If You Want To

[lancethrustworthy]

If I were in charge of multi track recording of this, I'd slow it down and add serious drum work...along with other backing instruments. I wish you well. My opinion is my opinion.

[plattform5163]

Thanks for sharing this very nice and optimistic song!

[steamrocket]

Thanks for the comment. I can tell from what you say that you appreciated the lyrical message too, so thanks for that. #:-)

[MsEllieJ]

Love it. Good lyrics and I like the chord progression.

[steamrocket]

Thanks Ellie. Oh, and an honourable mention for Richard as the chord progression was totally down to him. All I did was re-word it.

[lancethrustworthy]

Bravo! I like this version much better. Very nice indeed. With the right heavy drums, bass, etc that thing could take off.

[steamrocket]

Thanks a bunch. Now all I have to do is convince Richard that this version is better. Not an easy taks!!! #:-(

[cbrb40]

Hey there,This is fantastic songwriting. A very catchy and well written pop music. Nice lyrics! I like your playing too. Good rhythm and strumming. I can see this with bass and drums and a couple of guitars and you got a hit going. :)

[steamrocket]

Thanks for the compliments but I think it is only fair that I at least share the accolades withRichard as it was his song originally. All I did here was re-write the lyric and play it faster.

[a2dsmusic]

you did a great job!

5 stars!!

[steamrocket]

thanks for the comment. BTW did you get a chance to listen to the original by Richard?

[a2dsmusic]

yes I had a chance to, nice song by the way!!

[kellydoll14]

wow another fantastic performance. amazing! 100 big stars coming your way.

love kellyxx

[steamrocket]

Getting great comments from fab singers makes it all the more worthwhile so a HUGE THANK YOU to you Kelly #:-)

[kellydoll14]

your so welcome.  my pleasure.

love kelly

[maxineshammer]

I'm confuzed?!?

I thought I liked this version best.... then I changed my mind... then I didn't know?!?

Think the dnarbbrand playing style is better, but prefur the lyrics on steamrocket. Hey, maybe that's why u2 guys work together?!?

Soz for b-ing so dippy!!!!!!!!!!!!

[steamrocket]

You're confuzed (sic!)!

Think how I feel picking the bones out of that comment (ha, ha!)! Mind you, you might have some valid points. Didn't realise how much faster I play this compared to the original.

And finally.... dippy is the new Hippy!

[ERICROBILLARD1]

good job!

[steamrocket]

Once again a big thank you for your positive words.

[flaviorventura]

Endless stars 2 u m8!! Liked it a lot!!

Hugs!

[steamrocket]

Thanks again. Hopefully I've got some even better stuff to post over the coming weeks so keep a lookout!

[ukp42]

great perfomance on a classic lol 5* =) Love from Scotland =)

[steamrocket]

Thanks for the continuing support. Should point out that the original tunes was written by Richard (aka dnarbbrand) so he'd be delighted to hear it called a classic!

[marycigarettes]

that's neat..i used to live in hatfield..on the old hertford road down from the red lion pub!...it was good living there.

[steamrocket]

Thanks for the comment. As I hold you in the highest esteem I feel humbled by your encouragement.

Please keep on doing the things you do as they only make me want to be better at what I do.

[guitarsix6]

Another great job, nice voice

[steamrocket]

Thanks again. This is getting to be more fun by the minute!!!