You have a beautiful voice :) The mood and melody fits perfectly with the composition of your voice.. However, the wording needs to be improved.. Some of the sentences don't match with the melody, so you needed to "slide" some of the words. Also, try to rhyme the words to all the more enhance the quality of the song. Anyway, I love the topic you picked out. Keep working on it and you'll get there! :))
I know I have problems writing lyrics, but when I get technical about it I can't write anything. This song was just pure expression. I keep trying though, thanks for your time =)
Ah! I've gotten that alot now that I think about it, I have an original song on here called "All in War". I sound more like Amy Lee there, check it out if you want =) Thanks for watching! <3
I was wondering if this bothers you that I take your song to the sing in a show. If you are d "agreement, could you tell me your name and first name since you're the artist? Thank you :)
Are you refering to the original song or this video? Because if it's this video, I might be able to get you just the vocal track. If it's the original song with the original singer..That might be harder to do.
this is amazing ur voice is so fantastic why r u not a pop star cuz i will buy ur music ur voice calms me like tanaka rei singing quiet night, keep up the good work
@S0ra7777 Wow, thanks so much =D I'm actually working on making a CD right now on my own. (It's hard): because I write alot of sad music. I was told by a professional producer, that people here in America people won't like me very much and that I would do perfect in Japan or the UK. The genre I suppposedly have is Folk-Pop. If you don't mind that, then keep an eye out for when I do make a CD =) I really appreciate your comment though <3
You were right, Yui, this is marvellous, too. Your voice awakens feelings and memories in people. COnsider my one of your geates fans. =) I would propose to you to do a song cover with me and my friends but there is an issue with the distance lol =P Keep up the good work, Yui, my suggestions for future covers are Nightwish, Evanescence and "Dead End" by In Flames (even though you'll also need a male singer for the last one).
Honestly, we could do a cover. It's really simple, long distance is not an issue at all =)
Thank you for listening! =D I'm really glad that you like my music =) I'll check out those songs, perhaps cover one if I can =) Thanks for your time =D
I really love your voice for this song. It sounds really beautiful, and your English lyrics are perfect! I'm glad you used the piano version for this, because it compliments your voice more. You sound too... sweet for the original track. Great job! ^^
Thank you very much =) I worked really hard on the english lyrics, for the first time..I was able to express myself to someone who means alot to me. Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment! =D! =)
OMG YOU ARE AWSOME! You are better than half the "singers" out there who basically just say their songs. and their not rappers or anything either. -_- lazy little.... Anyways, i could hardly believe it when i heard this. i was wisked away to a different place. If this is your dream... go for it.
Anyone who says you're terrible need to get the stick out of their butts cuz they just jealous.
my cat: *holds up paw in greeting* yo. when i heard this, i purred ^w^ nice job
And I agree with you on the singers today. It's not like they are even saying anything important in their songs except how they want to screw you so bad because they love you lolz xD
wow you have such a beautiful voice! wonder if i can download this? haha that wud be cool! excellent job! i know how it feels to write your own lyrics, it can be hard sometimes but you did an excellent job! well done!
I like it , but I don't want to criticize , so sorry ! When the beat starts to get fast , you lost the beat , there are some parts in the song when the pitch was not right , but overall I like it . You have a good voice , I think it's just because I'm picky , but I don't really like slurs for some reason .. But lovely voice :D
I do have a beat problem, always have x.x..And I actually have a lisp =D But, I've been working on fixing it! So, aslong as I keep trying. Right? =) Thank you for listening! <3
Thank you so very much! I greatly appreciate it! =D
I was at camp and the lady was trying to give the girls in the camp "voice" lessons..She just has us singing "Amarili" = Italian Opera..I lost my voice lol..But, I will keep learning on my own! I've already improved! (Despite that I cannot sing right now lolz)
Thank you very much, again! It is greatly appreciated! =)
Yeah, I wish I could get them. But, I'm already paying for piano on my own now which is $190 per month..And I don't really have a job and I'm only 15..I am working hard though, on getting better on my own =)
Thank you =D! I really appreciate it. I don't get most people saying that lolz And most of the time I think everyone has a better voice x.x..Thank you! =)
I'm actually making my own CD now, I'm working hard on it! I got a few demos I just made, but I think I want to work more on them =) If I make the CD and get the demos done, would you like me to inform you? =D
you are awesome!
williamhowe1 1 month ago
Snowman Kira
tomerteo123 2 months ago
omg great job on this
6Baltej6 4 months ago
Its SUPER AWESOME! is there a way to get this in like mp3 format?
YukixFelix 4 months ago
i love this song i feel like i heard it be 4 but u rock
starfox10001 4 months ago
..My god, Your voice might be the most beautiful thing I've ever heard.
stonedcity 5 months ago 3
voice of an angel, honestly, perfect voice........
