SPOKEN WORD at Apache Cafe

[chocodeliteful]

Your spoken word (poem) was wonderfully spoken, nervous or not Great job.

[ThePoeticflava]

Nervous, but still hot

[irvin5623]

That was a lovely poem.. Your absolutely beautiful. No offense I no you only like women...

[Crystile24]

U are so good,fine ass hell to find me on fb crystal doinitallbymyself dobson

[Mschon228]

You so talented Melo!! Where you been hunny bee!!

[ClassyLady2323]

You did a wonderful job being that you were nervous hun! I wish you many blessings in everything that you do! You are very talented! Don't stop what you doing! Take care hun!

[jershondria]

good job...but if you maybe could pause when saying certain things...then it will show more depth...but I liked it!

[MssTazy21]

i do poetry and spoken word too, i've trying to find somewhere to do some of mine publicly..i wanna try to publish a book.. i like that though need more passion :)

[utopialova]

you did a great job...don't be discouraged!

[tinytooshort23]

Well spoken! ! All snaps this way

[trishadotj]

your first time??

the words were nice... hopefully you won't be so nervous the next time :)

[JayLiiWorLd]

great job, but dance please , shesshh! thats why i subscribed

[Linkin17Love]

this was really good :) ... i write too loved it

[GUDPUSSii]

WOW!!!!! REALLY FEELIN DIS!!!

[ashleydivastar]

I love you <3 lol =]

[mahoganykisses912]

Eventhough u were nervous, the words still painted a picture. Keep it up.

[MsLaQuala]

Nice. Look Forward To Watching More.

-Lola.

[wazup80]

Not feeling any passion in your voice given the subject matter.

[simonej25]

@wazup80 i was nervous as hell lol

[Vluv1981]

you're amazing dear and i admire how passionate you are about all that you do - whether it's spoken word or getting your dance on ;-) keep up the wonderful work!

[Caryss81]

i love that you have your hands in everything. a true talent. bless.

[freshazzfem10]

Nice! =)

[TheSexyrainbowfem29]

i like dat was hot

[JMIME45]

That was so deep. "Continue to write Melo" That was beautiful

[shafiasshole]

love love love it simone.

[sexyboricua7879]

Damn I loved it

[poeticoldsoul]

Diggin' it sexy poetess!!

[Tigger529]

GO HEAD MELLO GOT ME DRIPPIN GREAT WORK *SNAPS*

[princezz3322]

loved it!!!!!

[modelchyck007]

Mhmmm...very nice sexy!!! Snapss.

[sinsationalfem]

go mello wit yo sexy self ......so talented!!!!!!!! xoxo

[chocolateroses35]

wow mello that was great. ill be doing my first spooken word next tuesday. i know im gonna be nervous.

[herjbb]

great job.. you had no reason to be nervous

[TheGrayscales]

I used to go alot, this motivated me to go back! Good job

[monquiebaby]

dats was so amazing i luved it........gud job

[sarkazzII]

snaps. snaps. snaps.

[simonej25]

thank you loves =)

[SheBadd001]

lovee it <3

[diamondlite3]

whoaaa. disssss shit is hotttttt. ;)

[lovaboi222]

that was sick

[colorfulchick01]

Wow you r so talented keep it up :-)

[nashea305]

I loved it!!! Great Job