon, if your in work tell him that it's getting very busy due to the x-mass period coming up. Delay long enough to find some effective ways of covering them (such as idrinktheseawater says you could try covering it with a black marker).
Another great work! I have to say, I can see why VeronyckahSometimes, Asked if you were alright, You do look at bit stressed/withdrawn? And thinner, (Thats if its possible for you to be any thinner!)
So good...I wish I could write like you...how are you doing? How long have you been free of self harm? Does it ever get easier to deal with? Sorry for the questions but I have seem so many of ur bids and they have helped me so much. Thanks :)
If you keep doing poetry your gonna spoil me :) I love hearing it !! I'm not even a big poetry guy, but yours seems to 'fill me up' :) Ty for sharing it.
@idranktheseawater My day was pretty shitty, but now with the book stuff going forward I think I've got a reason to celebrate. And I think these re-upload recitings are pretty soulful. (I think that's the word I'm looking for)
your poems are beautiful.
imnanimeluvr 1 month ago
that made me choke up a little bit
LostInSomewhere1 2 months ago
wow beautiful...
watchoutitslilbub 3 months ago
Simply amazing... so powerful... Wow.
Thanks so much for sharing this <3
LiveLoveDream141 3 months ago
omg love! is thisss in ur book?
Rebelous13Headstrong 5 months ago
@Rebelous13Headstrong
No. Its not.
idranktheseawater 5 months ago
....good stuff, I want to make vids to go with mine....have you seen "The Shore" by Hexachordal (aka Tom Milsom?) do a search and look for this Poem really well done and great vid.....really artistic....
SleepWhenIamDead 6 months ago
This is amazing, I listen to it so much. It makes me feel not so alone. The words just seem to say exactly the right thing, it's almost like it's about me. Thank you for sharing this! x
chrissymariejohnson 10 months ago
This is so beautiful. I can relate so much.
You're an amazing writer
TheMikiInside 10 months ago
you are amazing, i love poetry and im gonna put some up its dark but if you or anyone would like to look at it plz look me up. and i love you and what u stand for keep strong <3
xXxsporkishxXx 1 year ago
i love u
and your poem
<3
emochich23 1 year ago
i love it and i love u
emochich23 1 year ago
Have you ever Herd/read Kisses and Kerosene by Otep (a band, but the song is basically a poem) its an incredible piece that you might like, but on the other hand it might disturb, but just putting it out there. by the way, your poems are incredible,
RedRavenBlackFox 1 year ago
Your poetry is very well-written & evokes strong emotion...I like it. I'm a writer, as well, and always appreciate others who open themselves up thru poetry, too :]
MissJackilyn 1 year ago
This poem is realy good too :)
chrissicat12 1 year ago
@idrinktheseawater Have you written/considered writing a book with your poems in it or do you want to avoid doing something like that?
thegigm 1 year ago 2
@thegigm
It's something I've thought of doing, but as yet, I dont have enough poems to fill a book.
idranktheseawater 1 year ago
your poem truely spoke to me and your art in words, videos, and skit have always made a difference. i hope you are doing well, I can hear the sadness in your voice and see it on your face. Hugs my friend.
berrykrazie 1 year ago
you dont know how many times you have saved me, thankyou
cut free for 2 weeks
kjandu100 1 year ago
@kjandu100
That's amazing! ;) Congrats.
I'm glad you told me.
idranktheseawater 1 year ago
this was realy good, i write to and you far surpass my skills, i love hearing what you have to say! please keep on wrighting!
xXxsporkishxXx 1 year ago
@idranktheseawater
Good idea! Thanks! Love all your videos!
TheKatSpaz 1 year ago
Hey,
I love your poems! I wish mine were that good! Umm... I know it's none of my business at all and I know that you don't know me but are you doing okay?? You just kind of seemed sad or upset in the video! I don't know maybe i"m wrong but remember things always turn out okay! Look to the future instead of the past and remember to stay strong! :D We all love you and your an inspiration to us all!!
