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  • I made the final cut but you cant edit life

    If you claim to die by the blade dont mean youll be dead at knife

    People see the rappin as easy, but i call it credit strife

    Its bad when you begin but then it aint no jagged life

    And if this is all she wrote than i guess i havent read it right

    And if she wrote me off, i guess i'll need my bark instead of bite

    It always seems the quick pain extends longer

    You can't put s in front of your words to make the pen stronger

    And if you said you were never l

  • ay, yo im the fuckin realest,

    so when my name is mentioned they say im the illest.

    im only 17 and yea i run the game,

    yall just mad cuz i get all the fame.

    i stay spittin cuz i be the best,

    when i come thru they say im so fresh

    spittin fire so hot like the devil,

    yall just mad cuz you cant get on my level

    i stay killin it on the fuckin beat,

    got chur girl screamin my name young $TR33TZ

  • @MegaMainMen this white boy raps too fast, like rick ross heart attack, lean back and bust with my gat, got your girls pussy on my lap AKA the cat, im hotter than interplanetary gas, rip you apart lyrically wearing a jason mask, your ladies vagin is tighter than lil waynes flow, she calls me long john, but i dont fuck around with silver call me the platinum hitter go getter, i aint like thisby choice i was born bitter, i just made you my dinner you think your fly? get up out of your hoes ride

  • Yo yo, ayo. I have a dog.

  • @sitstandnow you're a faggot ass bitch!

  • *shitty lyrics that go with the beat*

  • servin swearvin emergin buyin detergent to drink like a crazy person choke a baby in the kitchen sink and without thinkin leave the diaper full of shit while his nose is bleedin im nothin more than a human heathen who dont belive in nada dont ask me for prada i will not give you shit not even a piece of my boiled lobsta mi casa is my casa not your casa dont ask me to make you pasta

  • @riginal8 sorry but that was terrible.

  • Do me a favor don't judge since its a Freestyle If you choose to i got your girl on speed dial She knows how lay it down never mild Doin this shit since i was a child Staying young wild n free Decided to quit burning tree Cause i was lazy and i quit chasing my dream Use to have to munchies and watch MTV But im gonna chase you watch and see Why dont i call you all my referre's REMBER THIS NAME ROB-B ROB-B
  • hit repeat then stay on beat, ya cant compete ,i do this shit just so that i can eat,,And im hungry and i need to eat so ya better be discrete,fist ta ya face now u facing concrete,bitch back up and hit delete im certain you gona feel defeat,so i hope ya feeling me,cuz bitch im gona make ya bleed and in the end youll be looking up at me,begging me ta just let you bee,lay down and pretend to be asleep and close your mouth not another peep so leave a message ........BEEP

  • A ROCKET SHIP TO LAUNCH THE WAD OF CUM DOWN THE BITCH THROAT, JUST TO HEAR HER CHOKE COVERED TO KEEP WARM WID MY COAT, FUCK IT FREEZE JUST LIKE GIVIN A TIP OF ALL THE STICKS THAT PRICKS YOU, MANY MILES ON DEM SHOES I WALKED THOUGH THE BURNING ROAD OF COALS WITH NAMING ALL WRONGLY DONE HAD MY TIME AND FUN NONE OF THE WARS THAT WAGES WILL BE NAG ON,

  • FEAR THE REAPER BUT IM HELLS GATE KEEPER, HEAR THE SOFT WHISPERS OF THE COLD DARKNESS WITH THE DEVILS PITCH FOLK POKING YOU, MANY COME AND GO BUT HERE THING I HAVENT TAKEN IN YET, THE RESPECT THAT YOU LEFT ON THE TIP OF MY MUSHROOM HEAD LIKE LIFE N I ARE HAPPILY WEDD ALL THE DEAD SKIN I STRIP FROM TO BECOME ONE MORE DUMB DUMB, FULL OF SHIT....

  • yeah the dumb hoe, left me a note for after the show, telling me goodnight, hell no! cant beleive thats all she wrote, not after i just ate her out like a rolo,if i find the bitch i'll put a hole in her chest and leave her lookin like a polo,didnt want me so i'll leave her resting solo, or tie her to a hotel bed and make her go up and down like pogo, and ino im cold though, but im evil like mojo-jojo

  • Come to my aide, my maid!

