Motiveless Crime (Halo 3 Machinima)

[fishreaper]

lol 300 yards... not exactly the most difficult shot in the world.

[meamorcullo]

Its kinda like the Joker's plan in the Dark Knight

[meamorcullo]

The ol' switcharoo - yer that was pretty kool but it woudv'e been smarter if he actually showed the weapons... the dealer cud' ve been bluffing and the double cross would be pointless

[SS4Phill]

"guitarplayer511" I'd like you to meet "Jackery Robins. Ex marine" Jackery? "ahem, If I find another comment on this youtube video from you I will rip yo' arms off and beat yo' mamma untill she makes me some Chedder Cheesey macaroni. Peace out! BITCH"

[TehCacti]

I dont get it

[pringleseater4life]

i was a little confused

i couldn't really figure out who was who and stuff

i liked it though

[Americanbeast14]

fuck u

[juliojlo9]

really i didnt check that u skiped some

[ChidoriAnbu]

voice acting was really bad

and ending was kinda off,

why wuld an arms dealer threaten someone with the police?

[ScoutingTacos]

voice acting is a little off especially when brown guy gets shot in the knees, but other than that it's good

[ChainError25]

good video

[GurobloPwnzYou]

kinda boring but good storyline

[megakuriboh]

BUT IT HAD A MOTIVE!!!

lol anyway I liked it.

[darkscorch88]

nice vid

[person0002]

thats kinda borin

[fishsucka]

i know wats gonna happen............. its gonna be a porno duuh

[cavebigmac]

i liked it i gave it 5 stars it was a good video cant wait for the next one

[Dark94Flame]

Meh, I wasn't crazy about it. The voice acting lacked realism or expression, especially the guy in the brown armour.

[Grockern55]

good.....the voice acting is ok, but otherwise gr8 game

[sorryloginfailed]

That was really cool! I can't wait for the next one.

[sam9theman]

I've never like people in Scout armor...

[sulaadair]

the voice actings a bit weak...

but other than that

COOLIO

[bjac006]

carnt w8 till new 1 comz out

[TheAssist]

That was actually really good.

[DEDLY100]

i was just about to say the exact same thing

[I800Porkchops]

looks pretty good

[Xxnovuxx]

Dramatic pausing

keep that in mind next time

seemed a little too rushed

but over all not too bad

[crazied77]

only the italian guy's voice sounded legit...

[Unforgottenmemory]

Story not bad just need to pump the voice acting a bit

[linkassassin360]

that was unexpected, good job

[MasterAran101]

cool stryline, i think the script and voice acting needs some tweeking

[sparkpluggers]

gay

[GSMysterioman]

Im with you that was fucking stupid

[rockyman2000]

tis r retated

[iNewjy]

lololol tis is retated lololol rofl

[Steamingboy]

sounds awsome

[Hyperman6]

cool

[Halo3Spartan778]

nice very good

[E8productions07]

roflmao "my people"

[I8dog]

it was cool, i want to see the next one.

[Phil2o06]

This was pretty good but my main suggestion is to sort out your sound on the voices. Check you haven't got anything like mic boost on, lower mic sensitivity but raise your voice, get better mics or use software to edit the areas of the sound where there are problems.

[anticommon]

voices especially sucked.

[elderpredator15]

i liked the story kinda reminded me of the godfather id say that you should try to slow the story down a bit i mean some parts of it felt a little rushed any way keep up the good work

[stomp58]

Sorta of a old style gangster movie. Get a better mic and have some voice acting.

[vatoloco18]

try making a video :)

[Ipod609]

wow that was a geat video

[boyzinbrown]

AWSOME

[ElitesRule77]

Good 4/5 voice acting could be a little bit better though. Other than that it was pretty good!

[bobkinger]

Too many betrayals for my taste, but gave me some laughs, nice one.

[lemonhead505]

i thout it was good...not great like RVB but good

[mooman1080]

rushed, poor, and and boring.

its was a spirted atempt, but not a very good one sadly.

I'd say improve voices, recording, and story speed and value.

