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  • The screams were very inopropiot asshole

  • Oh God...another HOMO trying to make memorial video to the towers. YOU SUCK QUEER!!!

  • the ending was horrible, but good poetry

  • The poem is actually not a bad piece of work.. but you need to hear it as you hear all poems, without visuals. They are terrible

  • Thank you for your observations and recommendations Rick. It's good to see that you have a firm grasp on both language and emotion. I see you like the letter F. I wonder, have you ever considered becoming a preacher? I think your use of alliteration could be a real boon 2 u. Have a great day!

  • quite a shit poem. quite a shit video. what the fuck was with the unnecessary video editting, you fuck. poetry my ass.

  • If you can generate these kind of extreme reactions, I'd say your combination of imagery and poetry touches people at a very deep level. Well done, Mate.

  • ur poetry sucks fuckin indian cock!

  • What a horrible dy, but what a great poem that fits the disaster.

  • ohh wow im soo srry im terrified :(((((((((

  • oh,...yesss this was a vivid insight...i.love it.

  • wtf? this is funny!

  • you fuckin knob head taking the piss out of this ... 'like a peeling bananaa'?? wtf your mentaly disturbed. and the sound effects!!! get a life you skum!

  • @Tobiere09 @Tobiere09 I take it you are not a poetry fan then mate? I take your opening expletives as comments on how this poem effected you. As to the rest, well, admittedly my mental state is questionable, however, as skum lies on top of water, I would have deny any comparison there, I am more of a bottom feeder, so sludge or slurry would be more apt a description.Just to calrify once again, that I am not 'taking the piss'.

  • Words by themsleves cannot describe the horror of what happened or of what has happend subsequently. Sorry you didn't like my imagaery. May I suggest a more fitting comment might have been:-"You Richard Cranium you! Your reference to fruit was I feel most inappropriate and failed to convey the import of the horror. I suspect both your mental aptitude and stability, you sudgey, slurry thing you."I hope this helps.

  • @vrfarrell Fuck You !! You're a religious piece of shit !! who in the hell would follow a FAGGOT like you ? Fuck You, Fuck your whispering piece of word Shit, your country is filled with nothing but a bunch of whining wanker FAGGOTS. Do the world a favor and especially your country a favor, and be an inspiration to them and kill yourself. maybe they'll follow that.

  • @vrfarrell As a connoisseur of poetry and prose I would suggest that you quit the craft and turn your hand to another form of art if you desperately need an outlet so badly

    Ps a word to the wise remove this for although we can’t see you it is cringingly neck tingling awful

  • si quememos el coran y demostremos que somos tan estúpidos como los idiotas que se dejan convencer por las ideas de los que dan discursos para seguirlos y vamos sus atrocidades como siempre los que dan las ordenes no les pasa nada si no porque uno de los hijos de osama bin laden no se inmolaron en esto picha los pobres tontos son los que van al frente.

  • wow,what can i say,

  • the first picture is beautiful!

  • On September 11th, 2010 we will burn the Koran on the property of Dove World Outreach Center in Gainesville, FL in remembrance of the fallen victims of 9/11 and to stand against the evil of Islam. Islam is of the devil!

  • Everyone is showing that the 911 planes were fake. They say it was a bomb with demolition of the building afterwards. Are we living in a fake world? Fake news? Manipulated for someones else's gain? Those deaths were real. RIP to those that parrished. Shame on those responsible. You will be judged.

  • That gave me a horrible shiver down my spine!!

  • Why is it only coming out of my left speaker and bombs and stuff coming out of the right omfg.

  • this video is so clear min0.56 - 1.00

    my condolence to the respected families.

    God bless.

  • i liked this. its deep

  • HOLY SHIT THAT MADE MY STOMACH JUMP!

  • To those of you who think this was a conspiracy, I wish you had been there... in the towers! I'm so tired of hearing about that. Thank you to those who offer their condolences and support. Radicalists have brought great suffering, tragedy, and nonsense to this world.

