Back in 2004 I was in a high speed motorcycle accident. I broke both shoulders and left leg in 4 places. I was just put in a wheel chair and all I could do was pull myself around in it with my right leg....
What you have captured here is the isolation. Friends are friends, but they can't touch you in that chair. It is the most angry feeling in the world.
wow. the mood and the lighting and the acting and the photography! :D made me shiver, great!! the last shot it So beautiful =) looks like it came straight from a feature film, a real good one :D
I think you gave away the ending. Here's a suggestion. Don't show that he's in a wheelchair until the end.
The film is too melodramatic, and it was too easy for him to stand up and walk out of that chair. What did he have to lose? How did he lose his ability to walk? Was he just sitting in the chair and then he decided to get up? LOL
Nice beginning!!! im studying soon at NYFA in NEW york. Film making and on the side acting. Any nice memories that you would like to share with me? Would like to know what it is like!!!
This was gorgeous. Moods and grim beauty aside, I got that the lad called it a day on himself. Loved the black and white and the time you took with your subjects. You have great vision. I hope you are still making films. - Max
i got this 'ok now am supposed to feel sad' kind of feeln at the strt of the film. i would've liked it better if the guy's gloomy expression alone was shown at the start and then a montage of his earlier memories with his girlfriend inbetween..and in the end u pan down the camera to reveal that he is on a wheelchair. it'l keep the audience guessing, why is thr a montage wit his girl?'break up?''girlfriend dead?' or'somethin wrong?'..then goes like ok fellas the movie is called hope,n reveal.
I'm gonna be going to the New York Film Academy sometime within the next year, and I love seeing some of the films people have made while at the academy...so thanks for posting!
oh! hey. I went to nyfa this summer and was checking out some nyfa films. yours is amazing. it's a really beautiful film! love it. the black and white contrast is perfect and the music is great as well^^ congratulations!!
Great work and amazing Mise-en- scene. Simple and captivating till the end. I liked the background sounds ( when it fade in and fade out in the same plan, same take sometimes). The black and white creates a beautiful contrast between the present ( dark and traumatic) and the past ( Including Flashback memories), filmed in a clear lighting. Well done!
This is really sick, I love all the tilt shots, I just went there for a week, Check it out!
BittWoodFilm 6 months ago
thomas newman?
jorgerisco 6 months ago
IT'S ALIVE! IT'S ALIVEEEEE!
MillaHead 1 year ago
beautiful cinematography!
glufselicious 1 year ago
Back in 2004 I was in a high speed motorcycle accident. I broke both shoulders and left leg in 4 places. I was just put in a wheel chair and all I could do was pull myself around in it with my right leg....
What you have captured here is the isolation. Friends are friends, but they can't touch you in that chair. It is the most angry feeling in the world.
dyslexicjim 1 year ago
Thanks for the kind comments everyone!
doubledown1138 1 year ago
wow. the mood and the lighting and the acting and the photography! :D made me shiver, great!! the last shot it So beautiful =) looks like it came straight from a feature film, a real good one :D
OtoriShigeko 1 year ago
Damn that's beautiful. I especially like how you used music from a movie that is all about hope.
MiKKA335 1 year ago
That's a very good beginning!
My compliments!
Greetz from Holland.
Take a look at my video for the filmacademy in a'dam. Thank you!
maudy03 1 year ago
watch?v=0jw3xZO_iNk
ToyMachineMonster 1 year ago
Such great atmosphere, I love it!
benpetrofsky 1 year ago
I think you gave away the ending. Here's a suggestion. Don't show that he's in a wheelchair until the end.
The film is too melodramatic, and it was too easy for him to stand up and walk out of that chair. What did he have to lose? How did he lose his ability to walk? Was he just sitting in the chair and then he decided to get up? LOL
beaulieu4008 2 years ago
very nice work you rock
barkly54 2 years ago
I really like the final scene of him running through the park.
Spindarling 2 years ago
God this was incredible man! Great job.
Peace
Rob
ShadowHawk776 2 years ago
nice, but something is missing!
fadijawish 2 years ago
very very nice sir. now thats a low budget short film.
ashbrunner 3 years ago
Nice beginning!!! im studying soon at NYFA in NEW york. Film making and on the side acting. Any nice memories that you would like to share with me? Would like to know what it is like!!!
vivaelrock87 3 years ago
awesome video iwent to nyfa this summer and it was AMAZIN.
dramaqueen3415 3 years ago
This was gorgeous. Moods and grim beauty aside, I got that the lad called it a day on himself. Loved the black and white and the time you took with your subjects. You have great vision. I hope you are still making films. - Max
BowlerHat 3 years ago
i got this 'ok now am supposed to feel sad' kind of feeln at the strt of the film. i would've liked it better if the guy's gloomy expression alone was shown at the start and then a montage of his earlier memories with his girlfriend inbetween..and in the end u pan down the camera to reveal that he is on a wheelchair. it'l keep the audience guessing, why is thr a montage wit his girl?'break up?''girlfriend dead?' or'somethin wrong?'..then goes like ok fellas the movie is called hope,n reveal.
anandshankarg 3 years ago
you're good,but too bad alot of ppl used this,plus every one has their own ideas,urs great u should do one < a short film
Vintage772 3 years ago
A fine peice of work. Great score as well.
chady77 3 years ago
I love it its the best one I seen so far
Babykisses7447 3 years ago
I'm gonna be going to the New York Film Academy sometime within the next year, and I love seeing some of the films people have made while at the academy...so thanks for posting!
jazzbabydancing 3 years ago
oh! hey. I went to nyfa this summer and was checking out some nyfa films. yours is amazing. it's a really beautiful film! love it. the black and white contrast is perfect and the music is great as well^^ congratulations!!
zuperpepper 3 years ago
Thank you very much for your kind comment
HermanEverheart. It's always nice to get some feedback.
doubledown1138 3 years ago
You just made my day. Poignant piece of work. Thank you.
HermanEverheart 3 years ago
Illumination and the filmcraft are cool.
but I am worthless.
nekuraroman 3 years ago
Great work and amazing Mise-en- scene. Simple and captivating till the end. I liked the background sounds ( when it fade in and fade out in the same plan, same take sometimes). The black and white creates a beautiful contrast between the present ( dark and traumatic) and the past ( Including Flashback memories), filmed in a clear lighting. Well done!
zondzond 3 years ago
James,
it's nice to see this again.
Film Academy was a great, great experience for me, we should do it again sometime
:()
bmkbell 3 years ago