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  • hahahaha selena is one lucky girl. (:

  • amazing :)

  • more? :D

  • Wow lol it's sounds like nick has a bit of a wild side! And he likes it rough ;) x

  • Nice build up on the kiss. xD

  • Omfg, i hit my forehead on the screen and spilled my OJ. Thanks.

  • i loved it......

  • awhhh.

    i think selena is the real tease. ;D

  • HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WOULD HAVE FAINTED HAHAHA PLEASE MORE I LOVED LOVED LOVED MORE....... LOVE THIS ONE BECAUSE OF THE DESCRIPTION REALLY LOVED

  • i hope u don't ruin it by saying they were just day dreaming cuz i would be pretty upset

  • OMB another one pleaase :D xx

  • nelena kiss ftw... :P

    'leather, cologne and man' HAS to be intoxicating, how could anyone concentrate on anything? XD

  • god too cute!!

  • haha, they're the best. ;)

  • aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww., they're so cuuuutteee.,

    MOOOOORRREEE.,!!., ^_^

  • I think u shud post more!! :) I really love this series and the rest of your series

  • Nick is making me blush too. xD great chapter!!

  • woah...

  • They r just too damn cute

  • oh my gosh. intense.

  • HELL YEAH. NELENA'S SO CUTE MAN.

  • amazing!! more please!!

  • that was amazing ;))

  • oohh more!

  • soooogoood <3

    just perfectt

  • too cute... :')

  • this story is like so realistic from the details. I feel like Im the one in it xD

    you dont know how much i love this story, when im older im going to be looking at this and wont stop smiling. Im a sucker for a good love story :)

  • I'm seriously meltingg.

  • @xxDemixSelxx Same here lol

  • I love this ehehe >:)

  • Ahhhh Mel I love it (^-^)

    The sexual tension is fabulous >;D

  • So amazing.. It's like I'm watching it.. I'm sorry if you want to be a doctor or something other than an author.. Bc if ur not an author it's inhuman to keep people from writing like this.. I want to be in my house 15 years from now reading a new novel written by you (:

  • this story honestly couldnt get any better!! the way that you write your stories makes me feel like im the character in the book....like nick jonas is kissing me....(sigh) lol ;p please more!!!

  • ah, i loved it!

  • Oh gosh...they are both fantasizing about each other and all their goodies!!

  • ahh. :D

    love your writing, its so descriptive!

  • Omg!! OH MY SWEET JONAS.That is some sexy tension right there. More More please more

  • Ahhh, Amazingg Story!!

    this is seriously one of the best stories ever!:D

    i cant wait for the next onee!!!!!!!

  • MOREEEE :O:O:O pretty please ? :) as a Xmas gift ;)

  • such dirty minds ..

  • Wow.! :D You're an Amazing Writer.

    May I ask, Are you planning on like Being a Writer? lol.

    Love this Story as much as I love 'Midnight Affairs' [:

  • wow.

  • they are just too cute for words

  • Damn its amazing how you can make one simple kiss seem so seductive

  • -blinks slowly- Yeah.. I have no words.

  • aww i love this story.

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