B.Yung's piece was better because of its depth, both artist had excellent delivery but it was the imagery that made his peice so memorable, his ability to take obscure instances and paint vivid pictures for an audience is what seperates him from most. In addition his topic was much more specific and less popular among spoken word artist, her poem was centered around women which is great but its been done far too often, this may win at Kps but not at BNV or any national competition, there are
B. yung was a little better but she was good but not first place good lash after lash line in her poem is the same thing b. yung had in his poem on BNV where he said whips and chains...and whips and chains samething almost......
OK first of all dis video is not of B yung. It iz of dis women & her amazing poem so stop commenting on dis video & saying something of some 1 else. It makes not sense. He poem waz beautiful.
People who sayin B yung deserved 1st place ought to really stop because he aint get it!!!! I love him bt he aint win...get ova it! Allow dis grl to live in her glory...Fact is he aint even get 2nd place so evidently wsnt pose to be 1st
@MrMcmicheals i have no reason to hate i accknowledged she is an amazing poet i have an emense ammount of respect for her work but B.yung had the better poem, why would i hate, c'mon man theres no need for hate
@MesiahPoet Have i ever won a slam? I just flew back from London from an Invitation only spoken word festival,I've won every slam ive been apart of(over 20)i shared a stage with Black Ice a month ago and opened up for Shihan in October, im 19 and have been invited everywhere from Upenn Columbia and Spelman, Ive had personal conversations with the likes of Joshua Bennett, Jasmine Mans, Miles Hodges,Carvens Lissaint and more, Im headed to Cali next week ill be sure to ask myself that same question
@MesiahPoet a merriad of reasons that Yung had a stronger piece, not to take credit away from Ms. Simon, if you are serious about spoken word you can message me and i will explain in detail some of the important factors in having a strong spoken word piece, moral of the story, Yung had a better Poem, Janine had a more entertaining piece. It simply lacked the depth neccessary to win at a higher level of competion.
@talent91is Nah I think I'm serious enough to know about "spoken word". There are many factors that contributed to her piece that you and alot of people would not have realized with the naked eye. One cannot simply say another person had the better poem without analyzing every factor both visible and hidden in the world of slam.
is there any place i can find justin allens poem from a few years ago i guess.... i think it was called 3/5 or three fifths however you want to say it. it was amazing either way, i really want to see it again.....
Damn i love this poem, i like almost all the poets from urban word NYC. Im going to start to go to more of there workshops so i can become a better poet, it's always room for growth.
Oh my GOSH..... Janine, this is AMAZING!!! It's hard to believe lil Janine has grown into a lyrical beast; Kudos to you, girlie. When I come home, make sure Candra brings me to see you perform. I loved it.... and congrats on the win!! -Kendra
This yungin vicious wit the spoken word!! Not to mention sexy as ever.... Amazing talent u are
BillionaireMove 1 week ago
she was great i dont care i just started watching these vidoes and you guys are all amazing .. but she is great
Telaylay95 1 month ago
r u guysss insaneeeeeeeeeeeee...she wwas amazinggggggggggg
highnwaisted 2 months ago 3
Go to my channel to listen to the best female rapper u never heard!
Crystisland 1 year ago
she is cold! so young and talented I love that. Keep it up
imadeuluk 1 year ago
B.Yung's piece was better because of its depth, both artist had excellent delivery but it was the imagery that made his peice so memorable, his ability to take obscure instances and paint vivid pictures for an audience is what seperates him from most. In addition his topic was much more specific and less popular among spoken word artist, her poem was centered around women which is great but its been done far too often, this may win at Kps but not at BNV or any national competition, there are
talent91is 1 year ago
B.Yung was cheated!! Clearly his was better. This was worthy of second place but now first
I4Chris 1 year ago
yea others have gave the same message, but ive never heard that message given the way she just gave it....WOW!!
SynQuisUnique 1 year ago
B. yung was a little better but she was good but not first place good lash after lash line in her poem is the same thing b. yung had in his poem on BNV where he said whips and chains...and whips and chains samething almost......
mihowell09 1 year ago
where can you get the lyrics to these poems i love them
truinred 1 year ago
you gave me goosebumps!
derangedLover1015 1 year ago
rhythmic lines on their aging lines.......nice!!
BBALLQU 1 year ago
OK first of all dis video is not of B yung. It iz of dis women & her amazing poem so stop commenting on dis video & saying something of some 1 else. It makes not sense. He poem waz beautiful.
DezyOrtiz610 1 year ago
NAW THIS WAS LITERALLY F"ING AMAZING!! AND YET THIS COMMENT DOES NOT JUSTICE TO HER PIECE!
albertmuci 1 year ago
People who sayin B yung deserved 1st place ought to really stop because he aint get it!!!! I love him bt he aint win...get ova it! Allow dis grl to live in her glory...Fact is he aint even get 2nd place so evidently wsnt pose to be 1st
1babytee1 1 year ago 3
youtube.com/watch?v=JX36F3LjLNg&feature=related
caira94 1 year ago
this is awesome..girl
CSC09LAYDEE 1 year ago
She nice..!
lilmiszaaliyah 1 year ago
What is this poem about
SvD3Y3z 1 year ago
The Judges were probably all women. It still was good though I cant take nothin from babygirl but B. Yung Killed it
Datdude513 1 year ago
@MrMcmicheals i have no reason to hate i accknowledged she is an amazing poet i have an emense ammount of respect for her work but B.yung had the better poem, why would i hate, c'mon man theres no need for hate
talent91is 1 year ago
@talent91is How did B. Yung have the better poem ? Do you even know how to win a slam, have u ever even been in a slam before ?
