Very interesting. The editing and effects are good, and with each film you'll improve, but you need to work on character development for your next film. Why are they killing each other? Who is punishing them, why? Why do we care at all? You have to give them a back story so the audience will either sympathize with them, or hate them, depending on what you want.
I hate character limits, I have a bit more to say.
You don't have to add a lot to develop character, you dont have to add flashbacks or pages of talking (I had a film teacher that hated flashbacks), but a bit more would help. We could hear them complaining about hunger, but were they hunting? or Lost? Or in a plane crash? Even just a couple of lines would help. Hope to see one of your films at MIFF next year, cheers
Very interesting. The editing and effects are good, and with each film you'll improve, but you need to work on character development for your next film. Why are they killing each other? Who is punishing them, why? Why do we care at all? You have to give them a back story so the audience will either sympathize with them, or hate them, depending on what you want.
rageinproductions 1 year ago
I hate character limits, I have a bit more to say.
You don't have to add a lot to develop character, you dont have to add flashbacks or pages of talking (I had a film teacher that hated flashbacks), but a bit more would help. We could hear them complaining about hunger, but were they hunting? or Lost? Or in a plane crash? Even just a couple of lines would help. Hope to see one of your films at MIFF next year, cheers
rageinproductions 1 year ago
interesting. I don't know if it makes sense to have it be a non-linear story and I'm not sure I understand the "moral" of the story, but it's cool.
Deadmansparty2002 1 year ago
i look so awesome in this
d6a6r6kness 1 year ago