Slow start but you have many effective lines 1/3 of the way through. Sounds like you are really wanting to do this with a hip hop rythm. Overall, a very nice poem.
organicvideo 4 years ago
Slow start but you have many effective lines 1/3 of the way through. Sounds like you are really wanting to do this with a hip hop rythm. Overall, a very nice poem.
organicvideo 4 years ago