Calamity3221 6 months ago
when i first heard it i tot it was an official one good job (Y)
jiabaliao123 6 months ago
Do you mind putting up a link to the backing track?
SakuraDaidoji 6 months ago
@SakuraDaidoji
The backing track, as in the instrumental?
YuiHisaishi 3 months ago
@YuiHisaishi Yes...
SakuraDaidoji 3 months ago
@SakuraDaidoji
Message me your email, if I can find it I'll send it to you.
YuiHisaishi 3 months ago
nice voice.....
95samlo 7 months ago
two words epicly awesome
keybladealchemist88 7 months ago 2
You have a beautiful voice :) The mood and melody fits perfectly with the composition of your voice.. However, the wording needs to be improved.. Some of the sentences don't match with the melody, so you needed to "slide" some of the words. Also, try to rhyme the words to all the more enhance the quality of the song. Anyway, I love the topic you picked out. Keep working on it and you'll get there! :))
sasigrl4evr 8 months ago
@sasigrl4evr
Whoa, thanks for the critique =D
I know I have problems writing lyrics, but when I get technical about it I can't write anything. This song was just pure expression. I keep trying though, thanks for your time =)
YuiHisaishi 7 months ago
beautiful voice reminds me of evanescence :-)
Trancerify 8 months ago
@Trancerify
Ah! I've gotten that alot now that I think about it, I have an original song on here called "All in War". I sound more like Amy Lee there, check it out if you want =) Thanks for watching! <3
YuiHisaishi 8 months ago
*CRIES* :")
HarmonyMelodyable 8 months ago
@HarmonyMelodyable
*Hands a tissue!* ^_^
YuiHisaishi 8 months ago
Three words :
Epic
beautiful
Sad
Your'e awesome !!!
McGuiver002 8 months ago 8
@McGuiver002
Thank you! =D!
YuiHisaishi 8 months ago
I was wondering if this bothers you that I take your song to the sing in a show. If you are d "agreement, could you tell me your name and first name since you're the artist? Thank you :)
29kiss1 9 months ago
Could you write the lyrics of your song? Because it is so extraordinary and really good, so wonderful! :D 10/10
29kiss1 9 months ago
@29kiss1 Thank you =D I put the lyrics in the description for you =)
YuiHisaishi 9 months ago
@YuiHisaishi Thank you :P
29kiss1 9 months ago
T__T is there a verison that THERE ONLY a voice only...
speedhedgehog455 9 months ago
@speedhedgehog455 What do you mean?
YuiHisaishi 9 months ago
@YuiHisaishi ._. like...with no music in the back ground but only the singer..
speedhedgehog455 9 months ago
@speedhedgehog455 Ah, acapella =)
Are you refering to the original song or this video? Because if it's this video, I might be able to get you just the vocal track. If it's the original song with the original singer..That might be harder to do.
YuiHisaishi 9 months ago
amazing vocal and very nice song. i though famous singer who sing this
destardun 9 months ago
@destardun Thank you =)
YuiHisaishi 9 months ago
this is amazing ur voice is so fantastic why r u not a pop star cuz i will buy ur music ur voice calms me like tanaka rei singing quiet night, keep up the good work
S0ra7777 9 months ago
@S0ra7777 Wow, thanks so much =D I'm actually working on making a CD right now on my own. (It's hard): because I write alot of sad music. I was told by a professional producer, that people here in America people won't like me very much and that I would do perfect in Japan or the UK. The genre I suppposedly have is Folk-Pop. If you don't mind that, then keep an eye out for when I do make a CD =) I really appreciate your comment though <3
YuiHisaishi 9 months ago
you probably get this a lot but you would be perfect singing Akatsuki No Kuruma and Honoh No Tobira in english or japanese.
Thank you for all your effort.
6647providence 10 months ago
@6647providence
Akatsui No Kuruma and Honoh No Tobira, I'll check them out =) Thank you =D
YuiHisaishi 9 months ago
Wonderful! I love this song ^-^ You have a fantastic voice
MarieAkaMarizZ 11 months ago
@MarieAkaMarizZ Thank you =D
YuiHisaishi 9 months ago
One of the better dub I have seen for a while.
frenzygundam 11 months ago
@frenzygundam
Thank you =D
YuiHisaishi 11 months ago
lovely vocals xx
songpidgeon 11 months ago
Wow you have an amazing voice nice cover and keep up your good work you have me as a subscriber !!!!!
kzzaby 11 months ago
Your singing voice is the most beautiful since Amanda Lee's music.
