Doctor Who Series 1 Episode 1 The Fraternities Child

[bobomar101]

What the heck was that? Obviously a fake gun with a red tip? If the chubby white boy was trespassing why didn't that dog maul him?Also isn't the title Doctor Who trademarked and copy righted? Well since your illegally stealing the name of a hit 1990 TV show, your failure attempt of making a slightly decent home film has failed. I suggest you remove this video and delete all things in your series and channels relating this to avoid a potential law suit. Thankfully you now know to discontinue thi

[Brandonicus82]

Your new writer here. Just begging a look at what I'm up against here. And I have to say, as an amateur film maker in your league, I am impressed and envious in equal measure. Some said this is epic and I agree. Awesome. Some constructive criticism: scale back the music volume where it gets too loud. Your idea to use green screen for the TARDIS console room was genius. Good on you.

[hobbitbox]

@Brandonicus82 Thanks! I appreciate the advice and would have to agree. The audio levels has always presented a challenge and the dog barking ,for instance, is something that I would at least bring the volume down on normally. This was essentially a test shoot, if you would like I could send you the revised pilot script as well.

I look forward to seeing some of your own videos and as a fellow film maker I wish you the best of luck.

[Benzer3]

hey man that vid is epic keep up the gd work

[ligerworks]

very cool, loved the special effects for your theme entrance! Interesting story

[hobbitbox]

@ligerworks thanks! I am hoping to finish it sometime soon, I just need to get a cast together for the continuation of the story =)

[SerenityDarkSky]

lovelovelovelovelovelove this video.

Freakin awesome!!!!!

[hobbitbox]

well thankee very much, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

[SerenityDarkSky]

Hey. Am I allowed to post a link to this on my facebook?

[hobbitbox]

@SerenityDarkSky yeah, totally =)

[watson800]

This is cool! By the way, you look alot like the Eleventh Doctor. Looking forward to the new series? Because I am!

[hobbitbox]

Thanks. I am really excited about the new series!