iLiked this story! Y n almost evry story, Dustin always has a child tht he has 2 change & always duznt kno how?! LOL. Tht cracks me ^. iLove the song icecream by B5 @ the end! Tht songs AMAZING!
OMG girl you used my song..I had to read this twice cuhz I was too busy singing the song.."Don't think about the time we had ttry to make things right, Don't think about the time when we first kissed you said we're moving way too fast." DAYUM thats my song and Proise in the dark lol..anyways..poor Carnell I feel so bad for him and KElly and Whitney..girl this is mad good and deep lol at Patrick: Oh sorry I couldn't see her your big head was blocking her haha..Can't wait for the next one 5*
i know its always stuck in my head cuhz im always listenin to it lol..thats the jam..we were playin it on the ukulele last night at the beach while my cousin sang it and lol i know i can't help but leave long comments
lol here we go again havin convos on video comment lol..yeah i was playin the ukulele last night..thats one thing i LOVE to do if i aint got a ukulele then ill just be singing along with my ipod lol
omg tht was good luved it patrick is funny the easter bunny is real wow haha i hope tht carnell an kelly will b ok i think dustin is falling 4 allisha i cant wait 4 the nxt 1 so much is happenin
iLiked this story! Y n almost evry story, Dustin always has a child tht he has 2 change & always duznt kno how?! LOL. Tht cracks me ^. iLove the song icecream by B5 @ the end! Tht songs AMAZING!
Smilyfaceshay 1 year ago
when are you gonna post chapter 10 i love this story
keairra2009 2 years ago
totally good story
xoxoqnh 2 years ago
aww thanx hon
myzippy2 2 years ago
loved it cnt wait to read part 10+
mswade1995 2 years ago
ur welcome
flygirls64 2 years ago
loved it
flygirls64 2 years ago
That's was so beautiful...YOU USED MY IDEA!!!
Patrickownz4life 2 years ago
Yes i did and what a beautiful idea it was
myzippy2 2 years ago
I mean at 7:22 to the end
PrincessStella98 2 years ago
what song is that at the end?
PrincessStella98 2 years ago
OMG girl you used my song..I had to read this twice cuhz I was too busy singing the song.."Don't think about the time we had ttry to make things right, Don't think about the time when we first kissed you said we're moving way too fast." DAYUM thats my song and Proise in the dark lol..anyways..poor Carnell I feel so bad for him and KElly and Whitney..girl this is mad good and deep lol at Patrick: Oh sorry I couldn't see her your big head was blocking her haha..Can't wait for the next one 5*
Ulukau808 2 years ago 2
i though you'd like that song
ive had it stuck in my head for a few weeks
lol ur comments r gettin longer and longer just like mine
myzippy2 2 years ago
i know its always stuck in my head cuhz im always listenin to it lol..thats the jam..we were playin it on the ukulele last night at the beach while my cousin sang it and lol i know i can't help but leave long comments
Ulukau808 2 years ago
im so jealous!!!
I would have loved that
I wanna play the ukelele
myzippy2 2 years ago
lol here we go again havin convos on video comment lol..yeah i was playin the ukulele last night..thats one thing i LOVE to do if i aint got a ukulele then ill just be singing along with my ipod lol
Ulukau808 2 years ago
lol i used to that with my drum set but my mom got tired of hearing me so she ade it dissappear
then i picked up the guitar
the strings didnt like me playing with them so they broke
then I started piano and lets just say it ran away before I finished learning how to play happy birthday
instruments dont like me
myzippy2 2 years ago
lol that is mad hillarious..yeah i only play the piano and the ukulele
Ulukau808 2 years ago
the instument I play now is th best no one can blow the KAZOO better than me lol
myzippy2 2 years ago
oh cool..lol
Ulukau808 2 years ago
love it poor kelly whitney and carnell !
popoil9663 2 years ago 2
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what is the name of the second song
addonica 2 years ago 2
promise in the dark by keri hilson
myzippy2 2 years ago
loved it 5*
jackson2041 2 years ago 2
ok
thats strange & wierd b-cause carnell is my fav
but REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYY good story!!!
keep going^^
AllischaGermanyb5lov 2 years ago
omg tht was good luved it patrick is funny the easter bunny is real wow haha i hope tht carnell an kelly will b ok i think dustin is falling 4 allisha i cant wait 4 the nxt 1 so much is happenin
TheChichinboo 2 years ago
the story is getting reallY Good keeP up the work
cocorib5babygirl 2 years ago