23sec of intro(!), repeating the content 4 times(show layers, do not repeat the scene for a wireframe), do not use the same vignette and flares for every scene(same for the brown paper background at the end), credits should be shorter: made by Kimmo Kaunela, songs: xy and zy
Please delete the Realflow scene, all your other stuff looks great but this one looks like it was made from an in-game scene in 2008.
@hydracoil Thanks you! Yes, I modeled all those. I could make a tutorial, but I have a lot of work to do right now. I could make that if there is a lot of people that want that.
This is amazing work. Music fits perfectly with the video. Nice renders like that R.A.T 5 mouse. You have to get something real work from some studio, mate :)
Your reel is waayy too long:
23sec of intro(!), repeating the content 4 times(show layers, do not repeat the scene for a wireframe), do not use the same vignette and flares for every scene(same for the brown paper background at the end), credits should be shorter: made by Kimmo Kaunela, songs: xy and zy
Please delete the Realflow scene, all your other stuff looks great but this one looks like it was made from an in-game scene in 2008.
Good luck next time.
onlyCreativity 7 months ago 3
WOW! You have some nice skills. Did you model all of those? Please make a tutorial how to render those studio renders, please :)
hydracoil 7 months ago
@hydracoil Thanks you! Yes, I modeled all those. I could make a tutorial, but I have a lot of work to do right now. I could make that if there is a lot of people that want that.
kkdesing 7 months ago
This is amazing work. Music fits perfectly with the video. Nice renders like that R.A.T 5 mouse. You have to get something real work from some studio, mate :)
asdderbi123 7 months ago
@asdderbi123 Thanks! That R.A.T 5 turn out pretty nice. I wish that someday I can work with a good team of 3D graphics fellows :)
kkdesing 7 months ago