  • I make these tirades, I am the glade for rappers out there, I can persuade, all of you are just alcaides, I throw you into the stockades, get a taste of my brigade, I invade, don't evade, cause once you die you fade, I am the shade, go roll down the hade!

  • This is a raid, It had to be made, you're fully betrayed, I throw the grenade, go back and die, I melee, I antagonize, I shift through the lies, this is now your demise, all the clear skys, are now as dark as your failed tries, I might be as cruel as the fool that can't get through eating gruel, you give me all my fuel, to win all the duels, if only you knew, that a feud gets over quick once you get sued, I am as crude and rude as the pseud that makes the rules, who'll take this fancy jewel!

  • I excavate, you're too late I rule the states, these stakes are too high to make, but I go around and flank, I might too hard for you to take, but I'm as fast as they and as high as they rate, inflammate, deteriorate, I was on the slate, but I'm bound to skate, I contaminate, this is your faith, can't run away from faith, you're now a wraith, just go in, and go straight, this is your date, it's over, you're dead, this is the gate.

  • i guarantee ill kill this fuckin beat, go ham,dirty meat,

    spit raw, ejaculating from my left ball,

    out my dick in your your jaw, cream filled bitch, you have no money at all

    but Cash.Rules.Everything.Around.M­e, that's all

    i can make a stairway to heaven cuz my stacks that tall

    *ring *ring, Godamn Jesus called, askin to borrow a couple stacks to hit the mall,i shit money with no fuckin stall,

  • @TheCheapDoctor nope.. didnt kill it.. your trying too hard to sound like tyler the creator AND those lines werent even half of a verse. AND your "verse" has nothing to do with the chorus. not trying to be a dick. but.. you just rapped about money, sperm, and making fun of jesus. your SO original. and im being SO sarcastic.

  • im go in no Vaseline

  • wtf loop n hook just blew my bars like an IED

  • its so tainted and i was hated but i made it, so please save me some gravy, dont try to save me, some people call me deep evey singal night for i lye down i weep, just to keep a memory fresh, hate on me as much no never give me less, cause your hate is what keeps me blessed . . . so please just rest before you get depressed and pressed and weigheded for as much as other homies have been hated, and im feelin so degraded and faded by the puzzles and the mazzes,,, noah northcutt

  • Yo, Its T.a.g coming back with a smile, I want haters like you to line up for miles

    so we can dial in the coordinates, so we can obliterate you insibortinate suckas

    I want you to keep runnin and ducking, we we be poppin off thoes rythems and rhymes one quick word insicion at a time on top of one another, let me speak freely on this subject of bother when you walkin up sayin whats up like you some kind of brother? let me make it clear what you doing here? you aint even a friend you'r not even

  • @RobandKel4ever check out too long on my page please you guys all spit good its a group called badhabit outta la

  • jddd

  • wtf are these comments about -_-

  • can i do this song?

  • madness on a milli half mi exes wonna kill me spit a couple rymes on youtube now i bet u think thats silly kinda funny private gunny never sunny up in philly do mi best to not surrender but mi haters wonna kill me

  • @ChristinajonesKG bro yo dont have haters no one even knows who you are lol

  • Winning like I'm Sheen which means I a set of Tiger's Balls/ Fuck the ihop waitress unless during sex I have to pause/ Don't fuck with dirty bitchs who have applause up in their draws/ Yeah I'm not perfect I got a lot of fucking flaws/But she been sucking dick so much you would think it was her fucking cause/ Smooth Crimnal like MJ so fuck your laws/I do what I wanna and I do that shit just because/ Who gonna stop me not you so shut your jaws/Country mother fucker like my name is Tim McGraw.

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  • @kctess5 it does say with hook right? yeah...yeah it does cuz im reading it right now... *sigh* nutha ten year old not readin titles

  • @kctess5 INSTRUMENTAL With Hook. Moron lol.

    

  • I know they dont belive in me...but i wont give up that easily...

    poetic with verses n cowards sit down where they need to be...

    they say that they ur friend but will they be there when they need to be..

    probably not but think im lost n i think u just dont see in me.

    contact a vizine to see,mortal kombat n lightning to weak..for me but i come back striking to preach.i guess im talkin shit but its all she wrote im brightly g...

