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  • Hey @thebossin305 I heard you version of "Asher Roth - As I Em" & I think it's pretty good, so i got a question for you : do you think you could make the instrumental version of "Asher Roth- His Dream" so then I could kick it ?

    PS : Excuse my english, please.

  • Its off beat you noob!

  • Made a rap on this beat!! check out ma channel to see it,its the video on top and no hating azz comment please already know its yo boy O.K.G..Vote up this comment to and sub to support O.K.G PEACE!

  • hold up let me drink another beer grind some more gears another fight blowin up causing more tears, i guess i just dont learn in the end im always burned curling up like a perm cant stay sober for too long i might tip over and write another drunkin song, i'll play this one for the bitch that crossed my heart i hope she dies smooth green eyes i see right through those fucking lies and yes i depise every part of you im through see you soon or on the bottom of the pool

  • lyrics come straight from knoledge ash is inspirin Man i cant wait to get to college my fuckin life could be a musical name it ryan and his funeral

    And i hate when people say the felling mutal

    I tell them thats Futile

    Em has wordplay like a puppet

    Ja is definetley a dumshit dissin wen we could have fun wit it but no fuck it emmcees aint doin what they yoused to.

    -Ryan a 12 year old

  • dude can you hook it up with the hook too for me?

  • I NEED THIS INSTRUMENTAL

  • I WANT THIS WITH THE HOOK!

  • You wouldnt happen to still have this beat would you?

  • Think back a year a two/ I was just trying to get rid of you/ it was so true/ but i thought you knew?/ growing up with a family of four/ wasn't so poor/ but just before/ i knew i had a life/ mom took a knife/ and made it right/ but listen, it wasn't like that/ parents split/ but right there it hit/ it a came across my mind/ that what they did was so behind the lines/ growing up without a mother was hard/ only a retard/ would do that to their childrens/ for example like Homer Simpsons/

  • could you please make the instrumental to bad day?

  • i'm a rpping white boy,just like asher roth/try to dress black, only pass as goth/wear a mic cord around my neck like a cathlic cross/got my own fuckin problems fuck u math get lost/people throw tomatoes at my salad to my ass gets tossed/spit these corny ass metaphors cuz i masterd flaws/i'm a sick lost puppy, i got these bastard paws/but they will fuck u pussies up as i smash ur jaws/people ask me why i'm so violent they say raps the cause/i'm like whatever just listin to my raps, clap aplause

  • @dxhaloboy oh ur right

  • @FuckGayAssRockMusic Thank you ;D

  • @dxhaloboy yeah right u wish u could write as lyrical as me

  • @FuckGayAssRockMusic You really want ta challenge be ta a rap battle, U seariously dont wana do that.

  • @dxhaloboy sure why not

  • @FuckGayAssRockMusic Then lets go

  • Still sitting alone coutin my dough yeah bitch when u left me u put on wuit a show and thanks for makeing she everyone could hear that I wasnt gona be shedin no tears yeah this is just what you feard and I made it clear past tense cleared

  • how can there be an official remake?

  • The c horus part sucks, sounds like the beat goes backwards.

  • try and get G.R.I.N.D. instrumental if you can pleaseeeeeee :)

  • @MrrSpacely  i have it :]

  • sometimes i feel isolated from some society down and depress with anxiety almost anti social so i pick a pencil to get the feelings out they judge me and dont know nothing im about me i said fuck the girls that dont take me as i am i dont give damn you not going to leave me empty in a shell and im behind my bars like jail i let em hang like a nails now watch me float cross the water with my sail do you see how i deliver like mail

  • im the king of this mind

    its quite amazing what youll find

    the ups and downs that it sees

    and the people it meets

    all this time it could be the difference between you and me

    but hey not all minds think alike cant ya see?

    So dont jump to conclusions when i try to talk to you its like im in an illusion

    cuz nothing makes sense like im in economics. playin like... hooked on phonix

  • well you say im white and i cant spit it then maybe you should go and suicide commit it but ill admit it im not from the hood all my life i been good dont carry a gun and never would but dont hate on me because im gifted lyrically and ima be the next best thing reppin my city i mean do i really have to be from the streets to spit fire i mean i know you guys feel the heat yeah but i dont see why the skin really even matters when half of you rappers are basically just actors
  • your fuckin retarded haha

  • maybe blacks should have thought about saying niggggerrr in every bit of work they do even after they said it "offended" them...

    i asked this 1 black guy in my high school why he was such a dumbas... said it was cuz hes a nigga and a true nigga is strapped with gats and dealin, and no1 can call him a nigga but his niggas if they aint a nigga.. apart from his grammer ,you saying we cant say nigga, cuz we dnt do that shit, is like us saying u cant say hockey cuz u cant play for shit

  • He my mans I'm black too and there is no good reason for blacks too call each other nigga's, but we don't like whites calling us it because we find it offending b/c it's to close to nigger.

