Yo, I know nobody will read this or check me out, but I just produced a rap for my father that passed away.... rap is poetry... I think I got a gift... Check me out? :D I will love you forever haha
I got robbed from bad boys in -96, they kept beating me and told me imma bitch, they took everything, and i wasn't even rich, they shot me six times and made me to suck their dicks, yeah, after that i started to run, in 2000 i bought a gun, i found those mofuckers and shot 'em in 2001, after dat i went to jail, they kept beating me coz my face was pale, they gave me name as paleface, and i started to hate united states, hell yeah i was in rage, i wrote a book and there was blood on every page.
The mirror keeps lyen i scream Thought u was brave. You got the mind of a killer and a heart of a slave/ But a maze is what they put me in trapped wit no consionce/ wake up every monring lust with miss nonscence/ Soooo. The ponds deep I should marry me a creek/ sipping to much water floating goes my feet/ my body levitates to the top of the lake/ could have been a marrige but found out it was a date to fate DAMN.. Sry for the spell errors
Regardless of your opinion of the song, it is rather rude to criticize it as you guys seem to be doing. It is better to say what you dislike, and why, and how to improve it. Saying something sucks though, and giving no more than that is kind of meaningless. I'd recommend reading Paul Graham's essay on How to Disagree before you say something that makes you sound like an idiot again.
uh huh yup see. these fools calling you're instrumentals shit. music lives on even when they slip into the abyss catch my drift im gonna blaze through, pain in my face gon be there till i turn blue still rappin my life, days in the struggle so i never think twice man what they preached was a lie tryina put out my fire when my eyes on the prize see i aint ever come in first talkin always second leavin all them teachers puzzled like i had to of been guessin gettin A's give me highgrades be4 i slip
I think some deep and dark bass would really kick this beat up to the next level. and I didn't much care for the three drum hits. (too 80s). other than that though. it's badass.
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Yo, I know nobody will read this or check me out, but I just produced a rap for my father that passed away.... rap is poetry... I think I got a gift... Check me out? :D I will love you forever haha
iLiempt 3 months ago
Comment back plz, i really needa kno
rjp41 4 months ago
Hey man, i jus wanted to ask u really quick if i could use this beat to make a song in a demo i'm making. If its ight wit u
rjp41 4 months ago
The picture of this video is from a film? That's the city of the Arts and Science in Valencia
Lol
sergio95hh 4 months ago
I got robbed from bad boys in -96, they kept beating me and told me imma bitch, they took everything, and i wasn't even rich, they shot me six times and made me to suck their dicks, yeah, after that i started to run, in 2000 i bought a gun, i found those mofuckers and shot 'em in 2001, after dat i went to jail, they kept beating me coz my face was pale, they gave me name as paleface, and i started to hate united states, hell yeah i was in rage, i wrote a book and there was blood on every page.
Elkku162 7 months ago
wth, does this not remind anyone of mario 64 when you talk to bowser and fight him?....i swear thats the same exact rythym, i know I ain't trippin...
EmceeSlick4life 7 months ago
bowser?
EmceeSlick4life 7 months ago
/watch?v=PGNTuEGV9ZM
ILL=T - Hip Hop Instrumental
ILLproductivity 7 months ago
Hi can I use this beat for the song?
busa948 8 months ago
The mirror keeps lyen i scream Thought u was brave. You got the mind of a killer and a heart of a slave/ But a maze is what they put me in trapped wit no consionce/ wake up every monring lust with miss nonscence/ Soooo. The ponds deep I should marry me a creek/ sipping to much water floating goes my feet/ my body levitates to the top of the lake/ could have been a marrige but found out it was a date to fate DAMN.. Sry for the spell errors
TheJayezone 10 months ago
Regardless of your opinion of the song, it is rather rude to criticize it as you guys seem to be doing. It is better to say what you dislike, and why, and how to improve it. Saying something sucks though, and giving no more than that is kind of meaningless. I'd recommend reading Paul Graham's essay on How to Disagree before you say something that makes you sound like an idiot again.
Thedyingfire 11 months ago
I think that what you guys are referring to is actually called rhythm, rather than beat...