Farfeb 1 year ago
is this a demo or a full song?
stephendragon12 1 year ago
@stephendragon12
Full song =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
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stephendragon12 1 year ago
You were right, Yui, this is marvellous, too. Your voice awakens feelings and memories in people. COnsider my one of your geates fans. =) I would propose to you to do a song cover with me and my friends but there is an issue with the distance lol =P Keep up the good work, Yui, my suggestions for future covers are Nightwish, Evanescence and "Dead End" by In Flames (even though you'll also need a male singer for the last one).
JohnLaJohn 1 year ago
@JohnLaJohn
Thank you John! =D
Honestly, we could do a cover. It's really simple, long distance is not an issue at all =)
Thank you for listening! =D I'm really glad that you like my music =) I'll check out those songs, perhaps cover one if I can =) Thanks for your time =D
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
I really love your voice for this song. It sounds really beautiful, and your English lyrics are perfect! I'm glad you used the piano version for this, because it compliments your voice more. You sound too... sweet for the original track. Great job! ^^
YuraRyuYasha 1 year ago
@YuraRyuYasha
Thank you very much =) I worked really hard on the english lyrics, for the first time..I was able to express myself to someone who means alot to me. Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment! =D! =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
very nice. also nice job extending it
Dmania1000 1 year ago
@Dmania1000
Thank you =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
Man i needa get myself a copy of this song :D
chunyin 1 year ago
@chunyin
Mediaconverter.......org
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
OMG YOU ARE AWSOME! You are better than half the "singers" out there who basically just say their songs. and their not rappers or anything either. -_- lazy little.... Anyways, i could hardly believe it when i heard this. i was wisked away to a different place. If this is your dream... go for it.
Anyone who says you're terrible need to get the stick out of their butts cuz they just jealous.
my cat: *holds up paw in greeting* yo. when i heard this, i purred ^w^ nice job
Shadow3dLeaf 1 year ago
@Shadow3dLeaf
Lolz, thanks =)
And I agree with you on the singers today. It's not like they are even saying anything important in their songs except how they want to screw you so bad because they love you lolz xD
I like cats =) *pets*
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi EXACTLY! that and heartbreak. >o< bleck
Cat: *purrs* i like this person ^^
Shadow3dLeaf 1 year ago
Pretty :D ur awesome! weird how ur not famous?:O
chunyin 1 year ago
@chunyin
Lmao, suppose so.
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi Umm also u use a editor?
chunyin 1 year ago
@chunyin
Sorry, please rephrase that?
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
you almost sound like see saw except more better
gojincota 1 year ago
@gojincota
Do you really think so? o.o..That's really cool! Thank you =D
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
wow you have such a beautiful voice! wonder if i can download this? haha that wud be cool! excellent job! i know how it feels to write your own lyrics, it can be hard sometimes but you did an excellent job! well done!
KoUgRiE 1 year ago
@KoUgRiE
Thank you very much! I really appreciate you watching this video ^_^
And ofcourse you can download it lolz, if you go to mediaconverter . org you can get it from there.
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
I like it , but I don't want to criticize , so sorry ! When the beat starts to get fast , you lost the beat , there are some parts in the song when the pitch was not right , but overall I like it . You have a good voice , I think it's just because I'm picky , but I don't really like slurs for some reason .. But lovely voice :D
CWalkerzRevenge 1 year ago
@CWalkerzRevenge
That is fine! =D
I do have a beat problem, always have x.x..And I actually have a lisp =D But, I've been working on fixing it! So, aslong as I keep trying. Right? =) Thank you for listening! <3
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi
Try making up your own beat and then singing . Keeping in rhythm is SEXY ! aha good luck .
CWalkerzRevenge 1 year ago
nice voice
ZrarMg6oo3 1 year ago
It a lovly and tuching song to me i love this vido thanks for making it. ^.^
firegirlf16 1 year ago
@firegirlf16
I'm glad it's a touching song to you =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
nice ;D.. you really got a good voice.. definitely bookmarking this ;P
saadfan 1 year ago
OMG love your voice i can sing as well :3 maybe we do a duet :3
Gaarasgirl421 1 year ago
@Gaarasgirl421
Really? That'd be cool =D I'll message you about that =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
Yet again, great job! You wrote this? It's really good. XD
NZer0Productions 1 year ago
@NZer0Productions
I think you're stalking me xD
Joking lolz =)
Yes! I did write the lyrics on this =D Thank you =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi lol sorry....
NZer0Productions 1 year ago
@NZer0Productions
NO! I WAS JOKING! D;
I honestly was! T.T...Don't be sad T.T...Don't be sorry, or I'll cry D;
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi It's alright... Lol. I know. XD
NZer0Productions 1 year ago
@NZer0Productions Oh lol okay good xD
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
You're voice is amazing!
