Digging the narration--the writing's a little stilted at times, but then, that's pretty true to comic book standards, no? The reading is superb. And the animation, though crude, obviously took a great deal of effort, and it shows. Well done!
The pace and story are not so bad but the animation is not so good, there is no lip sync and the animation is very stiff. Perhaps the characters are not good rigs, but good try and keep practicing to get better. Animation is not easy to master
also i want to say the mouths shouldve moved but again thats my opinion, and thats all I have to say about your work. Out of all I have to say this is definitely better than what I can do because I can make animation models but I still dont know how to animate them so good job guys I give you kudos I can see you guys worked hard and I hope you get more constructive criticism other then some of the idiots on here
I must say in my opinion I wasn't too big on the animation. Also there couldve been better walking movements. The animation models can be worked on but that doesnt matter so much because Im just paying more attention to how you were animating, and also the sound, there couldve been better sound quality to this animation. also I just want to say " EVERYBODY IF YOU DONT LIKE HIS ANIMATION AND YOU DON'T GIVE THIS GUY YOUR HONEST OPINION INSTEAD OF SAYING "oh this is bullshit" THEN JUST SHUT UP.
he shot him in the ass... and the bullet traveled to his scapula.. xD
nice job guys! i could've been better textured and rendered, but in all, a pretty good job, hell.. i can't even make a decent map to my own house on paint, so what the hell right? keep it up, you could make the next halo in a couple of years :P
pretty good by one thing. WHY THE HELL would he give it to batman i mean seriously HE DOSNT EVEN HAVE ANY POWERS! unless being rich in a power... hmmmm.....
w.....t.....f.... why would you spend so much fucking time on a usless peace of shit?wtf u [likly] 4 eyed fuckin nerd? we dont give a shit!!!!i mean i no this is harsh 7 took alot of work but really? why the hell would u make such a worthless peace of fuckin crap???the stupidest thing in the fucking universe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the cg was of course a bit amateur but as a story board, the story wasn't entirely bad. of course a real script would need many more facets and be sure it never turns gay. no hint of man on man love. not even a little :)
I wish I could do animation like this. not too bad. would of been better if the narration was replaced with the batman and superman theme. either from the movies or cartoon series.
You are right! Clark was shot with a kryptonite bullet in Smallville by a maniac trying to rid the town of meteor freaks. Pretty cool scene... Clark hears the shot and turns to catch the bullet only to have it drill through his hand and into his chest.
Ignore the haters dude, and keep it up. I know how long it takes to make something like this. The fact your willing to put that effort in is a sure sign that you have a future in animation.
and one more small peace of advice i forgot to give you. shadows. there where no shadows. or crowds, cars and clouds. I'm not insulting you, just giving you advice. it's visible that you put allot of love and hard labor into this. what i would do if i where you is get some comic book's and practice animating them individually. it's really good practice. and it works.
nicely done. but i think it would help you if you made batman's mask a little smaller. and give him more of a build in mussel. superman doesn't need it since hes super strong. bats needs mussel so when he hist a guy he'll put him out. like Alex Ross version. and if your going to try some hard core animation try anime studio 5. since you put allot of work into your cartoon. this will help you allot. it dose most of the work for you. its what some pros use. good luck and keep at it.
A lot of work went to this film. Congratulations. You should try animate them with poser where you could animate the mouth and eyes. Also, the textures. Others textures would improve. But well done.
You don't like it... please be more specific. Some have said the sound is bad, others don't like the animation... heck, even the guy before you was a little creative and said that batman's eyes were creepy. So, put a little effort into your comment and tell me... what part was "shit"? Have you created something better as an example?
Do not listen to the naysayers..this is a very good job and captured my interests. People expect Pixar or Disney quality from these little fan animated films..damn,you dont have a 200 million dollar budget. Good job. If you ever need help with some voices..just let me know..have a few interesting characters that you could use. Really a good vid..keep doing what you love. Peace.
I plan on doing something like this someday... Not to DC comics, but some sort of animated movie set to one of my obessions... Metal Gear, I Love Bees, maybe the space trilogy... I'm too much of a coward to do it before I'm studio ready, though. It takes a lot of guts to release this. Awesome job! Keep going at it!
