MAKE AN ALBUM or I will send my flying monkeys upon you. They will tickle you until you agree to make a record deal and then I will buy it and listen to it and be happy forever.
Hey man, Don't take this the wrong way as its a good song, but I think it could be better, with some more dynamic vocals. I just felt there parts in the song that dragged a little, and my mind sort of expected the vocals to pop in higher (hard to explain). Or possible a key change 2/3rds through the song and back down?
Keep up the good work man, I have watched a few of your vids, and its all good! And this is constructive crit, not "Your gay get off!". Cheers. Sorry if this posted twice...
Hey man, Don't take this the wrong way as its a good song, but I think it could be better, with some more dynamic vocals. I just felt there parts in the song that dragged a little, and my mind sort of expected the vocals to pop in higher (hard to explain). Or possible a key change 2/3rds through the song and back down?
Keep up the good work man, I have watched a few of your vids, and its all good! And this is constructive crit, not "Your gay get off!". Cheers.
Thanks so much for saying that. My album? Come on, be serious. I will wait till I have thousands of subscribers and millions of views for that. As of now only a select few, like yourself, get to see me. I have a few songs recorded, but nothing great. I would let everyone know if I were to record something seriously.
That is a very interesting question. What makes you ask that? My mother was born in Deutschland and moved to Canada at 18, my dad is born and raised in Newfoundland.
oh man i remember this song! It's better now that it's longer. For some reason... I wanted to hear some electric guitars at some points... and some leads... but I love the song !
Yes! Laurent thanks for saying that. Very few have heard it before. I really, really need to make a fully produced tune and video. Thanks for making my morning.
Thank Bill. I think most people hadn't as I had recorded it in the first few weeks on youTube. It is rare to go back into the archives I have found. Some of my oldest tunes have almost no comments.
Hey Pete! Glad to see, that you posted a new (old) one! I have to say that I really like it! I´m still into your two latest compositions, but this one really has potential, too! Percussions/Drums would perfectly fit on this one. A contrabass would also punctuate the dramatic bridge/chorus. Only thoughts. As I´m writing this, I´m listening to it and it´s getting better and better. Need to give it a few more listenings to fully experience this song! Great Pete! Cheerz, Julian
Hey Julian. I thought I had replied to your comment? Perhaps it isn't showing up. Thanks so much for listening so intently and telling me how much you like it. That just warms my heart.
That is so kind of you Annie. As you should be able to tell monaghangolf is my brother, so he has to say stuff like that. Hearing it from a youTube superstar like you is different. Thanks again.
Very catchy tune man, and heartfelt... 5*!!
Thanks for adding me to your friends list, I hope to see more stuff from you in the future!
DudeDiggler01 4 years ago
Thanks dude. I appreciate the kind comments on my tunes. I am working on something new and it should be out before Xmas. Stay tuned.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Nice! I've been working on a lil' something too... still in the early stages, but it sounds cool to me. I'll send ya a PM when I get it posted.
DudeDiggler01 4 years ago
heeh ...very nice man:) ...i like you voice and you beaityfule songs
Hogsmeade202 4 years ago
so I always no understand but i love always your song! this is very "cool" road V2! congratulation! :D
kabosski 4 years ago
Hey that is alright. I don't understand myself sometimes. Thanks so much for watching. Take care.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Coooooool.
BeforeMonday 4 years ago
Thanks
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
I mean that man. This song freakin rocks dude.
BeforeMonday 4 years ago
MAKE AN ALBUM or I will send my flying monkeys upon you. They will tickle you until you agree to make a record deal and then I will buy it and listen to it and be happy forever.
yogal17 4 years ago
Wow! I will think about it. I think I have to wait till I get 1000 subscribers before I can do that. How about just some mp3s for you alone?
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
I like mp3s and am in desperate need of car music (goin to college 3 hours away). That way I can work on harmonizing!
yogal17 4 years ago
Hey man, Don't take this the wrong way but I really liked this song.
:P
hartmanpeter 4 years ago
Oh man, I hoped your wouldn't! Damn!
Thanks Peter.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
nice one pete you write some great tunes man chris:)
tankman7550 4 years ago
Thanks Chris. That is very kind of you to say.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
really good, pete! u should make a cd
nirvanagurl1600 4 years ago
Wow, thanks for saying that. I am so happy you like my tune.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Well rounded character's don't come from nowhere Pete. Thanx again, very nice!
Alishamoly 4 years ago
Thanks! What does that mean?
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
great1 ;-)
xa1ne 4 years ago
Thanks!
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Thanks!
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Hey man, Don't take this the wrong way as its a good song, but I think it could be better, with some more dynamic vocals. I just felt there parts in the song that dragged a little, and my mind sort of expected the vocals to pop in higher (hard to explain). Or possible a key change 2/3rds through the song and back down?
Keep up the good work man, I have watched a few of your vids, and its all good! And this is constructive crit, not "Your gay get off!". Cheers. Sorry if this posted twice...
Backofthekop 4 years ago
I don't mind double comments. I love to see the numbers grow. How did you find me?
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
I came across you a while back just browsing, and watched a few of your vids, and enjoyed them.
Backofthekop 4 years ago
Hey man, Don't take this the wrong way as its a good song, but I think it could be better, with some more dynamic vocals. I just felt there parts in the song that dragged a little, and my mind sort of expected the vocals to pop in higher (hard to explain). Or possible a key change 2/3rds through the song and back down?
Keep up the good work man, I have watched a few of your vids, and its all good! And this is constructive crit, not "Your gay get off!". Cheers.
Backofthekop 4 years ago
I love all your music its great!