  • RIP

  • Placing PARASUTES on every Level !

  • I remebeer sitting in front of the tv (here in Norway), watching the first tower burn, when the second plain hit. I seriously thought that ww3 had started. A sad day.

  • @TheFluxen For once someone who is not a US citizen who cares.... almost evrey other one i have seen has made a joke about this. God bless the usa, those who died, and every soul who respects the events

  • @oIPoiiZo oh come on, you know us british have got your backs america. what a terrible day that was. an attack on U.S is an attack on U.K

  • @NumberDne thanks. much of America is immature and uninformed, so they believe anything. We know the UK is a great nation and is a brother to us, but some unfortunatly do not.

  • Come Back WTC !! =(

    Greetings from Brazil !!

    I'm Sorry

  • how much people survived?

  • stupid :p

  • i think i shit my pants

  • F***ing scary at the end

  • USA RESPONSIBLE.

  • Wont be able to sleep now!

  • Great piece. The ending scared the shit out of me tbh.

  • pretty good, however the ending really scared me!

  • very nice. the last bit was a bit much.. :p

  • very poetic..you nailed it man!

  • 911 was an inside job

    what kind off evel people are controling this world

  • the illuminati (search it ..its fucken insane )

    one world order

  • very haunting and artistic, war is images of death and sound, you nailed it

  • the last part was very frightening.. srry for my english

  • Across the White House desk? I think the English were quite a bit of that fist too.

  • the end scared the f*cking hell out of me!!!!!!

  • lol i know right

  • be thankful you where not in that situation they say people jumping where being shot by snipers some people think thats sick but if it was me in that situation and i would have jumped i would hope some one would shoot me before i hit the concrete its there families i feel for

  • Chilling poem. Sound effects weren't really needed.

  • that was really really scary omg

  • ok, that was a great poem. sound effects not needed.

  • this was so tragic

  • this was so horrible specially the sound effects and the children's pictures but it is true

  • thats so horrible look at 0:55 all those people hanging out the windows they dont have enything else to do but jump

  • *Pentagon

  • to back you up skatehate7! It is a proven fact TomJackson986 that we have a special unit in the military that was never heard of until about 3 years ago that had one objective... get Osama!!! There have been three different times sense 9/11 that this unit has serrounded Osamas location and could have captured him but were called of by the Pentigan officials directly!!! THREE TIMES!!! So what i'm trying to say TomJackson is..... RESEARCH BEFORE YOU OPEN YOUR MOUTH!!!!!!!!! your welcome skatehate7

  • i like this its an excellent poem and the effects say to me that violence only begats more violence you reep what yuo sew etc i like it

  • My sincere condolences - The Poet.

  • beauty full poem vr

  • i hate poetry...this is pretty good

  • what??youhate poetry?never heard someone say "i hate poetry" omg

  • well i hate it .

  • ha jah okay Man! good luck^^

  • 911 wasclearly the US Goverment

  • i would say it is clear the us government Knows what happened and even played a part but even They r puppets to the puppet masters.

  • id shame if id say something like that

  • ROFL!it was clearly the us government........u idiot they have videos of the people getting on board "the terrorist" and footage from the plain u idiot

  • first of all learn how too spell, your clearly just an American kid that has focused on the governments point of view. But almost just as many people arent sure, and some people are sure that the US government did it, and I cant say that I know! And neither can you because we havent even caught Bin Laden, and there is so much proof that Laden isnt really in these videos.

  • Have u ever even for a second that no one caught "bin laden" yet because he doesn't exist? He was created as a puppet by the CIA and all they have to do is get some secret service agent to throw on a beard and say a few words to the camera. America can catch anyone they want within a few hours, a few days at the most, u gotta be a gullible little child to believe the Bin Laden story. 2 words, Inside Job!

