nice i really like it!,,,i dont know if you want to do it but you could record a variation of those chords or whatever you want on guitar,,and have it play as rhythm to the keyboard ( perhaps fast strumming,,,idk) its up to u,,,i like it though, it flows
You could always throw in some extra instrumentals at that point, to make it less similar, or drop it a full octave down offcourse...
But in general: to me it resembles songs like the "Hurt" cover by Johnny Cash, and that's one of my favourites so I shouldn't change that much if I were you...
Hey Rafe! Yeah I can hear you've improved a lot man! Though I still think your voice could be less insecure and more from the stomach (try to loosen that up buddy) ;)
However: you're definitely an extremely talented songwriter! And I think this chorus is fine the way it is.
is this a joke
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nice i really like it!,,,i dont know if you want to do it but you could record a variation of those chords or whatever you want on guitar,,and have it play as rhythm to the keyboard ( perhaps fast strumming,,,idk) its up to u,,,i like it though, it flows
lifedelay 2 years ago
Hey Man
I don't completely understand youre comment, but ya, go for it!
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
You could always throw in some extra instrumentals at that point, to make it less similar, or drop it a full octave down offcourse...
But in general: to me it resembles songs like the "Hurt" cover by Johnny Cash, and that's one of my favourites so I shouldn't change that much if I were you...
Dadagnos 2 years ago
Hey Rafe! Yeah I can hear you've improved a lot man! Though I still think your voice could be less insecure and more from the stomach (try to loosen that up buddy) ;)
However: you're definitely an extremely talented songwriter! And I think this chorus is fine the way it is.
Dadagnos 2 years ago
it dosnt matter if its not finished its awsome
remixtaco 2 years ago
like it! very catchy! wanna hear more of it!!!
alliepi23 2 years ago
hey there buddie.
PrincessTinkerbells 2 years ago
Hi Melissa!
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
rafe, I'm liking this new one!
keep pumping them out!
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daveborins 2 years ago
Thanks dave!
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
Your mind doesn't look very healthy. You should get it checked out. :P
It's sounding good!
IzzaTHEgreat 2 years ago
Ha, ok thanks for the advice, I'll have to go to the doctor, and thanks!
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
i write all my songs late at night lol
thats when the creative juices flow best.
staceystars91 2 years ago
ya, so true!
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
awesome.
brittleeperkins 2 years ago
Thanks Brit!
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
Whoa! The name is awesome! :D
cutegirlkami96 2 years ago
ha, thanks! Well I didn't want to call it "my drug" cause I thought it's been done too many times
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
This is sounding really good Rafe.
Different to what you usually do.
I like it. =]
UzedChemicalzz 2 years ago
Thanks!
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago
It sounds good Rafe!
I thought of Neil Young right away.
The chorus is a bit similar, but you speed up the tempo, so it's not bad at all.
Can't wait to hear more of it!
-Ken
kwk1 2 years ago
Thanks so much Ken!
I'm a bit excited... we're night owls I guess lol. 4:30
trickofdisaster2 2 years ago