  • Asher and Em = Beasts.

  • @Limited305 nuff said...

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  • wow both j3wishPr1de and ChompingDiMystik suck at rapping

  • its sad at first, i spat a verse where half the words were rhymes/

    and then i rewind and there's only one thing on their mind/

    "whos this white guy? he raps kinda like em"/

    oh slim? he's an influence but im not that into him/

    "nah but for real, you're like him or asher roth"/

    just because im white i get this stain like a cattle prod/

    blastin off like an astronaut but i can't get away from it/

    but at least they want it, damn isn't that some shit

  • is it cause i dont have the black skin ? goin in white gives me the attraction other "niggas" be backin cuz im goin harder then half yall rappin somethings bout to happen this needs to be delt with, somethings bout to pop off youre hitten below the belt yahh better hopp off whats so special bout a white kid from the burbs long island born and raised to flip the burd now they all gatherin in hurds they ask me to do what i do and spit and hip hop rising, you could too, and do youre shiet
  • @ j3wishPr1de Dont say dat word dawg u not from ma race.. - Cuz we might dismember ya face... U a white boi so remember ya place... Play ya best card cuz u fuckin wit a Ace.. A new victim, jus what i wanted.. Am a hunter, i guess ure da hunted.. I got six rifles under one bed.. Jus imagine all the murders that i funded.. I spit hot shit like a Mexicans asshole.. Dont talk shit if ya jaw made of glass yo.. - What u think da gun & da mask fo' ? Shoot u in da face, stick u up for ya cashflow...
  • chomingDimystik: ill do what i want when i want just cuz i dont got black skin to flaunt i might be white but ill do everyone a favor knock you off the game and elimenate you as a player i dont got papers but i have swag and dont take it i have tons of flavors and just waitin for someone to taste it if you gonna hunt me try youre best some cunt aint gonna pass this test dont give a fkc bout the rest so ill leave you layin in a casket at youre funeral ill leave you my raps in a basket
  • Get ya facts straight "dude" i aint a playa I run dis bitch, men am something like a mayor Taste ya flavour ? Nah, i aint a homo If u was smart, dawg u wdnt say no mo' Cuz u fuckin yaself, goin against me Am a dirty nigga, & u kd never rinse me If u a KKK muda fucka Ama let da AK spray muda fucka Wet u up, mattafact ama bathe u Shots so big, Superman kdnt save u & its da end of da Jewishpride When a couple of dem rounds go through his side RIP
  • Dont be skeered ma nigga, we jus rappin But on da real, dat shit kd really happen But i think ama take it down a knotch Cuz i dont wana hav u pissin in ya crotch I kd talk about da art in ma gallery Cars out front, or da size of ma salary But i i dont really wana brag But i hear dis white boi talkin bout swag Please !! I probably got ya girl on ma dick now Come home to u, & she cant even sit down So git down, u cant see ma rhymes cuzz' Am Dangerous like how Busta Rhymes was.. Wsup !!
  • damn that was nice..... alright, dont compare to busta bus since in the end you gonna be busta done busta gone so you be fkcin up better run cuz hiding aint gonna do no good my radars on and im comin for you this is the truth and im spittin out facts fact of the matter is you aint gonna make youre way in rap better find a night job like ya ma do workin the poles and you know thats by far true so dont call youre crew in to come and get me imma shoot you to and be the hottest MC
  • @j3wishpr1de man i dont care how good u are if u not black that word can not be used u should apologise or be branded a racist

  • @rayomalone. i put it in quotes for emphasis that im white. im not racist, because i didnt use it to discriminate. i used it as a fill in. come back with a rap and battle or get out cuz this is for critique and rap.

  • haha u fool i am a rapper i just wouldnt lower myself to ur standards sayin the n word is a no no wether u usin it in a rap or not if u have to single out a race just to write a line then u lack credebility im not sayin u cant rap im just sayin how many white rappers do you hear sayin that word in our rhymes???? 0

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  • aright, i feel yah man, i thought of it as a word, not to offend, im pretty glad it offended you tho, i dont mind haters on my ass, but id rather you rap at me rather then youtube comment .

  • im no hater ha, and i only grace these comments with a rhyme if it pops while im listenin

  • well you said how good i think i am, so i took that as a diss and im always ready to rhyme lol, but its all good .

  • anti semetist much ? make fun of my race then you better spit it, and how the hell am i even copying asher ? im a white rapper, im not using his lines or shit .

  • or should i say i dont care how good u think u are

  • Two tears in a bucket..

