So amazing.. It's like I'm watching it.. I'm sorry if you want to be a doctor or something other than an author.. Bc if ur not an author it's inhuman to keep people from writing like this.. I want to be in my house 15 years from now reading a new novel written by you (:
this story honestly couldnt get any better!! the way that you write your stories makes me feel like im the character in the book....like nick jonas is kissing me....(sigh) lol ;p please more!!!
hahahaha selena is one lucky girl. (:
PinkPrincess102 1 year ago
amazing :)
xkimberlay17x 1 year ago
more? :D
JonasBrothersLove320 1 year ago
Wow lol it's sounds like nick has a bit of a wild side! And he likes it rough ;) x
haycht123 1 year ago
Nice build up on the kiss. xD
ellaayyx3 1 year ago
Omfg, i hit my forehead on the screen and spilled my OJ. Thanks.
selena250 1 year ago
i loved it......
jsmelys 1 year ago
awhhh.
i think selena is the real tease. ;D
FAILiAM 1 year ago
HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WOULD HAVE FAINTED HAHAHA PLEASE MORE I LOVED LOVED LOVED MORE....... LOVE THIS ONE BECAUSE OF THE DESCRIPTION REALLY LOVED
ladie1607 1 year ago
i hope u don't ruin it by saying they were just day dreaming cuz i would be pretty upset
MSjessemarie94 1 year ago
OMB another one pleaase :D xx
shazbabe95 1 year ago
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nelena kiss ftw... :P
'leather, cologne and man' HAS to be intoxicating, how could anyone concentrate on anything? XD
STfan15 1 year ago
nelena kiss ftw... :P
'leather, cologne and man' HAS to be intoxicating, how could anyone concentrate on anything? XD
STfan15 1 year ago
god too cute!!
LovingJonas10 1 year ago
haha, they're the best. ;)
kneykney11 1 year ago
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww., they're so cuuuutteee.,
MOOOOORRREEE.,!!., ^_^
MSnanaii 1 year ago
I think u shud post more!! :) I really love this series and the rest of your series
seriousyfunny 1 year ago
Nick is making me blush too. xD great chapter!!
itsnelena 1 year ago
woah...
mygoodiessogood1 1 year ago
They r just too damn cute
gothicprep1 1 year ago
oh my gosh. intense.
msberniefernie 1 year ago
HELL YEAH. NELENA'S SO CUTE MAN.
GenieJonas1 1 year ago
amazing!! more please!!
CasiAngeles193 1 year ago
that was amazing ;))
morenomasters24 1 year ago
oohh more!
nickjonasbabe144 1 year ago
soooogoood <3
just perfectt
xHARM0NiiZ3xM3x 1 year ago
too cute... :')
SelenaMarieGomezYT 1 year ago
this story is like so realistic from the details. I feel like Im the one in it xD
you dont know how much i love this story, when im older im going to be looking at this and wont stop smiling. Im a sucker for a good love story :)
glamurgurl303 1 year ago
I'm seriously meltingg.
xxDemixSelxx 1 year ago
@xxDemixSelxx Same here lol
AvionesDeCristal 1 year ago
I love this ehehe >:)
ImaJustinSsed 1 year ago
Ahhhh Mel I love it (^-^)
The sexual tension is fabulous >;D
vampbuddies3 1 year ago
So amazing.. It's like I'm watching it.. I'm sorry if you want to be a doctor or something other than an author.. Bc if ur not an author it's inhuman to keep people from writing like this.. I want to be in my house 15 years from now reading a new novel written by you (:
kjnjonas95 1 year ago
this story honestly couldnt get any better!! the way that you write your stories makes me feel like im the character in the book....like nick jonas is kissing me....(sigh) lol ;p please more!!!
sallysue90210 1 year ago
ah, i loved it!
nightskyx3 1 year ago
Oh gosh...they are both fantasizing about each other and all their goodies!!
ana8964 1 year ago
ahh. :D
love your writing, its so descriptive!
xilovemusic13x 1 year ago
Omg!! OH MY SWEET JONAS.That is some sexy tension right there. More More please more
mizzglammie 1 year ago
Ahhh, Amazingg Story!!
this is seriously one of the best stories ever!:D
i cant wait for the next onee!!!!!!!
kayy22ily 1 year ago
MOREEEE :O:O:O pretty please ? :) as a Xmas gift ;)
yakutiya 1 year ago
such dirty minds ..
kayyxbabie7 1 year ago
Wow.! :D You're an Amazing Writer.
May I ask, Are you planning on like Being a Writer? lol.
Love this Story as much as I love 'Midnight Affairs' [:
holly96er 1 year ago
wow.
NickJayPWNS 1 year ago
they are just too cute for words
PINAYL0VE 1 year ago
Damn its amazing how you can make one simple kiss seem so seductive
crazybaby2120 1 year ago
-blinks slowly- Yeah.. I have no words.
blackROSEpurple 1 year ago
aww i love this story.
MiSSPiNK48 1 year ago