Be Safe,
Amanda
BlueEyedAngel092 1 year ago
@BlueEyedAngel092
Thank you
and wow, I had to watch the video now to see what you meant, but yeah, I did look upset. I have been kinda messed up. I think I'm going to make a vid about it in the next few days. I'll see.
Thanks for taking an interest.
idranktheseawater 1 year ago
Umm I don't know if anyone will answer me but my dad just sign my family up for my gym and he wants me to go in the pool! I have scares and a few cuts he will flip out if he finds out any ideas they would really help thanks!
Ps. Love the poem!!!
TheKatSpaz 1 year ago
@TheKatSpaz
You could draw a tattoo on your scars with a marker.
idranktheseawater 1 year ago
@TheKatSpaz your youtube profile says your 20, If your in university tell him you have too many assignments due very soon, if your in work tell him that it's getting very busy due to the x-mass period coming up. Delay long enough to find some effective ways of covering them (such as idrinktheseawater says you could try covering it with a black marker).
thegigm 1 year ago
Another great work! I have to say, I can see why VeronyckahSometimes, Asked if you were alright, You do look at bit stressed/withdrawn? And thinner, (Thats if its possible for you to be any thinner!)
xmoroseguyx 1 year ago
Your are so beautiful! Gosh I'm jealous! Your such a great writer too
ClandestineGirl16X 1 year ago
I love your choice of words, they flow really well. And hearing you recite it is nice too. :)
MsDementedArts 1 year ago
That was great!!!!!!
AshleySaves2121 1 year ago
I just realised after looking at this video that when I write poems' about self injury that I write it in the third person too. I am not sure why.
Anyway hope all is good.
-May x
TheMiseryChick13 1 year ago
@TheMiseryChick13 lol i write it in third person too.
LemonOdette 1 year ago
Sharp,Short and to the point !Yeah you do look great,your voice is a bit coarse, have you got the cold I imagine.Still resonates well.
gringoboy9 1 year ago
amazing like all of your other videos <3 I especially liked this poem because It was so relatable for me
SoyLatte923 1 year ago
Liked this one too xx
MsScarredSoul 1 year ago
That was very good. Two thumbs up. Hope all is well with you.
BananaJSSI 1 year ago
So good...I wish I could write like you...how are you doing? How long have you been free of self harm? Does it ever get easier to deal with? Sorry for the questions but I have seem so many of ur bids and they have helped me so much. Thanks :)
TheBball2212 1 year ago
i like this a lot(((:...but i've noticed that you've been looking thinner...are you doing alright? youre recovering and all, right?
VeronyckahSometimes 1 year ago 2
@VeronyckahSometimes
Not thinner
If anything I've gained weight
not happy about that...
idranktheseawater 1 year ago
@idranktheseawater You look healthier :D
amy1bacon 1 year ago
@idranktheseawater You look great :) And your poetry, as usual, is great too. Take care and stay strong.
bookcreator 1 year ago
@idranktheseawater Habe you SI'ed recently? Not to offend intended. But when I write about SI its usually after I either hit or cut.
I hope everything is well though Melissa. *Hugs*
m22frogger 1 year ago
If you keep doing poetry your gonna spoil me :) I love hearing it !! I'm not even a big poetry guy, but yours seems to 'fill me up' :) Ty for sharing it.
damansky11 1 year ago
i love that you rhyme i can't :( i hope you are doing well. How is the book coming?
SerenityMellissa 1 year ago
@SerenityMellissa
It's doing good
I'm hoping to send it to a publishing house next week ;)
idranktheseawater 1 year ago
@idranktheseawater My day was pretty shitty, but now with the book stuff going forward I think I've got a reason to celebrate. And I think these re-upload recitings are pretty soulful. (I think that's the word I'm looking for)
gewulentus 1 year ago
your poems really relate to me, they are all amazing. I want to thank you for them they help me.
LadyDiamond0fficail 1 year ago
loved it.
Hope you are doing well.
AmandaJuicebox 1 year ago
great job hun I really liked it you have a ct for this it was dark and sad but you did a good job 2 thumbs way up :)
rainbowpagan2 1 year ago