[Dricstar]

Acting was terrible! HARHAR!

[sedatedlife18]

"I like to know everything about the people I work with. Name's, face's, the whole shebang." Who does this guy work with? James Bond and Ethan Hunt?!?

[aviloud]

get a better mic, besides that it was pretty cool.

[Phizzzzy]

that had a cool story line i'll watch it again don't listen to everyone else's comments about voice acting add more expression but other than that who cares thats how your voice sounds

[MadDogx22x]

get a better mic or don't pronounce your p's puh puh puh that's all you hear. story line was decent though.

[Hunter127Productions]

gay

[JustCallMeSoupLad]

stoopiddddddddd

[L337COD4]

WTF? It's just a gta IV mission, only with mediocre voice acting and 1 guy just shoots everybody.

[KidKapelski]

very cleche (sp) and horrid voice acting

[sleepinRaccoon]

not great voice acting i give it a 4 and a half

[corpral]

why would he leave the sniper alive? further more after the sniper was shot why didn't he shoot that traiter bastard with his SNIPER its not like he lost it or anything... plot holes galor plus no witnesses? what about the spoter for the other sniper? any why where there 2 snipers to handle one guy? the beater sniper could have gone it alone he didn't need a rookie!! It looked and sounded good and you kept to you plot but your plot needs some work.

[kisame004]

Woh calm down "corpral" ill answer all your questions,"MtM9157" wanted to keep the story going with the "brown guy" still alive y would it "to be continued" with everbody dead.

Now he wanted to try to keep it more realistic with the wound he gave to the "brown guy" leg making it look greatly effective till the "brown guy"coudnt do anything.Now with the 2 snipers,with the rookies we can use our imagination into thinking there trying to get more expirence in what they do,letting them get.....

[kisame004]

letting them get the feel of it,and with the 2exprinced people just kinda of there to make sure they do it rite,then they just have the undercover dealer into cathing the real dealer. so thats it i think its great.XD

[corpral]

sorry if I sounded fanatic, I tried to keep in mind i never made a machinma so it must be hard to emfasize some points, like how bad the wound was. Still it could have been a arm or chest, but its your cration i'll role with it. you still didn't touch base with the other spotter. Dose the traiter know he was there? He's not even wounded and can see the whole thing. could you address the second witness for me please?

[MtM9157]

both rookie sniper and rookie spotter died the spotters the one who said "what the fu..." and , and yes the injury was suppose to be too severe for him to shoot straight. I couldnt imagine shooting a rifle with 2 wounded knees... next video will further explain the plot

[kisame004]

great machinima vid looking forward till next part.XD

[MightofLight]

Wow, this thing had the whole shebang!

[CaptainSkivvies]

epic, dude. good show.

[Skillz506]

voice acting could use a little polishing.

but still an awsome video

[luispabloqwertyuiop]

kinda boring 2/5

[ShadowCake0]

Ehh.. Really Boring.. Bad Voice Acting aswell as Script. 2/5 - Nothing Special

Somewhat of a disappointment compared to other videos you've made. (Refering to MtM)

[TawZoomer]

8/10 is what I have to say. It's pretty good, but the fact that's it's essentially a mob story....it being in a futuristic setting is kinda weird, and some of the voices are very poor quality. Still good though. :D

[prophetarm]

shitty sound quality

[XxH3adxshotxX]

should be done in gta 4 it is harder to do but it would just suit it more.

[lamerthenlife]

yea this doesnt work for halo

[flaw3d1]

i enjoyed it well done 5/5 for the first ep

[Nintendogene]

The voice acting sounds too machiney...work on it...3/5

[D4rkJedi66]

work on the voice? it kinda sounds like it was fake :/

[UnoticedShadow]

Wow have you seen the end toDigitalPh33rs Guide to making Halo 3 Machinima 5?

