I think this is really good for an intro to film piece- not that it matters now, but there was more you could have done. still a well told story and well shot! I hope you did well!
No offence and I dont mean this to be mean.. I know you said your really proud of it, but this sucks. It could have had so much more effort into it..
It just showed you sleeping around.. You could have been wandering the streets, YOU crying at least, something.. this just seems to me not a lot of effort or thought into it..
this is awesome :) i love it
Netaarts3232 2 months ago
I think this is really good for an intro to film piece- not that it matters now, but there was more you could have done. still a well told story and well shot! I hope you did well!
leprechaun61787 9 months ago
Wow, those people are so judgemental! I think that if you tried and if youre proud then its as good as you can get it ^_^
Good job
JennaxJoker 2 years ago
It's poo!
danielalovesg 2 years ago
No offence and I dont mean this to be mean.. I know you said your really proud of it, but this sucks. It could have had so much more effort into it..
It just showed you sleeping around.. You could have been wandering the streets, YOU crying at least, something.. this just seems to me not a lot of effort or thought into it..
Sorry, hope this is constructive criticism
princessjlob 2 years ago
I think it's FUCKING SHIT!
kandykay1992 2 years ago
I don know what to think.... not realy horrible and its not realy hollywood metrila
starfire14sa 3 years ago