it'd be better if it were YOU sniping at a guy on top of the tank, with the tanks moving very fast... keep the blackout after the shot, and specially the bullet hitting the floor
When you zoom in to the tank, the tank with your name on it should turn its barrel and shoot the sniper... Then it implies that you are beast, not that you just got hardscoped... :)
Well, the scope buildup was great, although it could have been better if the background wasnt so dull, and Im sure alot of people would point out that it's stupid to snipe a tank.
Also, if you look at it this way, having your name on the tank, and the that it was sniped... It's implying that YOU were sniped. So, Im not sure about that.
Other than that, the intro is great (except for the dull background) and I like it.
@NoxinPistol ive been looking at the comments and i was never used to an audience who somewhat disliked my work. On the contrary im very happy about the constructive criticism, i dont usually make intros like this though it was something i tried out. but like anyone else im still getting better, and the way to do so is by trying different techniques -kth gfx
@kevthehero22 Thanks for the feedback. Glad I could be of help. And yeah, I'm still training in gfx (currently in college taking it up) and it's already clear that youre better than me.
its alright. i would say keep the first half with the scope coming up but lose the tank and think of something else. just my opinion
jayjasonjayman1 6 months ago
it'd be better if it were YOU sniping at a guy on top of the tank, with the tanks moving very fast... keep the blackout after the shot, and specially the bullet hitting the floor
niconbk 6 months ago
When you zoom in to the tank, the tank with your name on it should turn its barrel and shoot the sniper... Then it implies that you are beast, not that you just got hardscoped... :)
Drummer52895 6 months ago
Well, the scope buildup was great, although it could have been better if the background wasnt so dull, and Im sure alot of people would point out that it's stupid to snipe a tank.
Also, if you look at it this way, having your name on the tank, and the that it was sniped... It's implying that YOU were sniped. So, Im not sure about that.
Other than that, the intro is great (except for the dull background) and I like it.
NoxinPistol 6 months ago 3
@NoxinPistol ive been looking at the comments and i was never used to an audience who somewhat disliked my work. On the contrary im very happy about the constructive criticism, i dont usually make intros like this though it was something i tried out. but like anyone else im still getting better, and the way to do so is by trying different techniques -kth gfx
kevthehero22 6 months ago
@kevthehero22 Thanks for the feedback. Glad I could be of help. And yeah, I'm still training in gfx (currently in college taking it up) and it's already clear that youre better than me.
NoxinPistol 6 months ago
Why did he snipe a tank?
TheSaintphat 6 months ago
sick!
jordanisdj 6 months ago
come back on xbox
noseyandcleo 6 months ago
Beast.
Diablo4643 6 months ago
not trying to hate but.... that was boring.
TroyLily14 6 months ago 7
Pretty sexy lol
boblikeysaw1 6 months ago