  • "Studywar" not everything in life is a major conspircy. Bin larden exists. So were did you get you information? your so called proof all you bullshitters feed me every time i disagree with people like you. Wikipedia? loosechange? rumor? youtube vids? Let me see, if there was a website with so called "proof" lets say... has evidence that bugs bunny is alive and well... would you believe that? Of corse you would you'd rather believe a retarded no nothing site than the u.s goverment. get a grip man

  • The guy you responded to really didnt have a clue. but i disagree abit on your part also ..... everything bad in this world was done by the government mate....EVERYTHING!

  • Is "the government" responsible for making you a flaming dumbfuck?

  • Nope, that would be a retarded socioty made dumm over many many years by our governments not giving us propa educations and teachig us Wrongly!!

    Call me what you like, i wont take offence... its youtube, you look like a retard calling people.

    Besides, if you seriusly dont realize how much this new world government, controls and munipulate's every thing we do, Then you sir are the "Dumbfuck"

  • Your awful grammar and spelling says all we need to know about your education and/or intelligence.

    -and I realize gov't can be manipulative and up to no good sometimes, but- mentally stable people don't go around screaming that gov't is the cause of "EVERYTHING bad in this world"(That's your ridiculous quote,dumbfuck)

  • Fair comment, but im hardly mentaly unstable, I know my spelling and grammer is shit, but i dont care. If you care, its your problem.

    My reason for saying the gov is the cause of everything bad is, that everyone is blaming individuals or groups for things the gov have done. Also that they keep everything we should know away from us.

    They have done it for thousands of years, maybe more.

    Say what you will, beileve what you like, i blame the gov for everything bad in this world. IMO

  • hmmm do you like the death or what...

  • i got scared when i heard the first scream

  • realy good poem the ending with the kids was sad

  • OMG you are mental

    Crazy mother fucker

    You scared the mackrolls out of me

  • why thank you!

  • good job - great poem - thanks for sharing and I ask for more.

  • holy crap 1:50 scare me did not expect that haha

  • i fucking agree thats not right.

  • Many parts well done as poetry

  • What a shocking day in history, eh? Very sad.

  • you are stupid you dont even know y thows people died

  • Am not sure who are the real terrorists in the war in Iraq..

  • WOW!! the last part..the noise FREAKED ME OUT!!

  • nice and sad

  • Great poem, mutch respect.

  • Learn how to spell.

  • What, for you?

  • Yeah, for me. I own you motherfucker.

  • Haha, no need to get emotional randomn internet kid from belize.

  • 0:49 .... OMG !!!

  • Very good.

  • omfg! well scary the last part lol shit im like 14 in my room at 4 in morning lol omfg!

  • I liked the poem as well. Only critical remark is that your words should be the only sound effect needed here.

  • good poem but the pictures were very disturbing, because of what happend that day

  • freaky

  • look at 1 45

    heads!!

  • omega12334 only a smoke head would spot heads of smoke,

    its winnie the pooh and tigger, maaaan!!

  • this poetry is very good, sort of creeped me a bit dont get offended at the end i was expecting the exorcist girl to pop out

  • HOly crap he really did show a guy that burned eww u could see his pink skin

  • Vogan Poetry....sorry it's more of a tribute than I managed.

  • please google: 911 research or Scholars for 911 Truth and Justice -

    what 'collapse' scenario could account for the massive energies that blew the buildings into smithereens> Not gravity, not fire. Over 1000 bodies evaporated! The evidence is compelling and overwhelming

    'we are entitled to our own opinion we are not entitled to our own facts' -Patrick Moynihan

  • it's so sad. and we all remember where we was, when it happend', or when we got the news. it's so many years ago, but I still cry.

  • beautiful poem

  • freaky man

  • some people that didnt make it out on the 4th

    floor served they were lucky

    we shall not forget 9/11 and the fire men and weman that gave their lives to save people they didnt even know

    god bless them and all the people that didnt make it out

    RIP

  • Very nice and moving.

  • To me there are not enough words to discribe the horror except for GOD has them now and may they all REST IN PEACE

  • do u see the third pic of people falling theres two people holding hands! HOW SAD!

  • great video,

    bit about a self peeling banana was a bit :S

    but the end really scared me,

    it came up really loud on my computer as well :/

  • disturbing, goosebumps.