Far be it from me to know everything, but if you read Alex Ross' book, you'd understand why Batman is calling Superman Kal. FYI, 3D animation is a (beep!) to do, it's not at all easy. It takes time. And that's all this guy needs, a little more time and he's got it.
he calls him clark or superman. that's it. he doesn't call him kal. i don't know why... it's like he's the only one not to recognize his kryptonian name... i'd actually like to sit and come up with some theories on that one day and hear others... but not today.
Not the best CG. But i can live with it. If you improve the voice acting, add music, and sound effects you could make this 20x's better. I like it though.
This video is awesome! Mythology is one of my favorite graphic novels,and you made it even better! All you need to do is hire some voice actors and this will be PERFECT! Have you ever considered going into movies? Because you are a wizard with 3D!
Man that was frekin awsome if they made a programe like that even with the animation like that id watch it you rule mate make more of these films that was cool loved it, Neat idea of haveing sups fly round with bats attached to him very spunky lol
wow I mean it's not the greates I've seen, but shit you got talent. Keep doin wut your doin and you'll be great. By the way I voice act so If you ever need a voice actor for stuff like this hit me up at my email ninerzfolife896@yahoo.com
stupid voices
looks stupid
character seem lame and not themselves
so gay
annoying
crap ending
except someone to die
too emotional for batman
hellsangelbitch 5 months ago
What kind of lameness produced this exact video!
DavinWilliamKraft 5 months ago
Digging the narration--the writing's a little stilted at times, but then, that's pretty true to comic book standards, no? The reading is superb. And the animation, though crude, obviously took a great deal of effort, and it shows. Well done!
karenhopeblacher 7 months ago
This is pretty fucking bad. I mean I hope you didn't spend a lot of time on this
tobacconist 8 months ago
1:53 THAT IS REALLY BAD WALKING
jaidenwars 8 months ago
The pace and story are not so bad but the animation is not so good, there is no lip sync and the animation is very stiff. Perhaps the characters are not good rigs, but good try and keep practicing to get better. Animation is not easy to master
noddiboy 9 months ago
WHAT A CRAPOLA YOU GOT BALLS POSTING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
skatamous 9 months ago
also i want to say the mouths shouldve moved but again thats my opinion, and thats all I have to say about your work. Out of all I have to say this is definitely better than what I can do because I can make animation models but I still dont know how to animate them so good job guys I give you kudos I can see you guys worked hard and I hope you get more constructive criticism other then some of the idiots on here
RichardJDuncan 10 months ago
I must say in my opinion I wasn't too big on the animation. Also there couldve been better walking movements. The animation models can be worked on but that doesnt matter so much because Im just paying more attention to how you were animating, and also the sound, there couldve been better sound quality to this animation. also I just want to say " EVERYBODY IF YOU DONT LIKE HIS ANIMATION AND YOU DON'T GIVE THIS GUY YOUR HONEST OPINION INSTEAD OF SAYING "oh this is bullshit" THEN JUST SHUT UP.
RichardJDuncan 10 months ago
lmao
vBugsBunny 11 months ago
bull shit
JuLunJeon 11 months ago
What program did u use?
Coldshadow25 11 months ago
batman dont use guns :/
iq12212 1 year ago
whats the program that u used?
anonymouscitizen0101 1 year ago
he shot him in the ass... and the bullet traveled to his scapula.. xD
nice job guys! i could've been better textured and rendered, but in all, a pretty good job, hell.. i can't even make a decent map to my own house on paint, so what the hell right? keep it up, you could make the next halo in a couple of years :P
petezahut26 1 year ago
this sucks
Elshadow195 1 year ago
wtf
MrXbrb 1 year ago
why would you put such garbage up?? u noe it sucks
tinyfeet101 1 year ago
oh i just threw up in my own mouth!
DarPower1 1 year ago
1:54 - 1:59 HAHAHAHAHA I LOVE HOW HE WALKS!
greenjello818 1 year ago
why does this remind of the atari 2600 superman game?
siliconsurf 1 year ago
why would batman carry a gun?
TheSUPERMANFAN1 1 year ago
not bad...but maybe some new voices next time?
mankind059 1 year ago
pretty good by one thing. WHY THE HELL would he give it to batman i mean seriously HE DOSNT EVEN HAVE ANY POWERS! unless being rich in a power... hmmmm.....
theawesomeonion 1 year ago
gay
Lightsabermasters0 1 year ago
Batman would destroy superman and vice versa if either had a good enough opportunity
CommieThreat 1 year ago
nice but you can do better
nikos20111 1 year ago
more music...