  • who ever said this sucks, you can get F... out here doug

  • i would be ya man if yu be my gurl made a promise from the start that ill neva break ya heart we always be togther throught the rain and stormy weather so hold ya head up high and noe ill always be that guy yu come home every nite too, doin yu so right to the nite yu took flight cuz i heard yu were foolin around so its best that i let yu no that i gotta let yu go,

  • this shit go hard

  • how did u make the instrumental with jus the hook? im trying to do it on audacity n cant figure it out to save my life

  • everybody wanna downgrade me....... noboyd wanna save me.......... dont care if u hate me......... all yall need a bottle....... fucking babies....... some of yall dudes act like ladies...... foaming at the mouth (rabies).... take a puff hazzy.... get down lazy.... how about stop hating (praise me).. thank you to all the people that help raise me.. yall gave me the strength and power......... shower me with love and care........... gave me a fair chance of life.........
  • Hold up, wait a second, slow it down for a min/ momentum making me master this movement/ move it faster/ a lil bit infactuate/ matta fact less have date/ you say no/ i masterbate/ puttin icing on the cake/

    yea they say im a lil sick/ but meeaaa i don give a shit/

    i do it till im filthy rich/ got the filthy need the rich/

    nevermind the stupid bitch

    she just givin faulty hope/ nusense like a noosed up rope/

    let her go n drop the soap

    you know the rest

    that all she wrote

  • it really does :(

  • This note is froozen askin how I can be so cold-

    I thought our love was BOLD

    -I was priceless u was steadling for -gold- but u got the bread its old I call ur pocket mold- my love is sold -

    That's all I wrote

    That's all I wrote

    Your wack I change the channle I got the remote

  • Tha night is over that's all I wrote

    Don't take it as a susicde note

    I don't even actknoledge u so u don't have to know

    Nig ur retarted I just call u slow

    The night is darker then a crow

    Tryin to keep me in line lyk a row

    Try to keep that other girl on the low

    Damn she just had to grow

  • @esmiigirl that was horrible..

  • dis is one of the best dsuos

  • CHECK OUT MY VERSION ON DA VIDEO RESPONSE... THANX

  • 'streets like cold chicago

    (WINDY CITY)

    FUCKIN DUMBASS

  • @BuddyMuchwanoCookies cool channel, fucking dumbass

  • can i do a remix to this

  • @prepboyswaqqqq I woulda fucken laughed if he said no ...

  • Nice, now i can listen to this beat with out eminem's random ass rapping.

  • @FlyingJypsie LOL...eminem is hot and i like his music but i agree he was rappin; about some random shit on this..roflmao

  • I am a bor South Africa rap artist all homemade aND i love this one morethan original

  • thats all she wrote umm if u didnt notice she a hoe

    she ended it

    cuz she couldnt handle it

    now she on stage saying how she remeber it

  • all she wrote like a half done essay//

    is that she cant handle my lies anymore//

    she done of cryin and fighting over them whores//

    that i messed with that day//

    she left like a stray//

    no place to go just following the endless road//

    of shame-she caught with my score-of the game i played//

    never knew she'll get the game score//

    all that was said in a piece of paper & thats all she wrote//

  • yo i aint like em u can call me bro, jus dont call my hoe, turn into my foe would b quite loco id suggest u pull a no go, get back to the flow tho,

    back to my life now, same shit every nite how, come home slang till no1 in sight wow, just never live in fright trust in this master plan, for now it puts cash in hand,

    we all need to get by i said exactly man, so i extract this strand , genetically engineered mastamind with a knack for creatin somethin grand

    fuck obama but yes we can

  • Shady's staring into a barrel hate, switch the plate,

    now its my turn to do the rap and make a bit of a state, on this fucking track yeah you know who's gonna stay,

    therefore iv got unlimited ammo to push you all outta they way!

    nights over goodbye crowd, why you shouting so loud, don't you wanna see me take this verse right into the ground?

    without making a sound, haha oh no you don't,

    its like im making up an excuse, i cant, i shouldn't or even won't!

    now c'mon that's all she wrote...

  • /watch?v=3uqkRUCWJww

  • I hate how T.I. disses Chicago in the hook.

  • @InstrumentalKINGblog he says the streets are cold like chicago

  • @InstrumentalKINGblog how the hell is he dissing chicago?

    he says 'streets like cold chicago'.

    dumbass theyre nicknamed the windy city.

    how the hell is that a diss

  • @guesswhoo3 the part that says "aint nothing new seen it all before"

  • @InstrumentalKINGblog The streetz are like north chicago.