  • great poem...

  • omg my heart almost stoped at the end

  • vrfarrell: outstanding poetry set to this tragedy; did you write or did someone else. Great tribute to 911. 5 outta 5 stars!

  • WHY THANK YOU- i wrote it

  • at the end i was scared! :O

  • Is it read/narrated wrong? It feels slightly disconnected from the ordeal - even exploitative in an entertaining manner. Though trauma can make us express things irrationally.

  • Is it me? Or does it sound like the beginning of one of Godzilla's classic roars at 1:56?

  • what happens at the end?

  • i was scared, last 10 seconds make me scared so much! i close the internet, and then return to post a comment :)

  • lol i kno i was like i knew somthing was going to happen but was not completly sure but then it happend and i shat my self

  • My dad died in this accident. I havent gotten over it. I was only 4 years old.

  • the last 10 seconds almost made me shit my pants

  • mw too tht scared the shit out of me but just imagin how people felt we they heard tht in real life

  • absolutly correct, I was 14 years old, and a man hit on the floor, 200-250 meters away from me!I think he was insensible, because he dont scream!!!But I did! almost 7 years ago, after this tragedy, but I still cant sleep well at night, I could forget, what I ve been go through!I am still need my therapist!If you see something like that in real, it will be soooo heavy to got your laugh back, you couldn't forget this!Its like a movie in your brain which runs your hole lifetime!

  • me too

  • Can you imagine holding your girl/guys hand and saying your last I love you, and jumping. while they were prob co workers, thats the 1st thing that comes to mind, is if that were me and my love.

  • its by edward munch and called the scream

  • Your poem was quite good. I can see this video being tooken in a very negative manner though, but it is nice to see a different mind perspective on it.

  • .55-104... damn

  • OMG!! did anyone see that there was 2 fists if you stop at 1:16??look!

  • oh yeah, sweet....kinda...

  • R.I.P

    *wipes tear*

  • that was a deep poem. hit me hard.

  • me asuste muchoooooooooooo

  • omg the last ten seconds made me cringe

  • OMG........that was one of the scariest vids of 9/11 yet. Just imagined how scared the people in the building were. R.I.P

  • if anyone wants to know, the painting at 28 seconds is by Edward Munch

  • Time capsule with intensity...

  • thank you. This was all too real. The end of it was very frightening - the sounds of the buildings falling was terrifying. People need to wake up and stop criticizing all the people that are trying very hard to get them to see what is going on. Again I thank you very much.

  • thank you

  • the ending scared me badly

  • Same.

  • ME 2

  • ME 3

  • ME 4

  • Yeah, that scared me too.... horrible sounds...

  • Good!

  • Watch Zeitgeist the movie on Google video. It explains why the current republican administration allowed this to happen. It is just like Pearl Harbor and the Lusitania. The war in Iraq is meant to be prolonged and sustained for profit. The WTC was meant to draw the country's concensus together for war.

  • Ritchie,

    Saw it. There is a tone of info out there to support the films message. Check out Army Regulation 210-35.

    Some other good films on Google video:  Monopoly Men, and Constitution in Crisis, the Secret Government. Also Google video CFR

  • thank you for the info.

    you tube

    Clinton Chronicles

    be sure and watch the one that is broken down into sections so you will not miss a word of it.

  • same here the ending made me almost shit my self and felt like something was stabbing me or something :(

  • i dont think 0:50 to 0:51 has anything to do with the WTC...

  • people doing stunts you have to be kidding this is no act of daredevil what the hell i mean it was real everything

  • why u dis respecting the falling people? i think its wrong to even show pics of there last seconds

  • im sure they'd grant people to use their picture as a reminder of the suffering encountered on that day to everyone in the world

  • Ending made me bring my feet off the floor. like somethign was attacking me or something..

  • What if that includes you

  • Very good sound effects, but you used them on the wrong story. These people deserve more respect.

  • think so too... sad story... ='(