You have something to say to all of us, but is our language so structured that you can say it so that we will understand? That is the poet's dilemna. It can wear you down, sometimes so badly that it shows. You look as though you could use a good night's sleep.
@leftysergeant thank you, i wanted to know your words arn't lost on me. i could always uses sleep, but then where would everything be, if i just let it all go.
@CelphaFiael it's been a process in of it's self. i am ready to break this world as so to grow past our petty limitations. the trick is to set into process almost an algorithmic that can eventually trick a few billion in to evolve emotionally and psychologically. as i'm sure that you're smart enough to see, we have a cap on our current state of reality... there are fewer and fewer people, countries, idea, to exploit and take advantage of. maybe we will wake up in time... dosen't look good
@janeczka it's the act of feeling beaten and speaking it's truths. some of these days feel like i'm just spinning these wheels. other days my world grows so big that i feel so alien to the everything around me. i'm trying not to let it drive me crazy
this poem is heavy like torrential rain. the kind of weightiness needed to rinse away exhaustion, pricking the surface of my flesh to awaken these tired limbs.
You have something to say to all of us, but is our language so structured that you can say it so that we will understand? That is the poet's dilemna. It can wear you down, sometimes so badly that it shows. You look as though you could use a good night's sleep.
leftysergeant 11 months ago
@leftysergeant thank you, i wanted to know your words arn't lost on me. i could always uses sleep, but then where would everything be, if i just let it all go.
newcomposition 2 months ago
i think you're beautiful
CelphaFiael 11 months ago
@CelphaFiael it's been a process in of it's self. i am ready to break this world as so to grow past our petty limitations. the trick is to set into process almost an algorithmic that can eventually trick a few billion in to evolve emotionally and psychologically. as i'm sure that you're smart enough to see, we have a cap on our current state of reality... there are fewer and fewer people, countries, idea, to exploit and take advantage of. maybe we will wake up in time... dosen't look good
newcomposition 11 months ago
I like this a lot, and the reading too, even though you look completely exhausted in this.
janeczka 1 year ago
@janeczka it's the act of feeling beaten and speaking it's truths. some of these days feel like i'm just spinning these wheels. other days my world grows so big that i feel so alien to the everything around me. i'm trying not to let it drive me crazy
newcomposition 11 months ago
this poem is heavy like torrential rain. the kind of weightiness needed to rinse away exhaustion, pricking the surface of my flesh to awaken these tired limbs.
fellowtuber123 1 year ago
@fellowtuber123 i hope it one day feeds back into my soul.
newcomposition 11 months ago