Jayson Jennings 3d modeling Demo Reel (Work in Progress)

[mrmoogle1]

wow, I got feedback! Yes, the lighting, the over saturated red on the axe, even the strange issues with the lighting and decay are issues. Absolutely right. I put this reel together in a hurry. I noticed all of these things and just cringed, "there's a ton of mistakes but I'm running out of time"

I'm ecstatic that you said the second model is perfect, that's very reassuring. With more work it might get me hired. But as it stands this reel would probably just get rejected. It needs work

[sabinner]

Second Model: Perfect, but might need to turn the reflectivity down just a little for the second turn around..

Third: Nice lighting and layout. Not much to fix here... I was just noticing that the blood appears to be different colors throughout the room. Is this because of the lighting or did you use separate materials? I like the dark red color, but theres a bright saturated red on the weapon on the table.

Overall good reel! Good luck in the future!

[sabinner]

Nice Models. Just a few little things.

The first model: When showing the second turn around of the building, get rid of that directional light or whatever it is. It creates a cool mood in the first turn around, but gets in the way for the second. I was trying to check out the overall structure, but it was very difficult to see with that light . Also, do you have it set to decay? It looks like it might not be, or its settings are just off....It might just be to bright.

[mrmoogle1]

ok, I am making some changes to the audio file. it ends too short. also I made some changes to the living room scene at the end. I will upload the updated version tomorrow morning asap.