[darkeater13]

wow have you no sense in asking people this...who gives a shit if we have or havent

[Qwertyguy86]

voice acting near the end was terrible but yeah 4/5

[Gamerman28]

well done

[MAGGOTMATT13]

meh. 3/5

[BushidoPhot]

eh it was okay. I'd like to see more. 4/5

[bubbatannous]

This was ok....3/5

[unnamed50]

wow i heard from a great mchinimaist once, dramatic machinima's suck but this, this acctually pulled it off very well, good job and i support the suquel/next episode

[yaladay]

Rofl you colda no scoped that guy that shot you twice in your kneecaps slowly, retard

[Anarchist86ed]

wind blow outs are awesome...

[playerofrock04]

ehhh.... thats is just ab awful machinima. I was expecting something better from machinima. Sorry, this was just stupid and pontless.

[Owen150194]

Good voice acting but bad script. 3/5

[Inspirmentalist]

pretty serious.....

[MasterStudios1]

Why is this called Motiveless Crime? It is obvious the guy had a motive ("I'll take the money and the guns and live happily ever after")

[tuffiek]

Cause he's on crack.

[jimmie330]

has nobody nitced this is pretty much exactly the same as that other machinima where they have to snipe someone on standoff thats doing a deal but then the guy wearing scu=out tricjs the guy hes with then shoots him in the leg then balmes him for everything?! that was the biggest copy ever i`ll find out what the other machinimas called

[jimmie330]

sorry i seemed to of spelt like a retard in my last comment i pretty much just said its exactly the same as another machinima which i just found out is called erebus episode 1 just watch it seriously

[MD101]

i did think that while i was watching it. I think this guys just expanded the idea but it is pretty similar

[CountHavok]

meh....

[jackalstand]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

[MrKingofBeer]

voices are to nazzily

[EliteGamingMovies]

it was really bad acting and the sound effects were a bit off but it was really good the story line especially good work

[NateDoggityDawg]

ahh you bastard lmao this was the worst acting ive seen scince step up 2

[guildmasteraq]

Ok, but why didn't the brown guy snipe the rogue guy after he got shot in the legs?

[kingsage18]

well the pain would have thrown of his focus and aim

[ArmyKido]

That was cool I love conspiracy stories. Good Job. And why does everyone here think they're a professional critic?

[thomasver1993]

nice

[xsjadowolf]

lol so many critics..what are you movie experts?

it was pretty good

[smashsubscriber]

not bad but it was a little fast

[omgh4x0rz]

....that fucking sucked

seriously that was so shitty i don't even know omfg i'm crying that was so bad ugh

[donaldsaiyan]

plot was a bit fast when you killed so many people at the beginning but otherwise nice work

[AIterEgoProductions]

u need 2 shout not just ah u bastard

[ripperbob159]

EPIC

[asiainwootwoot]

Acting was kinda bad

[rerewert2]

......no

[MasterLyon3]

The story needs more characterization and rising action.

[relonation]

the voice work needed work

[Reisgar42]

This honestly gives me a ton of confidence.

[dragonwizerd]

plot went wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too fast. You barely introduced your characters.

[eggthief2]

which is really needed when they're gonna die during the start?

[RazorProductions367]

man machinima what happend to your good stuff dude?

[Fleck05]

does anybody want to start a halo 3 clan all u guys need is a capture card and i will do the rest plz reply back to me.

[EarthDragonNinja]

i rly liked this

[steveincairo]

It was like a bad soap opera.

[UberDrapion]

went too fast, voice acting wasnt very good either

[komanderpoopypants]

Seriously, is this supposed to be a comedy?

[th3c0d3]

i think in the beginning you kind of jumped in a little quick with the story and those P's u got to work on and it didn't seem like that guy was in a little of pain but don't get me wrong i liked it

[manonthemoon516]

Move the mic away from your mouth. There are also too many plot twists. Ok vid.

[SilentReyn]

eh, s'alright 4/5

[jomo3mo]

"you really are as dumb as you sound" wtf is that bullshit

[willsworthy]

Lame

[dravenmccloud]

it ok i like it

[DFeuersturm]

Wow this is pretty retarded. It's like The Departed only for Halo 3.

