The beginning fight scene was not as good as the second one, but with a little more speed you could have fixed it, the acting is pretty good as well, :)
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Onegurrrlrev 9 months ago
@Onegurrrlrev Thank you very much
Kapp2007 8 months ago
The beginning fight scene was not as good as the second one, but with a little more speed you could have fixed it, the acting is pretty good as well, :)
CnJz96 9 months ago
Do you aspire to be the next Spielberg or Cappola? If so, make your film available to the opinion of veterans in the field who will give you constructive criticism and show you a clear direction to pursue.
Turn your passion into a profession at the International Short Film Competition at Aahān 2011 hosted by the Usha Pravin Gandhi College of Management in Mumbai, India. With over 1000 short films from 43 countries being screened over the period of the last 3 years.
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nitisha13m 1 year ago
Way cool,creative and professional.Good fight scenes too.
JimmyJinxBlau 1 year ago
Awesome! Can't wait to see part 2!!!
marnielrock 2 years ago
thanks...part 2 is already posted here on Youtube as well......please check it out and thanks for the feedback
Kapp2007 2 years ago
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misterrocklin 2 years ago
This rocks. Makes me think of a modern, cooler version of Logan's Run, mixed with some Brave New World. Great first film. Cant wait to see more!
Kris71799 2 years ago
Thanks for letting us see this so soon. I've done other projects I had to wait over a year to see. Love the computerized feel to this film.
wakeuplost 2 years ago