LOLpeturs 1 year ago
Dude this is totally lame.
sjamesjones 1 year ago 17
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sjamesjones 1 year ago
I like the way both flying. COOL! The story is bad but look at Batman ?! He fly with superman.. thats great!
Rockmangames 2 years ago
@Rockmangames This is a story from a graphic novel. Not his design.
Sixx0809 1 year ago
This one is better: YouTube - Batman vs Superman starring Ross Gellar and Nicolas Cage
ChrisTron29 2 years ago
superman way better
josh106107 2 years ago
u must be really bored
rupetify 2 years ago
noooooooooooo robin has a nipple suit !!!!!!!!!
0willbecome100 2 years ago
1:55 haha
crazy10bears 2 years ago
lol
hero121385 2 years ago
piece of shit
terry312237 2 years ago 5
did you do this by yourself?
it's not bad :D
lot's of details
wiieny 2 years ago
its so bad i cant rate it
freakenkiller 2 years ago 3
I REMEMBER THIS STORY!! I LOVED THAT STORY!!! STILL DO!!! YOU MADE IT ROCK EVEN MORE!!!
I Know the Animation to it sucks, but its the first time i saw it in "Action/animation".
LinkTC86 2 years ago
The animation is mediocre, but the lighting is seriously awful. Also i doubt Anim8or is a good choice of software. You know, there's Blender. :)
3yE 2 years ago
fucktards...
bigphatty85 2 years ago
Yes
viscerasdoidao 2 years ago
Yikes. This is asscraptacular!!
MrKevMan 2 years ago 2
"The Trust" is my favorite Batman/Superman adventure ever! You did a great job of updating it for the 21st century!
spiderxand 2 years ago
Good job on the flying scenes!
MarkArandjus 2 years ago
fucking hilarious. truley god damn awful. ha ha ha ha . shitty narration too. lol
benbdm1984 2 years ago
There has NEVER been anything worse than this. Not anywhere. Not ever.
BOULTON666 2 years ago
w.....t.....f.... why would you spend so much fucking time on a usless peace of shit?wtf u [likly] 4 eyed fuckin nerd? we dont give a shit!!!!i mean i no this is harsh 7 took alot of work but really? why the hell would u make such a worthless peace of fuckin crap???the stupidest thing in the fucking universe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
adhd2dxt 2 years ago
go to hell adhd2dxt you loser
NoLiMitSBeYoNd 2 years ago
This is hilariously terrible.
Maijson 2 years ago 2
wtf is batman doing with a fucking gun
imnoobish 2 years ago
Gay? No! FUCKING GAY!
Springmaus2007 2 years ago
the cg was of course a bit amateur but as a story board, the story wasn't entirely bad. of course a real script would need many more facets and be sure it never turns gay. no hint of man on man love. not even a little :)
DanFrederiksen 2 years ago
I wish I could do animation like this. not too bad. would of been better if the narration was replaced with the batman and superman theme. either from the movies or cartoon series.
saltyfoods 2 years ago
Without the narration, Batman comes off as a real dick here.
LAVATORR 2 years ago
I never really liked superman and batman's partnership. Superman always looks bad when batman is in a team up. This video just reinforces that.
hoppers001 2 years ago
MOTHER OF GOD
the 3D is excusable, but at the very least don't put this up with that godawful audio track!
viper3183 3 years ago
ew .
DANIFREAKSHOW 3 years ago
Gay!!!
valanze28 3 years ago 2
Gay
XpvPro1 3 years ago 2
neato!
eyeboy1881 3 years ago
Cool models
JandBproductions08 3 years ago
good vid but the voice acting was kinda crap
coco1996 3 years ago
Yeah...It's amazing no one(in the comics) ever just shot superman with a kryptonite bullet.
It would take him out in a second.
8thmonth 3 years ago
That happened in Smallville before I believe. Or maybe it was Lois and Clark? No I think it was Smallville.
redHudson8 3 years ago
You are right! Clark was shot with a kryptonite bullet in Smallville by a maniac trying to rid the town of meteor freaks. Pretty cool scene... Clark hears the shot and turns to catch the bullet only to have it drill through his hand and into his chest.
dwalcott 3 years ago
@redHudson8 it was on lois and clark first lex luthor's ex-wife shot him and lois had to take the bullet out
spidrpnk 1 year ago
u shouldve worked on this more... :/ nice work though
dangel6667 3 years ago
horrible.........
anapco10 3 years ago 2
what did u use to make this???
