Very cool stuff, especially the dance at the end. A couple of notes, Josh. Make the wound on the army guy's left arm tighter. It wouldn't bruise that quickly. So keep to a tighter black hole with a little bit of blood. Also let the guy running away have some sort of threat. He could fire back? Or have an escape point much nearer. Just something that let's the audience think he might get away. Minor quibbles, well done.
Why is he wearing the Cpt Price hat? He himself is the only one badass enough to wear it.
AnonimusGam3r 2 months ago
@AnonimusGam3r You should meet my Grandma.
trettfilms 2 months ago 2
this is great will well done :)
jswman1 2 months ago 3
I don't understand that those effects are horrible. I think they were great. Keep them coming dude, nice job ;)
PokeWorks 3 months ago
Sooo nice
Moosawy95 3 months ago
I can't get the Vet and the noob commercial right before the start of the video... greatest commercial of all time
RamboJon3s 3 months ago
Try to do some motion tracking. But nice short I really enjoyed it : D
PokeWorks 3 months ago
stupid american kids.
misekmoj 3 months ago
@misekmoj I'm British numnuts.
trettfilms 3 months ago 10
Lol
MrLoullers 3 months ago
@trettfilms right, but if a combat is irrealistic, for me (and this is just my opinion) is not fun, that's all. Nice work anyway.
leandor01 3 months ago
This is a really good video!
Christiethelegend 4 months ago
wow great work
pcgamerguy1234 4 months ago
Spectacular cinematography! This has a very professional feel to it; excellent job! Awesome location, by the way.
amppro5 5 months ago
shoot the unarmed guy? Why :(
Kamshak1337 5 months ago
amazingz
JamesMichaelBillings 5 months ago
Brilliant, well done mate
d2axe7 5 months ago
Very cool stuff, especially the dance at the end. A couple of notes, Josh. Make the wound on the army guy's left arm tighter. It wouldn't bruise that quickly. So keep to a tighter black hole with a little bit of blood. Also let the guy running away have some sort of threat. He could fire back? Or have an escape point much nearer. Just something that let's the audience think he might get away. Minor quibbles, well done.
rick0deckard 5 months ago
well done Josh and to the Crew
andrsdtz 5 months ago
@andrsdtz cheers :)
trettfilms 5 months ago
fantastic josh! love the end bit
AmbroseProductions 5 months ago
Very well done! Dialogue and wind noise could be worked on, but those action scenes more than made up for that! This was fuggin awesome!
ZychBoyFilms 5 months ago
2:28 that terrorist that gets stapped is badass :> Great short
MrGibbsOfficial 5 months ago
@MrGibbsOfficial badass? LOL!
tedtf2 5 months ago
@tedtf2 Funny Ted! :>
MrGibbsOfficial 5 months ago
@MrGibbsOfficial <3
tedtf2 5 months ago
Great job guys
FilmmakerMichael 5 months ago
Pretty good. Great action sequences.
MarkOneFilms 5 months ago
Great short film! :D Where did you get the guns from?
CharlieMcGoldrick 5 months ago
Awsome! You should think about making a War film?
willkey987 5 months ago
Pretty Good.
JakFive 5 months ago
Overall, very good.
The wind noise could have been substituted with another sound because that was quite annoying. And the blur effect wasn't really to my taste.
Alas, it is a shortfilm only and it was a good one.
MrLoullers 5 months ago
most satisfactory, Mr. Trett
chlorophylfactor 5 months ago