Dance Dance Revolution club

[cmulvanyvideo]

One of the fundamentals of video storytelling is sequencing. In your video you needed to break the dancing scenes down into wide, medium and tight shots. An example would be to start with a tight shot of the feet (like you did), but instead of showing more feet, cut to a wide shot, then cut to medium shot of the dancers face, then maybe a tight shot of the television. Try to avoid editing together two similar shots--like two wides or to medium shots.

[macloo]

I would like to see some faces cut in with the feet at the beginning. I would also like some more creative angles, e.g., low down looking up, or high up looking down. Good subject.