RAMJAWZ 3 years ago
1:57 lol
HAETMUNGOR 3 years ago
EXCELLENT VIDEO
unclemetz1 3 years ago
brilliant cgi
chazborotten 3 years ago
good well done
DoubleAgent244 3 years ago
great vid dwalcott! you can tell you put a lot of effort and hard work into each video, nice job :)
vezz801 3 years ago
only thing wrongs was the voices change ur voice for evry charactor for batman a deep voice and super man a little power and robin a low voice
damgirl69 3 years ago
Ignore the haters dude, and keep it up. I know how long it takes to make something like this. The fact your willing to put that effort in is a sure sign that you have a future in animation.
knightofthenewdawn 3 years ago
and one more small peace of advice i forgot to give you. shadows. there where no shadows. or crowds, cars and clouds. I'm not insulting you, just giving you advice. it's visible that you put allot of love and hard labor into this. what i would do if i where you is get some comic book's and practice animating them individually. it's really good practice. and it works.
surgsart 3 years ago
nicely done. but i think it would help you if you made batman's mask a little smaller. and give him more of a build in mussel. superman doesn't need it since hes super strong. bats needs mussel so when he hist a guy he'll put him out. like Alex Ross version. and if your going to try some hard core animation try anime studio 5. since you put allot of work into your cartoon. this will help you allot. it dose most of the work for you. its what some pros use. good luck and keep at it.
surgsart 3 years ago
gay like my cuzin norvin
Jackass1314 3 years ago
cool vid m8 keep um cumin
optimusluke 3 years ago
A lot of work went to this film. Congratulations. You should try animate them with poser where you could animate the mouth and eyes. Also, the textures. Others textures would improve. But well done.
diogorccarvalho 3 years ago
this is shit
th3oldm4n 3 years ago
You don't like it... please be more specific. Some have said the sound is bad, others don't like the animation... heck, even the guy before you was a little creative and said that batman's eyes were creepy. So, put a little effort into your comment and tell me... what part was "shit"? Have you created something better as an example?
dwalcott 3 years ago 9
@dwalcott mmm creo q dijo q todo era una mierda
dickens558 4 months ago
CREEEEPPYYY... (mostly the fact that batmans eyes were never straight...)
LMRII 4 years ago
needs a soundtrack and new narrator,not bad though
richardgoellnitz 4 years ago
i enjoyed that ,well done.
stephbrakurt 4 years ago
pretty lame
crazydave210 4 years ago
well, its a little cheesy, but its not a wast of time...its pretty good. Wish i could do something like this.
Lexyismyhero 4 years ago
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Gay Gay Gay.
JosephMelia 4 years ago
An admirable effort, your time was not wasted on this. I'm sure you worked very hard, it shows.
tjm220 4 years ago 13
cool. how'd you make this?
Inutenma 4 years ago
aki un latino les explica que este video estan mula que no alcansaria para una stars
jefproducciones 4 years ago
si pero no canijo.. dale su credito, con que sea una miseria estrella!
trendgil 4 years ago
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk mais que bosta!
moises19688 4 years ago
VERY NICE
jpersaud 4 years ago
Good job. I expect that quite a lot of time and effort went into making this.
JourneymanVideo 4 years ago
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bad work!"!!!!!!
mekikeyboards 4 years ago
I have this comic. this adaptation's ok. but with more work, it would be "Great!" consider redoing this after going to a college and learning more.
rangerkom 4 years ago
i hate peopel who bash this vid - it was well done - better than i could ever do...
VindictiveVigilante 4 years ago
Weird
NelsonA7X 4 years ago
The voice overs need improvement
MiyMiyMiyMiyMiyMiyMi 4 years ago
Do not listen to the naysayers..this is a very good job and captured my interests. People expect Pixar or Disney quality from these little fan animated films..damn,you dont have a 200 million dollar budget. Good job. If you ever need help with some voices..just let me know..have a few interesting characters that you could use. Really a good vid..keep doing what you love. Peace.