MesiahPoet 1 year ago
@MesiahPoet Have i ever won a slam? I just flew back from London from an Invitation only spoken word festival,I've won every slam ive been apart of(over 20)i shared a stage with Black Ice a month ago and opened up for Shihan in October, im 19 and have been invited everywhere from Upenn Columbia and Spelman, Ive had personal conversations with the likes of Joshua Bennett, Jasmine Mans, Miles Hodges,Carvens Lissaint and more, Im headed to Cali next week ill be sure to ask myself that same question
talent91is 1 year ago
@talent91is hmmhm yea yea sureee. U still didn't answer the frist part of my question
MesiahPoet 1 year ago
@MesiahPoet a merriad of reasons that Yung had a stronger piece, not to take credit away from Ms. Simon, if you are serious about spoken word you can message me and i will explain in detail some of the important factors in having a strong spoken word piece, moral of the story, Yung had a better Poem, Janine had a more entertaining piece. It simply lacked the depth neccessary to win at a higher level of competion.
talent91is 1 year ago
@talent91is Nah I think I'm serious enough to know about "spoken word". There are many factors that contributed to her piece that you and alot of people would not have realized with the naked eye. One cannot simply say another person had the better poem without analyzing every factor both visible and hidden in the world of slam.
MesiahPoet 1 year ago
this poem is great haters need to stop hating
MrMcmichaels 1 year ago
loved it!!!!
MsKuki21 1 year ago
this is my type of poetry
dellabrook 1 year ago
@dellabrook youtube.com/watch?v=JX36F3LjLNg&feature=related
caira94 1 year ago
b.yung should have won
HighSchoolSensations 1 year ago 6
i love it...
notyouraverageone1 2 years ago
That was crak nd das why she won !
GodzChild89 2 years ago
B.Yung did kill it...he has about 8,000 more views than this...numbers don't lie..this was nice tho
TelevisionMA 2 years ago
is there any place i can find justin allens poem from a few years ago i guess.... i think it was called 3/5 or three fifths however you want to say it. it was amazing either way, i really want to see it again.....
Wyleisha 2 years ago
B yung should have won but she's dope. I'd give her 2nd place.
ReliableLojic 2 years ago 4
Fairly cliche. I appreciate her stage personality, but I agree, I think B Yung should've won.
Zaimah1 2 years ago 4
she's dope no doubt but...1:55 and beyond= mystcism, peep she wins right?
precisethoughts 2 years ago
I love this poem and her personality ;-) b yung did well but I know why she won first place !
steffydub91 2 years ago
it was okay....as usual from her but b yung should of won hands down without any questions...
lexhotone718 2 years ago 3
her poem was very good. but b yung deserved fi9rst place her poem seemed alittle cliche. we have heard that before but still a great job
talent91is 2 years ago 13
@talent91is hating
MrMcmichaels 1 year ago
i love it i love it i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it
lilfizzyboy 2 years ago 4
heyy now (:
irockyoursokxx 2 years ago
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssss
I love it
masaydese 2 years ago 2
...
boom!
I wish I wrote that.
ketekuism 2 years ago
Awesome!!
ChrisPaulWifey3 2 years ago
GET IT GIRL!!! I LOVED UR EMOTION!!
INFAMISE 2 years ago
shes def awesome .. felt her words
weiirdkiidd 2 years ago
she was dope but she had the crowd
b yung should've won that period lyk she was bomb though
blahboom24 2 years ago 2
B yung sure should have one his poem was indescribable!!!
ClAsSoF2o09 2 years ago 2
I agree. B yung was amazing.
vanityrivera 2 years ago 16
i really do love this poem but compared to
b.yung and cynthia cezz this poem was just aiight
i really dont see how it received first although
it was great.
lyricmaverick 2 years ago
I agree
ClAsSoF2o09 2 years ago 2
I'm dope'er! Check me out ya'll! ;o]
p8anut 2 years ago
she got skillz
RoyaltysGirl 2 years ago 2
she's wonderful!
XxARTMASONxX 2 years ago 2
She is so fukin dope!!!
Crazikicks13 2 years ago 2
This is awsome!!
lena40 2 years ago 2
she fukkin killed dat shitt smh
n she fukkin sexy lol
JazZyBabY555 2 years ago 3
ok sis was bad....go gurl
thislifeofmine 2 years ago 2
Damn i love this poem, i like almost all the poets from urban word NYC. Im going to start to go to more of there workshops so i can become a better poet, it's always room for growth.
Crystisland 2 years ago 4
that was off the chain
aceboggie504 2 years ago
she killed it'
sp0ng3b0bg03s 2 years ago
peace!
sobeart 2 years ago
SON...I'm pretty speechless!
WOW
gracefullybeautiful1 2 years ago
my sistah is amazing inside and out... THE DOPEST!
HipHopMonaLisa 2 years ago
you can see the whipped women of our past lash.. after lash.. after lash.. after lash
that shit was sick!
Wyleisha 2 years ago 4
This Girls Like Fire, damn
SLICKPOET 2 years ago
whoa
truemusicphyne 2 years ago
she def deserve the number one title she was hawt
roudyruf 2 years ago 2
wow.
nianicole91 2 years ago
Oh my GOSH..... Janine, this is AMAZING!!! It's hard to believe lil Janine has grown into a lyrical beast; Kudos to you, girlie. When I come home, make sure Candra brings me to see you perform. I loved it.... and congrats on the win!! -Kendra
Nyketa311 2 years ago
shes tuffff!!...
got odde goose bumps
just listening to this.
sashalicious1 2 years ago
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shut up zak
djeter58 2 years ago
GO JANINE!! she's a beautiful poet and person.
jaybird2893 2 years ago
i was there.. she ripped it!
shanabana620 2 years ago