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  • I know most of these people. I never saw Jonas though.

  • Jonas was the kid with the camera. He's on shot for a second or two at around 1:30.

    I'm not surprised you didn't spot him as his face is obscured... if he's ever wanting to be in anything else I make I'll be sure to make him more visible so it doesn't seem like I'm hiding him

  • I liked it but an alternate ending would be fun to see.

  • (I dunno if my other reply worked but I'll continue anyway)

    I also have in my head the early ideas for a sequel/alternate version of "Alone" which would shed some light on what happened (in this version, not the alternative ending version which yoou'll see in my other videos)

  • I guess my other reply failed... umm I basically said there is an alternative version, go to my profile and find the video titled "ALone - Alternate Scenes and Bloopers". It's poorly editted since it wasn't in the final cut but you may get the idea...

  • Nice! Good job! So many great videos in this contest. Wanna see something cool? Like MY video? hehe I know you do. Click my name and check it out. "A Summer's Lease" I went for a kinda left wing approach. Does Andrew Summer's win against the Devil? Only one way to find out ;)

  • This comment was marked as spam, I don't think it was fairly marked... I unspammed it!

    Just finished watching yours, very nice indeed!

  • I like the choice for it to be 28 minutes later and not a solid thirty. I appreciate your comment on my film. By the way, where did you get your sounds from?

    -Carlos

  • The music was written specifically for this film by a friend of mine, his group is called Radiation Underground and you can find a link in the video description. The only sound effects I used were downloaded from a website for free sound effects, but I tried to minimise the amount of overdubbing I did...

  • what's the difference between passing a photo and picking it up after it's left behind? hard to imagine jason reitman saying "OOPS... not a 'pass' by my definition, so NO GOLD STAR."

  • That's what I'm hoping for and what I was thinking while jotting the script down.

    If I don't make the standard because of something like that I'd feel pretty satisfied that it didn't matter much to not qualify...

  • Nicely done.

  • Thanks!

    Good luck with the competition. Yours was one of the most well constructed ones I've seen so far... looking forward to seeing if any of my favorites are picked to be in the final 20...

  • My previous comments were a little harsh, however it's hard not to be annoyed when a comment is recieved like that... I meant to say that in stead of capitalising everything and making it seem like you're yelling this could have been more of a polite discourse... and when I watch your video I wouldn't already have a negative view before even seeing it...

  • nicely made video, but there are a few BIG mistakes, firstly the photo, it's supposed t be the PASSING of a photo and he only picked it up. also, why the hell did he carry the shuvel all the time?? it looked a bit ridiculous..story wasn't great don't know if it's really a situation abonve a mutirity level...ALRIGHT VIDEO BUT NOT GREAT, check out mine!! :)

  • Thanks! Let's hope so...

  • Very nice story. You should make the final 20 cut for the contest.

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