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  • Great original David....Mel

  • @amazongift Thanks, Mel. It's nice when songs write themselves, and this one pretty much did. Thank you for taking time to check this out.

  • This is really a great song David ! You are very talented ! thumbs up and all the best wishes from Munich from Karen-Girl :-))

  • @karenmuenchen Thank you, Karen. So nice to hear your kind review. All the best wishes for you, as well.

  • Good song, David. It's got a real country feel to it. I like the lyrics and the message. Your stuff is real easy-going. Very easy to listen to music like this. Good job, my friend.

  • @TheMissouripicker Glad that you liked my lyrics and message in the song. I tried to do an "I'm sorry" song without sounding too....well, without sounding like what some people would call "pathetic".

    I'm glad my music's easygoing, too. I like the mood of the playing and vocal delivery to compliment the idea I'm trying to get across. Thanks for checking this out, my friend...

  • Excellent song David loved listening great performance great song writing thank you from  Phil .

  • @rockingphil58 Phil, I really appreciate your checking my video out. Thanks for the compliments, too. What I try to do is give the best I have as a singer and songwriter, to try to grow and get better and let folks hear something "quality". It is so nice when people like you send these nice reviews. Take care...

  • Really missed your wonderful lyrics David, this one is another example of your writing talent. Sweet melody and awesome vocal performance......Kathy

  • @DKMaher13 Looking back to last year, I probably should have left something on here to let people know that I was taking a break. I was really surprised that everybody stuck around! ha ha

    I am really really flattered that people care about my songcraft. It is wonderful that somebody thinks the lyrics are wonderful...I just always try to tell a truth when I sing something. It is great that you liked the singing too. Kathy, you have really believed in me and supported me, Thanks for that.

  • Really good song, David. I like it a lot. :)

  • @zmov1 Thanks! I thought this one would be like the surf instrumental: a way to ease back into being on here again. You're one of those friends like Kathy who have believed in me for quite awhile now, and I appreciate all of you very much. I hope I never come across as taking my friends on here for granted.

    When you say "I like it a lot", that's "for real". I know that. You're a straight-up guy and I've always appreciated that about ya....again, thanks

  • Great to see you again David! Fantastic Song! Love it! Thumbs Up My Friend!

  • @missyA1958 Hi Missy....believe it or not, this song was melodically inspired by a tune being played on a ice cream truck around our neighborhood! lol I kid you not. I also wanted to write and sing a convincing "please take me back, I'll do better" song without being sappy, and hopefully I did that.

    I'm sorry I took so long to get back on YouTube. I had outside things going on like getting married and home projects. Anyway, it's good to be back. Thanks for listening.

  • Nice....good to see you again.

  • @oldnrone It's good to be back, Guy. I'm sorry I took so long...as I told Missy, I had a lot of stuff going on this last year, but I had always intended to start making videos again. Thanks for listening to my videos and for believing in me. You have just been the coolest friend all these years....

  • PS! I meant to say my song "the emptiness you need", but you could do the other one as well - I like the way you phrase songs David and your clever writing makes it all the more better.

  • Outstanding as always good friend and glad to have you back. You're only one of the few songwriters on here David that keeps me all the way through the song, I really enjoyed this and it's very very catchy!. I'm grateful for your words you shared on some of my songs David and I would be honored if you covered my song "They Cry", sorry I haven't had much time to answer all my comments, but I do read them and always enjoy listening to your new creations. bios36 and I should cover a song of yours

  • @Maysey1 It's nice to hear someone bring up something specific about my singing style like that...thank you! I don't know if it's a conscious decision to phrase and pause like I do. I suppose that I try to sing songs the way I'd like to hear someone else sing them.

    I will glad to cover "They Cry" and "The Emptiness you need". I'm flattered by your request. I'll always be a fan of you and your music, Mark.

  • Great sketch recording of an fine song. Sounds a bit like it has a John Prine or even Guy Clark element going on in the singing. More Prine-like in the lyrics though maybe. Sort of country sounding with a quirkily delivered lyrics containing a universal message about marriage. Like the experience which has gone into it. can't be bothered with melancholy angst ridden adolescent subject matter anymore.

  • @CurtisMateer Wow, where do I begin with this great and thoughtful review? To have my singing compared to John Prine and my writing to Guy Clark...thank you very much. The "country sound" of this probably has to do with my singing voice as much as anything. I seem to have a rather thick sounding Southern United States accent and I suppose that comes through when I sing. Thank you for calling my vocal "quirkily delivered", too.. I rather like quirkiness in music, to a degree.

  • Glad you're back, David! Wonderful and wise and full of heart! You AND the song.

    Enjoyed it very much! NAncy

  • @nllleonard Nancy, I am so flattered to hear from you. I felt honored to hear me and my composition being called "wonderful and wise and full of heart". Hopefully, I will always be able to deliver truthfulness and sincerity in everything I post on here. Goodness knows, I have always tried to make this channel about unflinching honesty.

    It makes me feel good knowing that you enjoy this. I wanted a song that said "I'm sorry", but in a different and driving way. Hopefully, I got that across.

  • You've written a very nice song my friend. Great melody and performance.

  • @Jannen100 Thanks for your kind review. Hopefully, my vocal put the song in a decent light and didn't distract the song. If people think I'm a good singer, that's great. Hopefully I always turn in a decent performance.

    I felt good about "Give it a chance", Jan. "Give it a chance" came together very quickly (I wrote it just a few minutes before the video) and I just liked how different it was. There were probably some things that could've been better, but I'm pretty much pleased with it.

  • Great song...love your style...Darrell

  • @w1dvf Darrell, I like your style, too. "Junk" was a lot of fun to hear, It was fun to hear and kind of reminded me of my own "Leave the Nest" in its own way. Thanks for posting it.

    I'm glad you like my style, too. Its really great to know that people can relate to what I do on here.

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