@Vespeeking I think he means that your voice sounds like you want to sing but you're not giving it your all. It's like the difference when you're singing for yourself vs in public with headphones on. My recommendation is to learn your lyrics better, keep practicing them, and by the time you re-record this or anything else like it, you'll sound like you know what you're doing. That help?
@dyango Okay. But how was it weak? How can I do better? Saying it's just weak wont help me improve. I want constructive criticism, but it would be better if you told me more about what you said.
@Vespeeking you did great bro! but if you do want constructive criticism then i think the audio is quite terrible (sorry but true), you need something different to record with and i kinda get the feeling that your holding back, like when someone shy sings into a crowed, you know how they sing kind of low (i think thats whats happening here), but thats just my thoughts on it.
I've been wondering how the opening music would sound in English, thanks.
strifeexcalibur 2 weeks ago
Its good for an amateur effort, but you should have given it a different title, people were expecting the official version
DuskBeforeDawn2008 3 weeks ago
@Vespeeking I think he means that your voice sounds like you want to sing but you're not giving it your all. It's like the difference when you're singing for yourself vs in public with headphones on. My recommendation is to learn your lyrics better, keep practicing them, and by the time you re-record this or anything else like it, you'll sound like you know what you're doing. That help?
FoxLightstep 3 months ago
Weak
dyango 9 months ago
@dyango Okay. But how was it weak? How can I do better? Saying it's just weak wont help me improve. I want constructive criticism, but it would be better if you told me more about what you said.
Vespeeking 9 months ago
@Vespeeking background track is mono? Bad sound.
SUPERROBOTZERO 1 month ago
i think its good
falschblut1345 9 months ago
@falschblut1345 Thank you. :)
Vespeeking 9 months ago
@Vespeeking you did great bro! but if you do want constructive criticism then i think the audio is quite terrible (sorry but true), you need something different to record with and i kinda get the feeling that your holding back, like when someone shy sings into a crowed, you know how they sing kind of low (i think thats whats happening here), but thats just my thoughts on it.
ruzzzler 3 weeks ago