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  • is this a joke

  • nice i really like it!,,,i dont know if you want to do it but you could record a variation of those chords or whatever you want on guitar,,and have it play as rhythm to the keyboard ( perhaps fast strumming,,,idk) its up to u,,,i like it though, it flows

  • Hey Man

    I don't completely understand youre comment, but ya, go for it!

  • You could always throw in some extra instrumentals at that point, to make it less similar, or drop it a full octave down offcourse...

    But in general: to me it resembles songs like the "Hurt" cover by Johnny Cash, and that's one of my favourites so I shouldn't change that much if I were you...

  • Hey Rafe! Yeah I can hear you've improved a lot man! Though I still think your voice could be less insecure and more from the stomach (try to loosen that up buddy) ;)

    However: you're definitely an extremely talented songwriter! And I think this chorus is fine the way it is.

  • it dosnt matter if its not finished its awsome

  • like it! very catchy! wanna hear more of it!!!

  • hey there buddie.

  • Hi Melissa!

  • rafe, I'm liking this new one!

    keep pumping them out!

    db

  • Thanks dave!

  • Your mind doesn't look very healthy. You should get it checked out. :P

    It's sounding good!

  • Ha, ok thanks for the advice, I'll have to go to the doctor, and thanks!

  • i write all my songs late at night lol

    thats when the creative juices flow best.

  • ya, so true!

  • awesome.

  • Thanks Brit!

  • Whoa! The name is awesome! :D

  • ha, thanks! Well I didn't want to call it "my drug" cause I thought it's been done too many times

  • This is sounding really good Rafe.

    Different to what you usually do.

    I like it. =]

  • Thanks!

  • It sounds good Rafe!

    I thought of Neil Young right away.

    The chorus is a bit similar, but you speed up the tempo, so it's not bad at all.

    Can't wait to hear more of it!

    -Ken

  • Thanks so much Ken!

    I'm a bit excited... we're night owls I guess lol. 4:30

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