  • you call me rude thats not what you said when i got you that ring

    if im rude bitch im taking back evrything

    oo............. all the suddan you love me again

    well 4get taht this is a battel you wont win

    get my paper and it all goes to you

    aint gettin no more honey were through

    sorry baby were done look what you did

    p.s dont flip out but honey i took are kid

    lol

  • someone needs to make an instrumental for the song echo by eminem

  • Forgiven is one hell of a word to describe things ive been through

    Outcasted by the world and welcomed by the many few

    Just another day in the life an exile whos cut throat

    Born into my sins and cant escape them they just stay afloat

    I need a boat, people constantly changing but i never dont

    Sometimes i feel controlled, cuz my life had came with a remote

    If you lookin for me, im already dead, that all she wrote

  • Look me in the eyes behind the high,

    see my tears rolling inside yet i disguise,

    more and more lies im trying to hide

    let this be a lesson,step one depression

    so now im stressing see other way

    trying to get payed so i husal night and day

    cant find the way out so start to cagnscream and shout

    maybe now youll no wat im about and its driving me insane

    wen i cant seam to find the change its driving me insane

    wen the fuck will i leave this game

  • im the king of the castle or so i proclaim/

    but for some reason every time i sing im just a real asshole or so they say/

    sometimes i become a bit of a spaz so wheres my class/

    none left so kiss my ass dont like this listen to jazz/

    i know im bad but im just tryin to make dam classics/

    but dammit like joints how i roll it just makin dam hits/

    lookin down on my hypocrits/

    im bookin another show with all my fan favorites/

    so savor this flavor aint noone gonna do it the same its bad behavior

  • i grab my pen, lighter fluid and my gin/

    then stab the beat wit a flow tighter than hallucinogens/

    hate that bitch so i rewrite her faster than i can rewire my typewriter/

    u aint my type ur white need some latino for my bambino/

    this is funny and i think i need some damn beeno/

    critics i see none so wheres my dam needle/

    throw it on the record and watch it spin/

    like ur asses i love to hear the hate it just inspires my pen

    could do this till i get tired but that never happens to a real fighter

  • It's over with, that's all she wrote/ I don't have her, I feel broke/ I loved her the most/ But now I don't have my baby yo/ Felt like the relationship was one sided/ No reciprocity and always fighting/ for her I would take a bullet/ She don't give a fuck about me she would take the gun and pull it/ She doesn't have to pull the trigger for me to feel shot/ after everything I did and all the things I bought/ I never felt sought/ Fuck all the animosity and how much we fought. Fuck you bitch.

  • ok right no left left is what you did but i was right all along

    so now that im doing this i dedicate u this song

    u hurt me so bad but i dont think you were the problem

    because we tried so damn just to get by and solve em

    right tracks wrong train we were in love with the pain

    it was doomed from the start

    fate tore us apart

    and baby i just cant let you go

    fuck the previous letter i love you thats all that matter and thats all she wrote (sorry guys i had to go for seconds lol)

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  • (0:44) This piece is a master it's the fastest feet last in heats first to the meet the competitors in the dust

    plastered freaks, freakin off the beat so far off the track it's in another street half way across the

    world you hear the leap of faith you collapse the scheme, rhyme you cant compete without them it's not

    complete. This rap game is full of sheet, and I can't stop to cover my tracts so I lay on top of eat these

    other rappers slip the vice these grips nuemonic device...

  • I aint going back to you, I don't believe in bitch recyclin/

    Where the fuck's my vycoden/ headache from the sound

    of all these hoes who always whinin and/ complaining bout

    their period/ fuck 'em I ain't hearin it/ impatience I am nearin it/

    anotha day another bitch/

    run away or get a stitch/ try comin back again n l will throw you in a ditch/

    full clip of red ink/to drown you in failin every test/ might as well give it a rest/ Yeah my sperm in ya egg but I aint giving you my nest BITCH.

  • my flow's tainted tampered with, tempered in this corruption

    don't make assuamptions bout me bitch or i'll leave you in crutches

    lame birds soon to be punished my words soon to be published

    i'm the shit never flush it and hater's never get bubkiss

    fuck it i stay lusting and bustin so woudl you miss me love

    if not the heart of these arteries are thrown into arrythmia

    anf if i loved you once hoe it must have been a figment of

    my imagination lick the sunday and kiss the nuts

    Check my page

  • All she left, was a letter of the bed.