    Am gettin high blowin piff in da public...

    Cops all around dis bitch, but fuck it !!

    If my dick hard, ama make ya girl suck it...

    Haha, ya boy too nasty...

    Am in da back seat gettin head from Ashley...

    Am in my own category u cant class me...

    Fuck da police nigga, dey cant catch me !!

    Hahaha..... Yuh zeeit ?

  • can you put a download link plz

  • just cuz im white and i write am i suddenly the next eminem?

    taking the levels high and defy the rules ill be bending em .

    fend for yourselves since media is already coming to me

    every thing i write and every thing i say is bringing controversy

    it seems like i cant get away from the compares

    when i wear my pants down low all i get is stairs

    hair by hair im torn apart without a care

    it aint fair that i cant level up to his expertise

    just wait tho and ill be in the top 5 MC's

  • j3wishPride nice raps dog.. i wd change da last 2 lines though.

  • laid back beat blunt in hand/ people call me puff the magic dragon/ Nothing tops this sensation when I spit fire/ Can't touch me Million Degrees/ Celcius Farenheit doesn't matter really/ Haters yell "Hey dragon's are mythical, come on get real"/ Mythical level individual is ME/ No style equivalent to the one I make you feel/ Flow through your veins like a drug/ Hooked on the hook my shows full booked/ Cooked in pots and pans no ingredient overlooked/
  • Lyrical masterpiece as I grab the piece and smoke the herb that gives me peace/

    Leave in a second my work here is done/

    Welcome to Hippo's magical kingdom/

    Throne and crown people call me excellency/

    4.0 vision got me excellent see/

    So I see through your lies and fallacies/

    That makes you invisible to me/

    Rhyme scheme elementary/

    Step your game up like the stepmaster please/

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  • im no Asher, Em im no Jay i slap ya artistic wit this art like Monet/ I spit flames on this post like propane im so vain u robbed broke left wit no change/speak fluent wit the truth to all lames/drive thru piss drunk swervin all lanes/fall back da track calls for my name im sick dick riders hate quick on my fame/

  • pretty dope

  • non hospitable/im gone i swing at you/time and time again being told so lyrical/old skool flow no a bit more digital/but oh dont you know NO im no criminal/synical assasin flashin da mac then clap at ya block while my flocks cockin da mac 10's/pale white ya face left like cold snow coverin da Aspens you rat bastards keep askin/who dat rappin postin on da tube net/da rules set and i maintain on my huge rep/i got alot of bunnies hoppin on da pogo/oh no dick slappin action its no homo...

  • sippin on this bottle of whiskey again

    my alcholism has gained me respect of friens

    im a traditional hard style drink it from the bottle

    dangerous when i turn d key and press the throttle

    nly kiddin i dnt drink and drive id rather smoke and fly get weed in my eys

    till d pupils cried this is the life that we reside

    we r a grade 1 in been fukin wasters

    im sik of hearin shit from u master baters

    dis menu only got 1 meat and that beef

    rare medium r well done which wud u eat?

  • long beach is where i reside chillin on porches, toke it up outside watch out! police, drivin by so we dip this shit go run n hide we just kites, our feet touch the ground but our heads in the sky floatin n space, aha, yeah we high but, we realize... munchies settin in, 99 cent store crunchy pringles straght from the can buy like 10, munchies settle down,and relax again man it sucks, these summer days comin to an end wish i could rewind and re-begin 2 days left, i guess, we just have to pretend
  • As i am, as you are not a rock star, youre a porn star with no wage, you suck cock for little boys underage, thats how you get your pay, every day, are you gay? are you curious? do balls get you delirious? You love them hairy nut sacks, blind butthole attack from your prisonamte behind the cells, thats what the hidden camera tells, you got a cellmate named Bob that calls you suzy, fucks you in your sleep when you snoozey. Holla at yout prison mate. Use a condom.

  • I dig it braw

  • take it or leave it, this is me/ livin on the curb, to livin in the burbs, end result of flippin birds/ imagination from the purp, smokin till lungs hurt/ motivation for the work, save my niggas from the dirt/ perfect, is where my talent leveled/ special, never less than, learned my lessons from the devil/ im better, due to pressure, from my mother, from my father/ but im glad that shit had happened cause now im goin farther/ now im goin harder, fuckin broads cause of the dollars/

  • Hot

    Real Talk

  • Aight I might not like college, or attend it But never question my path, not even for a second evidence that everything strings together perfectly shining, in a prism's state in this prison state filled with hate and I'm built to spill who had spoken in the ink before they filled the quill? not the slaves, cogs, or thoughtless vets they've baught into our skin, now we are swamped in debt Can't eat, can't stop, make the kings bread A man speaks, one shot, now martin kings dead
  • This was Hot too

    Real Talk

  • big ups to asher roth. he do his thing

  • at 1:27 it starts with the reverse talking so i reversted it and it sounds like classroom track. (it obviosly dosnt say that but thats what it sounds like reversed) it has chase chanting in the background. if anyone nos wats its about let me no

  • what are the notes.. omg

  • Denied as a member of society none confide-in-me, i cant believe that these bastards lied-to-me.