[Ryanw231]

The Departed was awesome

[TheOriginalimKill]

The voice acting was pretty bad... also i didnt like how most of the characters were the same guy. Too many twists in the plot... over all i'd give it a 3 maybe 2

[figgytheniner]

Fairly good but sometimes a little... weak. "You... bastard..." instead of "OH SHIT OW YOU BASTARD!"

[jomo3mo]

hahah this reminds me of digitalph33rs thing when they talked in mic and the Ps were all loud

[Leroyyand]

that was great to be honest the only work needed is the screaming when injured

[kb84life]

good story but the voice acting is a Digital Ph33r comedy sketch

[yourname1381]

ha ha that was cool

[vennith]

This WAS the overly dramatic sketch from DigitalPh33r's machinema guide

[dartvader117]

nothing special, some iffy voice acting but an okay plot. only 3-star. room for improvement in later installments

[RippleFilmStudios]

"now you can enjoy the show while i go down here and leave you with this handy sniper rifle" lol

[JellymahnMovies]

I feel like it dove into random double crossing way too early. The Voice acting was ok but overall it felt pretty lifeless... Hard work went into this so... good job. But as Digital Ph33r said, "Most machinima is comedy because serious plots never really work".

[thatonedude675]

only if the serious plots were overdone/used before

[slaterandlukeown]

so basically....everyone dies..

not bad plot i guess but  voice acting needs some work

[TheRatMaster]

what....?(not related to any comment)

[tobyman11]

¡bqqɟʇʍƃɯo

[merginoch]

Too er cliche?

I hink thats the word.

Kinda like a regular CSI or sumthing.

[J1N98]

worst graphics

[mastergrab44]

so every video you watch you expect there to be comedy?

[123nick1]

that mother fucker killed everyone

[Kman3395]

it was good but voicing was kinda bad

[neloXangeloXchance]

i really liked it

[b00mehang]

hi funny

[noonehacksme]

pretty good but FUCK MAN! WAY TOO MUCH BASS AT THE END u damaged my woofer

[BshortJLS]

is this a joke, i honestly can't tell

[Hillen]

this was alright....don't really like the plot and really didn't like most of the voice acting

[ExSphereAMV]

so wait....

what just happend?

too many dramatic scenes for a begining of a series =\

[illinifan645]

a little too confusing

[cheattalkprodutions]

contgradutions i like this and if this is your first vid congrats again but 1 thing. when they give big news make them sound surprozed not o ok its big newz

[p8ntballerking007]

is this a comedy? the voices make it seem so :/

[SgtHaven]

good script and over all video. But the voices and some plot points were cheesy.

[fr3dmownsd3stny]

fairly nice. some of the voice acting isn't too great imo. at least the guy with the really low voice. its not too great but the others were fine.

[thechillout08]

It's the same guy doing both voices

[jtgrimsley]

u guys have lots of tiem on ur hands..u upload vids every 15 mins

[Macles007]

It's a company.

Many directors submit their work to Machinima, which gives them a lot of commercial space.

[RippleFilmStudios]

/grr... its machinima.. they basically "sponsor peoples videos" they dont actually make them all..

[macewin]

kinda reminds me of "the departed" great vid.

[Ryanw231]

The Departed with Leonardo Dicaprio in what way

[macewin]

in the way that everyone got shot in the head randomly at the last five or ten minutes of the movie.

[Ryanw231]

it wasnt really random in the departed they had a reason they shot anthony anderson cause he was a cop Leonardo dicaprio got shot cuz he 2 was a cop the other guy was shot cuz he worked for costello and all and i dont have a clue why sullivan got shot care to explain

[macewin]

well i think sullivan got shot cuz mark wahlbergs character found out that he was either working for frank or behind the murder of his boss but i dont see how he could have found out either of those things

[Ryanw231]

well wahlberg was already pissed at him in the movie so he might have just shot him and he was at work when fitzy tossed queenan off the building

[falconsrock18]

the voices and dialogue need to improve but good

[Br0kenEnGliSh]

mouths away from the mic.