Take A Chance:A Carnell Story [Chapter One]

[Carnellsbabi1]

ohemgee iknow im mad late but i love it so far. u got talent! lmao

*keep me in mind for another story!! just sayin... lmao*

=]

[ashley011ful]

he so cute

[Smilyfaceshay]

Dani is gunna get kicked out sooner than she wants 2. Old Skool is nice but iThink shes gunna end ^ bein more of his frend than his girl. Brii Brii likes Kelly so shes eliminated so far 2 me. Sum of thez girls seem lik groupies. But iLove the story. Lolz. 5*

[flygirls64]

like those tv shows this is going to be good and is my babii

[dariyahhampton]

OMG you are sooooo smart! out of all of the stories that i have read no one else has done that you rock!!!!(LOL):)

[ilovb5andu]

Omg I Love Thiis Cuz Is Like

Ma Fav Show For The Love Of Ray J And For The Love Of Daisy Sometinq Like That Lol

Keep It Up

[Kulkat98]

Dasiy Of Love

Lol,I'm Sorta Sad That Cage Leftt. : (

I thoughtt he woud've madee it to like the final 3 or sumthin.

[PFizzleZno1]

Haha, girls hatin on me already. LOL. I luv it!

[jupiture8]

that was soooooooooooooooooooo good!! can naht wait 4 nxt chp.

[jupiture8]

Ohkay omg yu used lido thats a real club in massachuseetts!,kay imma go read the rest now

[Kulkat98]

Yupp.

But I couldn'nt think of any otherr club but those two clubs are wayy different lol .

[xdOpemamiix3]

Omgg This Chapter Was Good.` (:

I`m Loving This Storyyy.! :)))

I Was Surprised No One Leftt Lolz

Somee Of The Girls Are Crazyy Lolz

5/5*

-Can't Wait Till The Next Chapterr

[kellzgurl11]

i love it! girl keep goin! and thanks for puttin me in yo story!

[prettypink2011]

loved it

[Monei395]

That was good!!!

Can't wait 4 the next chapter

[skittlez589]

that was good! cnt wait for the next chapter!

5*

[Ulukau808]

I LOVE LOVE LOVED it girl..that was real good. I was surorised no one left. I was kinda big headed in this chapter lol..but it kinda does sound like me lol..can't wait for the next one girl. 5*

[cherrypoppingirls]

i luv it

itz awesome

5 stars:)

[angelluv8]

amazing ch. isnt it ironic how theres two "iceyy's" jus different spellings?

[CillaGirl94]

i love it

5 stars

[kandykute]

awsome love it 5 stars

[popoil9663]

I loved it that was awesomme ! Club Lido lol !

[Kulkat98]

Yeahh.

It's actually a club that I livee around but not thatt kind of club.

Cause I dontt know anyy clubss like thatt and why wouldd I (lol] .