Thedyingfire 11 months ago
All you all that think this beat is dope it sucks
like blonde suckin a football through a garden hose...
i get better beats from my ass, sounds like ducks,
this blonde bitch got a tit job and a new nose.
LizS22 11 months ago
ascolti noyz narcos?? Chicoria ZTK spacca
AssassinoVodoo93 1 year ago
Can you send me this beat with format mp3 ? It is the best shit i ever hear. My email is huragan1991@interia.pl Thakns !! Good luck in future !!
huragan1991 1 year ago
is it chill if i use this in a video to rap to, ill give you credit & everythin . message me with tha answer please . & this beat is dope. (:
Wondaafull 1 year ago
superfett alter, richtig geil!!!!!
MrDon882 1 year ago
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der beat ist hammer
MrDon882 1 year ago
where is that picture from
RyanRadiculous 1 year ago
awensome
Feuerhexer 1 year ago
uh huh yup see. these fools calling you're instrumentals shit. music lives on even when they slip into the abyss catch my drift im gonna blaze through, pain in my face gon be there till i turn blue still rappin my life, days in the struggle so i never think twice man what they preached was a lie tryina put out my fire when my eyes on the prize see i aint ever come in first talkin always second leavin all them teachers puzzled like i had to of been guessin gettin A's give me highgrades be4 i slip
robotussinflow 1 year ago
the year 2500
JYF4444 1 year ago
@JYF4444 lol
wwefanvladislav 1 year ago
SICK AS FUCK!
ApolloFlowForever 1 year ago
omfg what a good shit
dino123mali 1 year ago
muy buena bro esta de la ptm
2dsk8ter 1 year ago
maybe you could make drums a bit better but the melody is ite man keep doing your thing
mahlithebest 1 year ago
The roll snares at the start...it look like 80' !! LOL
MrDavideblur 1 year ago
wow
Lover1163 1 year ago
I think some deep and dark bass would really kick this beat up to the next level. and I didn't much care for the three drum hits. (too 80s). other than that though. it's badass.
ImkindaNormal 1 year ago
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hatemenow1986 1 year ago
Beautiful PIC .....can you post a tutorial video for it?
CoggyColin 1 year ago
its dramatic alright DRAMATICALLY SHIT
shiftz112 2 years ago 29
@shiftz112 Wow.....someone's cool.
jumpforjoy435 1 year ago
@shiftz112
Damn bro... my lil brother could have thought of something better to say...
you suck
myztainzydeout 1 year ago 2
@myztainzydeout shut ya mouth pussy
shiftz112 1 year ago
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MrDon882 1 year ago
where do all y'all go to make sum tite ass beats like this cuz i wanna make sum beats like this 1 some day.
123NickelBoy 2 years ago
@123NickelBoy learn to spell, then perhaps you will one day also learn how to do something usefull.
Digteren5 2 years ago
Useful*
fudgie686 2 years ago
@Digteren5
haha in yo face sucka
I'll phuck up the spellin if I want too
I don't give a shit what you think...this is not your elementary school kid
so get your shitty comments and back the fuck up
go toa spelling contest instead of being up other ppls dick just to talk smack
eklipzer 2 years ago
@Digteren5 - "Usefull" eh... That's vaguely ironic.
HardbeatAcolyte 1 year ago
how much you sellin this beat for man
fukunlcesam 2 years ago
Sick!
throwdown5000 2 years ago
That shits hot man!! I make beats too- I subbed you, sub back please!
ballsdeep69420 2 years ago
dope !
CEASONE77 2 years ago
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this is wac
suckittrebek01202 2 years ago
where can i get this
boogerrider 2 years ago
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vsqzomar 2 years ago
THE BEST
LefteriPotter 2 years ago
Just awesome man!!! I really like that beat!
Keep up the great work :) and check out my beats if you like...
husselbiene 2 years ago
cooooooooool 5*
i use it to train my new songs on ;D
looooooooooove this
mad skillz
KontraH2300 2 years ago 5
anvedi valencia :D
mispins 2 years ago
Truly a Masterpiece. Brilliant work.
ZuperFreak01 2 years ago
siiiick beat.
saiyrus 2 years ago
its awesome. 5*
supersaberdelux 2 years ago
This is MAD BOMB.[!]
tracicreel1 2 years ago