OMGitsAlix 4 years ago
Thanks Alix. I am glad you like it.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
hey pete!!! haha as usual, awesome song, loving the new tunes. when's ur album comin out maan? haha
cheerio,m,sheep(lordewan10)
lordewan10 4 years ago
Thanks so much for saying that. My album? Come on, be serious. I will wait till I have thousands of subscribers and millions of views for that. As of now only a select few, like yourself, get to see me. I have a few songs recorded, but nothing great. I would let everyone know if I were to record something seriously.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
We Know your Canadian and there's nuthin' wrong wi' that, but where are your parents families from? Peace man!
Alishamoly 4 years ago
That is a very interesting question. What makes you ask that? My mother was born in Deutschland and moved to Canada at 18, my dad is born and raised in Newfoundland.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Glad you did this one again Pete it's a great song
Rob
Ottawarocket 4 years ago
Thanks for saying that Rocket. I see you are able to post comments again.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Nice, much better than the original one
chunjae23 4 years ago
Thanks for saying that. I think it is better because the end isn't cut off!
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
your gonna make it big and then at one of your shows im gonna be the guy that says i told you you were gonna make it big :P another nice tune :)
gillies1991 4 years ago
I hope you are right. Thanks for saying that. I really appreciate it.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
oh man i remember this song! It's better now that it's longer. For some reason... I wanted to hear some electric guitars at some points... and some leads... but I love the song !
flammingcarrot 4 years ago
Yes! Laurent thanks for saying that. Very few have heard it before. I really, really need to make a fully produced tune and video. Thanks for making my morning.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
another good one man
theres no end
great videos keep it up
austindp2343 4 years ago
Thanks Austin. I have written many, many tunes over the last 10 years. Needless to say, I have a stockpile.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Great tune Dude!
homahonen 4 years ago
Thanks for saying that. I am glad you liked it.
Peace, Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
That's a great song. I'm glad you re-did it. Keep it up.
hurtstone 4 years ago
Yeah!! I am glad you like it. And I am glad you commented on it too.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
good one
jcpowe101 4 years ago
Thanks a lot. I like it.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Great video
prattzila 4 years ago
Thanks!
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Nice ! Thanx. Peace n love!
Alishamoly 4 years ago
Hey, thanks so much for saying that.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
cool...keep it up.
moneomone 4 years ago
Thanks. I will. Stay tuned for more.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Absoultly Awsome Pete.. I love your style and what you put into all you do,,
Peace Bro.
Buster
blprine 4 years ago
Thanks Buster! That is awesome for you to say. I appreciate your input. Thanks for watching man.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
sweet tune Pete. Would make for a neat music video..,
pattygee1111 4 years ago
Thanks Patty. I need to make a video one of these days. I love story videos, and this one would fit.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
i really like it nice song and i hadnt heard it before!
Billduffy 4 years ago
Thank Bill. I think most people hadn't as I had recorded it in the first few weeks on youTube. It is rare to go back into the archives I have found. Some of my oldest tunes have almost no comments.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Hey Pete! Glad to see, that you posted a new (old) one! I have to say that I really like it! I´m still into your two latest compositions, but this one really has potential, too! Percussions/Drums would perfectly fit on this one. A contrabass would also punctuate the dramatic bridge/chorus. Only thoughts. As I´m writing this, I´m listening to it and it´s getting better and better. Need to give it a few more listenings to fully experience this song! Great Pete! Cheerz, Julian
PetrucciFever 4 years ago
Hey Julian. I thought I had replied to your comment? Perhaps it isn't showing up. Thanks so much for listening so intently and telling me how much you like it. That just warms my heart.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
I like your trendy hat...it all reminds me of the 'grapes of Wrath' for some reason..keep up the good work!
PS - horsehead bookends make me hot.
totallytacoma 4 years ago
Weirdo!! I like grapes. Wrath, not so much.
Horse heads
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
We couldn't forget about you Pete~ Love your music, and I agree with monaghangolf ~ Yes, Make a CD!
AnnieCanada 4 years ago
That is so kind of you Annie. As you should be able to tell monaghangolf is my brother, so he has to say stuff like that. Hearing it from a youTube superstar like you is different. Thanks again.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Another fantastic song! I am serious when I say you should try recording your tunes. I would love to buy some of your MP3s. Peace and Love Bro!
monaghangolf 4 years ago
Thanks bro. You have to say that. I appreciate it though. Why did you take down the video of Shawne?
Love you.
Peace and love,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
awesome..^^
serega91 4 years ago
Thanks!
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Nothing but love for you!I liked it a lot.
SIdyingDE 4 years ago
Hey Hunter, I am happy to hear people enjoy my tunes. I am working on a new one, but just wanted to post something.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
love it... I dream :)
MissHolloway 4 years ago
Thanks Naomi. I am glad you liked it.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Awsome Pete... nice acoustic down there :-)
ParadiseEarth1 4 years ago
Thanks. Yes, the basement. Not the best, but I can wail down there all I like without bothering anyone.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
I like this one
Dre
Drecoolio 4 years ago
Thanks bro. Love you.
Peace and love,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
likeed it keep it up
dreaminglad 4 years ago
Thanks so much. I will keep it up even if no one was listening.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Hey! Pete, nice song & you wrote this yourself "great" Let me be the first to give you 5*. Chantelle xxx
getmered 4 years ago
Thanks for the 5 stars Chantelle. You are very talented at such a young age. I am glad you liked it.
Take care.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago
Good job man.
seeksthetruth7 4 years ago
Thanks for saying that.
Peace,
Pete
smokewilliams 4 years ago