AnimeChibiGirl729 1 year ago
@AnimeChibiGirl729
Thank you! =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@MagusOverlord
Thank you! I greatly appreciate it! I didn't think people would notice how much I've improved =)
Thank you very much! I really appreciate it =D
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
you have an amazingly heavenly voice but yeah some singing practice is needed but still though this is an amazing fandub
AZNricky100 1 year ago
@AZNricky100
Thank you so very much! I greatly appreciate it! =D
I was at camp and the lady was trying to give the girls in the camp "voice" lessons..She just has us singing "Amarili" = Italian Opera..I lost my voice lol..But, I will keep learning on my own! I've already improved! (Despite that I cannot sing right now lolz)
Thank you very much, again! It is greatly appreciated! =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi ur welcome btw i subbed after checking out some of ur other vids some of them are really good =)
AZNricky100 1 year ago
@AZNricky100
I see =D! Thank you very much =)
I'm really surprised about how many subscribers I have..! Thank you =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
Amazing !
maxxtorrr 1 year ago
i leik the lyrics chu made!!!!
AwysaChan 1 year ago
awesome o0
go in my fav =)
tartine1991 1 year ago
You need voice training... Almost had it.. But yeah. Angelic voice though.
Kouji311 1 year ago
@Kouji311
Yeah, I wish I could get them. But, I'm already paying for piano on my own now which is $190 per month..And I don't really have a job and I'm only 15..I am working hard though, on getting better on my own =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
Very impressive...thumb up and fav :)
You have inspired me to write my own lyrics on my language with this music.
PecaDjGamer 1 year ago
@PecaDjGamer Really?! =D If you write anything, send it to me? =)
I'd be interested in seeing what I inspired lolz =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi OK ^__^
PecaDjGamer 1 year ago
@PecaDjGamer Thank you =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
Wow best voice I have ever heard =O
maples34X 1 year ago
@maples34X
Thank you =D! I really appreciate it. I don't get most people saying that lolz And most of the time I think everyone has a better voice x.x..Thank you! =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
How beautiful!
bodk117 1 year ago
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Wait thats you? OMG. Thats like. Amazing. If you put any CDs out please tell me. I'll try to pick up a copy.
Halop2 1 year ago
Wait thats you? OMG. Thats like. Amazing. If you put any CDs out please tell me. I'll try to pick up a copy.
Halop2 1 year ago
@Halop2 Yes! It is me =D I'm working on making my own CD right now, if you want, when I finish I can work out some way on getting one to you? =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi Hmm. Sounds interesting. Actually that sounds awesome. If it's anything like this it's probably a really good possibility. I hope.
Halop2 1 year ago
@Halop2 Well, I actually only play the piano =)
And I have so many different styles I play. But, there is forsure going to be music similar to this =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
Wow you need a recording contract or something. You voice is amazing.
epicchocolate 1 year ago
@epicchocolate Thank you! =D
I'm actually making my own CD now, I'm working hard on it! I got a few demos I just made, but I think I want to work more on them =) If I make the CD and get the demos done, would you like me to inform you? =D
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi That would be great. Could you send me the mp3 of this song please. =]
epicchocolate 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi That would be great if you told me about them, I was also wondering would you be able to send me the mp3 for this song please. =]
epicchocolate 1 year ago
@epicchocolate Alright! Will do then! =D
I'll go ahead and send it to you, if you use it for anything, just let me know, k? =)
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi Yeah thats fair. And thank you very much. I was just wondering how are you going to send the mp3 to me?
epicchocolate 1 year ago
Wow, this is very good! I must compliment you on your singing voice and lyrics creativity.
0309FlSt 1 year ago
@0309FlSt Thank you so much! =D I greatly appreciate you watching this =) Please help share my videos =D
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
@YuiHisaishi Do you mind if I download your video into mp3 ?
0309FlSt 1 year ago
@0309FlSt Oh, that's fine! I can just send you the mp3 if you want? =) Youtube takes quality away from it ^ ^
YuiHisaishi 1 year ago
wow thats really good
yoshiii6 1 year ago
love ur voice
kazetimez 1 year ago
love your voice :)
itadakimasu23 1 year ago
You have a beautiful voice. :3
Nice lyrics, too! =3
TehShanno 2 years ago
I love the lyrics and your voice!!
quatre87 2 years ago
I rated 5 but i felt like rating 4 which i didnt hm good song but wished you could do another way as well :]
TheDandarillerkiller 2 years ago
What a beautiful song :)
You sing it very well ^^
Ekologiskfanta 2 years ago
WOO. thats muh gey luver <3
iLikeTewSing 2 years ago