Utopia

[zawarudowryyyyyy]

mp3 please, or the mp3 for the beat/background music?

[hondatuner1320]

i found you from roadsideimports, its obvious you own and run it. to be honest your style needs work, not specifically your lyrics, but your word choice and the way youre rhyming. youre like, saying it like youre rushing to get it all out, you dont rap to the beat, youre just kinda going at one speed while the beat goes at another. and you need to think about beats that fit your lyrics better, not just rapping to a random backbeat that doesnt fit well.

[hondatuner1320]

not badmouthing you, i was trying t give constructive criticism.

[McPoeticTendency]

I'm not a musician and never have been, so it doesn't hurt my feelings. I simply was screwing around one day at 19 and did this so it was a long time ago and I had to use something for the videos that was not copyrighted so I decided to use my own content, that was all, just messing around nothing more. If I took it more serious then yes you're right I should do a better job at the time arrangement.