Methadone4Life 4 years ago
Yeah totally. I agree. Im a design students therefore i know its really hard to make this video. RESPECTS. 5 stars. Good effort ;)
guesswhoisthis101 4 years ago
I plan on doing something like this someday... Not to DC comics, but some sort of animated movie set to one of my obessions... Metal Gear, I Love Bees, maybe the space trilogy... I'm too much of a coward to do it before I'm studio ready, though. It takes a lot of guts to release this. Awesome job! Keep going at it!
bobtheduck 4 years ago
why dont you try one of macromedia flash 8 or something its free on some websites
liamspeed 4 years ago
Thanks for the suggestion. I'll check it out...
dwalcott 4 years ago
Is this the program to make vids like this one? Or even better? Or just as the same? I'm trying to get a Hobby LOL =P
ShupakabrazZ 3 years ago
Far be it from me to know everything, but if you read Alex Ross' book, you'd understand why Batman is calling Superman Kal. FYI, 3D animation is a (beep!) to do, it's not at all easy. It takes time. And that's all this guy needs, a little more time and he's got it.
that70space 4 years ago
needs some voice actors. at least different ones for different characters. and Bats always calls him clark, NEVER kal-el (and definitely not Kal)
amazingcardsharp 5 years ago
Think, dummy! why would batman be shouting Superman's secret identity in public?
s0uperp00p 4 years ago
he calls him clark or superman. that's it. he doesn't call him kal. i don't know why... it's like he's the only one not to recognize his kryptonian name... i'd actually like to sit and come up with some theories on that one day and hear others... but not today.
amazingcardsharp 4 years ago
you freakin idiot that is his secret identity..
trendgil 4 years ago
what? do you mean "Kal-el"? I know that, but smeone could hear Batman calling Superman "Clark", and then everything would be over.
s0uperp00p 4 years ago
you have to do something about the voice, soooooooo fucken boring, but kewl animations and story. 3 stars cuz of the voice/sound.
retromolarpad 5 years ago
How long does it take you to do one of these videos? Also what program do you use?
reaperstang 5 years ago
That sucks man
kriston777 5 years ago
As Hook would say..."GOOD FORM" Great job,looking foward to more.
puppyshep 5 years ago
Not bad! The pacing and storyline make up for the sub-par cgi. Improve that and the voice acting and you've really got something!
Forcemaster2000 5 years ago
Not the best CG. But i can live with it. If you improve the voice acting, add music, and sound effects you could make this 20x's better. I like it though.
GeoMFilms 5 years ago
not the best?... can u say understatment?
kenyaqueen 5 years ago
This video is awesome! Mythology is one of my favorite graphic novels,and you made it even better! All you need to do is hire some voice actors and this will be PERFECT! Have you ever considered going into movies? Because you are a wizard with 3D!
s0uperp00p 5 years ago
i think this video is absoulty MINT and then i checked out the rest of your work
turns out your VERY talented and please don't waste it
cybersaur 5 years ago
braniacs got a tight little ass
mark224 5 years ago
cool! i think adding some background music would really enhance the whole experience. i liked your take on braniac- was that an original concept?
oowarutezu 5 years ago
cool! keep it up man!
cliro814 5 years ago
Cool! Have you seen this guys work: www.BeyondComics.TV
rdactyl 5 years ago
Who? Are you asking the person who posted this about a third party, or are you asking us (the viewers) to see more of the poster's stuff?
batfan1939 2 years ago
you need to improve your voiceover.
mankin15 5 years ago
Very good animation! Keep on working!
claudevirjr 5 years ago
Man that was frekin awsome if they made a programe like that even with the animation like that id watch it you rule mate make more of these films that was cool loved it, Neat idea of haveing sups fly round with bats attached to him very spunky lol
scsarulz 5 years ago
Ol Batmans got pink lipstick on. Cool vid!!!
Ryanasaurus 5 years ago
wow I mean it's not the greates I've seen, but shit you got talent. Keep doin wut your doin and you'll be great. By the way I voice act so If you ever need a voice actor for stuff like this hit me up at my email ninerzfolife896@yahoo.com
jdawg896 5 years ago
Bad animation, bad voiceover, overall bad.
dolivier2005 5 years ago
BAD ANIMATION! jesus this is good you asshole. why are you so jealus
cybersaur 5 years ago
Freaking awesome work man! I love this one!!!
drogata 5 years ago