    It was short and brief, but this is what it said.

    It read, I'm leaving you, with you i feel like im dead,

    You hit me around, chocked me til i blead,

    But I had enough asshole, this shit ends tonight,

    I cant even have a talk with you cuz all we do is fight, and this might,

    be a surprise to you that im gone,

    No longer will i be there when you come home

    Cuz im not your bitch, who you toss around and kick, leave me with 11 stiches in my lip.

  • @StevieG130 haha sounds like you Chris Brown'd a hoe

  • i thought we had a shot. like your good at archery. cupid must have missed it if you feel me hole-heartily. i wish you could have got another prescription for that medication. cause your bipolar ways never take a vacation. ain't no more time to be waistin but i was busy blazing. i guess we didnt work out cause we were both lazy.

  • you were the one that looked me up after 12yrs on facebook. wait LOOK your married, i thought all these feelings were buried, seems like your leaving him coming to ATL to start agian we be together just like we were as kids. things went good for a few months, you got pregnant with my kid. suddenly your starting to tell me that your missing him. things seem dim at this point you went to NY to get back in touch with your life. i guess that means your his wife...aight....i see how its gonna be.

  • You Call Me Cold Like Chicago, Im Living My Life Like There's No Tomorrow, I'm On A Journey Need To See How Far I Get Though, I Take A Look Back At The Past Its All In Slow Movement, Not Even Any Room For Improvement.

  • Ok. Goodnight all she wrote. Couldnt handel my bullshit no more. no more hope. She used to love me, love that i was dope. Now i'm just a stranger, sumtin like a ghost. But she dont know. I still get a sudden rush When i think back, fall off my tracks, tryin to get her back. Fuck it go, go till your gone like tomorrow. I know its bitter. But thats the pill you choose swollow.
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  • i was your knight and damn right you were my princess

    you devolved hate for me every day it grew a bit less

    than before we used to ride off into the sunset

    we used to be best of lovers we were all set

    then one day i woke up and found out you were not here

    you left letter telling me of how it was clear

    that you could never love someone like me and how u played me

    and wrote a deep ass letter explaining why u hate me

    and for a moment i thought to myself how could i be so stupid

  • @jxl0p3z and then it occurred to me that your the one whose fucking clueless

  • @jxl0p3z You have no idea how much I sat there and repeated those lines and worked on the rhythm of it all to match it up with the song. In the end, it sounded great to me. You did a very good job on that.

  • @psych21490 thanks bro! - Jay

  • @jxl0p3z adding on to that,

    I fell to the floor like dubstep, the beat dropped,

    put a gun to the side of my head didnt want to hear the noises outside of my brain I popped,

    Sad that we were the home coming queen and king,

    aint it funny how I bout you this ring,

    ye thats all I wrote I just wanted to share,

    walked out the door glad to see u care,

    but im done crying about you every night,

    because I dont wana be alone when I see the light,

  • @jxl0p3z damn u went off

  • @sorakeyblade123 thanks man

  • thinking bout this girl yea she got me going crazy

    smoking all this weed got my mind kinna hazey

    but it wont phase me

    no emotions taken over me

    most important think i know you still think about me

  • You know my rap style is out of your range As soon as you listen to me you go slightly deranged

    And I'm so fly I'm heading for Mars

    If life throws a punch at me I block and I dodge And you know what's coming

    When I'm running up to your front door I'm going to say this once don't fuck with Flare, dawg

    Coz I'm ruthless

    Fuck with me you'll be toothless

    And it's useless stepping to me doofus

    Please Comment whether this is good or not. Thx

  • @LiamandMerdan I dont like it.

  • tweak it and itll be great im still using it though no matter what

  • @bgone20 goodjob keep it up

  • THe loop[s suck

  • soon as i step on this song, man its been too long/

    i been doin good no doin wrong, a little less of hittin the bong/

    the green monster as we call it, ballin like the doughboy aint got no dough in my pocket boy/

    got the game on lock, got it cocked, locked n got it loaded/

    soon as i feel appropriate i dispose it cold as snow, im froze/

    just zipped up my whole tip like t.i.p. man this beat is crazy g im goin so crazily unmercifully aint showin no mercy on the beat

  • Thanks Man

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