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  • a please keep writing

  • damn...fuck me joe! ha:P

  • YESS !

    AAAAAAAA

  • ummm, so he just pushes her out into the street, while she's still naked?

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

  • omgomgomg hurry and post! i love your stories!

  • agh. i jst read all the eps in 2 hrs.

  • she should say yes

  • YEs bc he has ovbiously changed or he wouldn`t hav asked her out and he is deff not like joe!!!!!

  • a!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!

  • A!!!!! i think it would be interesting. keep writing plzz!

  • She should totally say yes and then what ever he does... he ends up having it with her and she will actually be willing! That would be really interesting LOL

  • hell yeaa you posted!! B!!!!!!!!but c is better;] i love this series cause my name is also jen!!:D

  • c. HAHA make him squirm and try harder! make this HUGE thing happen and then she'll realize that he isnt a player and isnt just asking her out so he can get in her pants :P and then she says yes.

  • oh my god.

    i thought he was really going to fuck her XD

    wow ugh.;D i think he shuld ask her out

    ;o she shuld get pregnant. hm..

    i really <3 your stories.

  • aaaaaaaaaaaa!

  • d, he had an evil plan all along

  • I'd say D, but thtat doesnt look like a popular pick

  • what do you suggest he do instead?

  • just. like fall hard over her, but he should be too scared to tell her, yes bad boys get scared, lol, then the end, like she should flirt w another guy, and Joe yell at her, how much Nick likes her...then shes all like "oh em gee" and yeah haha

  • C

    it makes it more interesting!

    and you cant stop posting just because you don't get over 100 comments because there will be a point for everyone else who comments and reads it

  • B.

    Post More Soon.

  • BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB

  • I thought you said it wouldn't be a love story.. or even get all lovey dovey, so he shouldn't even ask her out 9: See, I remeber your story, because I'm a good fan (:

  • haha yah. i did say that. and by all means it will continue to be extremely graphic don't worry about that! :). however, i have received so many messages and comments etc from ALOT of my readers saying i should turn Nick into not AS mean as before as long as i continued to make the sex scenes graphic. I am considering this, but even if it does happen he will still go back to his old ways at times and i refuse to ever make joe nice! :) haha so we'll see. you'll have to read 2 find out b/c idk yet

  • AAAAAA x]

  • The two things that I love most about this series are a) Joe's character and b) the boys' nonchalance about rape. so cute ;)

    i think he should ask her out, and then she says she'll think about it and starts to walk away when she feels him pull her back and he seduces her, and they wake up the next morning in his bed, he asks her again, and she says yes, and he's really happy. :) that, to me, is romantic.

    i love ur series! everytime you post i get so excited! (lol, not THAT way, ok?! geez... ;)

  • A. Yes!!

    turn him nice but stiil have the hot sex and keep joe bad!:)

  • B

    then

    A

    :D

  • AAAAAAAAAAAAA(:

    and please don't stop writing, i love your writing :D

  • A. for sure...

    but before he takes her anywhere i hope he gets her some clothes. lol XD

  • lol, that's what i was thinking :P

  • A! awh poor jen

    nicks her hero XP

  • B would make more sense but i want A

    write moreee pleasee:)

  • AAAAAAAAAA

  • she'll feel so safe with him now that he rescued her that she'll say yes!

  • A! I love this story so much don't quit!

  • i think she should say yes. that was awesome post again soon.

  • did she get out of the car naked?? O.o

    lol love it! more!!

  • haha i love how my readers pick up on these things! when i was writing i honestly didn't think about that. i might work that into my next episode tho if i remember. :)

  • A and ily this is cute:)

  • A! :) i love it! awesome! :)

  • AAAAAAAAAAAAA Pretty plz with a cherry on top dont stop writing! :D

  • AAAAAAAA

  • awesome!!! post more soon!

  • umm A! DUHHH!

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