    Giving me praises growing up swelling my head, now that im older and wiser i realize i was fed.

    A spoon full of bullshit make a dude wanna flip empty a whole clip into the side of ninjas lip.

    i could give a fuck how u really wanna test this ill inject piss through ur nostrils into ur brain u wont forget this.

    Damn homie.... the world wanna blow me...so i killed em all slowly,.. now im lonely.

  • pretty good

  • Here i stand as a fan as i Em

    N i dont plan to aband what i am

    Ill be damned

    if i cant be a fan of both of them

    Eminem N that damn college grad

    whats his name

    oh yea its Asher man

    i forget Roth is his last name

    but anyways

  • ill make my way back

    to the main topic that begin

    this whole stoppin of my brain

    before i get off it like i did again

    damn see too much pot

    can have an affect

    but that wont stop me i bet

    ill keep smokin

    til my lungs pop inside my chest

    or until Pacs resurrect

  • DAMN LUV DIS BEAT!

    SO CHILL

  • born back in 93,fifteen ye i mean,i am young but shit hapened to me,dady decided to leave,he didnt want to stay,but them my mumy was peed,she realy want him to stay,so she cried in the night i wiped tears from her eyes and told her mum no need to put on a painted smile,the shit i lived is not the illest shit but its shit for a life to be broken into bits,so i wasnt poor an i was popular in school,so far to say i was cool and i was liked by the ladies,with my blonde long hair no im not slim shady

  • that was wack im 15 also

    i bet your the kid at school that wears shaqs with velcro

    now im the shmoe that flows rite pass you like how the wind bloes

    i dont need any ghostwriters im riding solo

    im the deep end at the pool your so shallow

    king of the burbs i just kiled you in the raps no sorrow

    killed you in the air so here i go just flow

    we can go bar for bar like a finger and a toe

    but you not on my level your girl i sent here some cum in a bottle she wants my baby

  • did you get what i just replied if not tell me an ill get back at you

  • i dont wear shaqs infact im quite cool,your cliches are makin you look a fool,rather be in the shalow end standin than in the deep end drowning,sounding like your shouting,pouting like a girl puttin on makeup,for the sake of a stake up,you should just shut up and look up,im high up like a cloud,cum in a bottle like em ill be crakin it out,dont play it rough,if all yu got is yourself an i got me an 100 bars plus

  • still the deal to steal ill will and convert it to hard steel make cash without pills no shrooms on hills all cars with big wheels easy projection on camera reals movie star style films like will i am damn the best in the land house stretched on cubic white sands not living outa vans relax get drunk and listn to bands everyones got 21 n up hands periotic oncore chants new set list possably a chance no pants girls dance in trance i know your feeling my stance
  • this is why i like asher roth ive only herd this and i love college and the beats and lyrics are great he dose sound a bit like eminem but his beats are totally differnt

  • as i em,white blonde geeky as i am,im a man so im human,humain let rain stain al clothes of haters that hate,rakers that rake,the stakers that stake,my steak is perfeyct in every way,every day i see people jockin my name,no i dont got the fame,but where im from hate builds an turns to disgrace,burns in my face,backfires on my taste,of music to create,to build hope for non stereotype in the ways,rap game means black is the way forth,but when a black dude rocks then its okay,let go n fal bak 2day

  • yo I need this beat how do I get it?

  • its on the description the link is on the description

  • any one got the one with the hook

  • is it just me or does everyone freestyle to instrumentals[cheap] i think it's just me I like to rap but i make my own instrumental on guitar though[begginer]

  • i like this better than the official

  • sounds a lil off but great job at the attempt

  • is this the actual instrumental or is it just looped? either way, dope song, dope beat.

  • no i made this all on fl studio no joke

  • yea i beleive u you could do that but you didnt finish this beat, you should work on that good job though, kinda off, but good job

  • @thebossin305 this is looped buddy i can hear it

  • @KidCrazyAlsoAmazing its not looped i swear on anything i made it

  • As i Em Rip you apart from Within Consume you over and over Again Ultimaly ull be grinded down to sind broke u Moral

  • i love da song and da instrumentals ive already written like three songs to it

  • yo if you could get the instrumental perfectionist off this album that would be such a blessing

  • bass sounds a bit funked up

  • Yeeeees, that's good. :)

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